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Alterations by NoChaser Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Feature

I am a sucker for "Brian in Peril" stories and this is one of the best I've read. The author does a great job dissecting Brian's complex mind. Phenomenal writing, interesting premise, and a satisfying ending. Can't ask for much more! -charming1

    

After Justin leaves for New York, the remaining members of the Liberty Avenue family go about their everyday lives, never suspecting that something serious is happening to Brian. When the realization hits, they find that everyone's lives are irrevocably altered.


Categories: QAF US, Admin Pick
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Debbie, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, Anti-Michael, M/M, Mental Health Issues, Out of Character, Post-series, Real Life Issues
Genres: Angst, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73327 Read Count: 121010
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2016 Updated: Sep 15, 2016
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 29: What have you done today to make you feel proud?

I know I have reviewed this story...somewhere...before, but I couldn't resist doing so again.

I was always haunted by that line, "...but I don't remember anymore" and Brian's face as he said it. This story brings so much to what could have been.

I love the directiion the author took and this remains one of my favorites of all time!

Dashed Hopes by YumYumPM Rated: M starhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

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Five years have passed.  Justin's turned 27, Brian just going on 39. What if Justin wasn’t the success he’d hoped to be in New York? What will he find when he returns home destitute, his hopes dashed? Has Michael managed to realize his fondest dream?  Can Brian and Justin overcome the mistakes made during the intervening years?

Note:  Though this may seem like a Brian/Michael pairing, it is not.  Michael is not nice and does hurt at least two characters.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Christmas, M/M
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16029 Read Count: 3993
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2016 Updated: May 09, 2016
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 14, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wtf?

Summary:

Brian and Justin want to raise their family without help.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Post-series
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Canon, Drama, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Other, Melanie/Lindsay, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62336 Read Count: 287582
[Report This] Published: Aug 01, 2016 Updated: Aug 13, 2016
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Nov 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This was one of my absolute favorites! I love me some Lindsay/Mikey hate & you do it up right!!!

Please! Do it again!!! :)

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't know how many times I've read this thing, but I love the whole series! I could probably quote it verbatim, but it recently occurred to me that instead of WALAAS, it should be called 'The Squeal of the Weasel', you know...to go along with the theme! 😄

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Nov 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love how you just cut thru all the shit! Love seeing Lindsay and Michael get taken down! Been waiting for this for years...thanks! :)

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Ok, aside from doing a double take every time a U.S.QAF character uses a British word or phrase (whilst) Hahaha :) this is the absolute "bestest" Lindsay/Mikey smack down fic I have ever read!!! 

I usually wait until the work is complete before starting, but since I was in a smack down mood, you update daily, and I'm such a whore for a long fic, I went ahead and started reading hoping by the time I got to the end of what I'd loaded on my Kindle it would be done. Now I don't want it to end!

Love it! Love it! Love it!



Author's Response:

Hi nice to have a new reviewer!

I'm from good ole Blighty and have to pop a phrase or word in there when I can!

I'm so glad you're liking it, this is only my second fic, the first one was Whispers are as Loud as a Shout, which this is the sequel to...shameless plug...so the praise is filling my pride coffers!

More smacking down to come...I loathe Michael and Lindsay with a passion, with the latter from the first episode!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Best chapter title EVAH!!! I loathed Lindsay's character too and love seeing her WASPY ass get her comeupance almost more than I love seeing Mikey's whiney ass get his!


In response to what you replied from my earlier post, I loathed Lindsay from the first episode as well...almost from the first scene. All that Peter & Wendy shit just made me want to hurl. She SO wanted in his pants. And she had just given birth!!! What a HO!


I always liked Melanie & thought she and Brian had a mutal respect for one another so I really like anti-Lindsay stories with a likeable Melanie.


I am sooooo in love with this story & the fact that you update daily!


Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kelly.

There's more getting for the gruesome twosome to come...heeheehee.

Yeah she makes me blench but not as much as Michael who consistently lied and puppy-dog-eyed his way through the series, ugh and shudder.  And that custody battle...seethe!  Especially when she went for 'martyrdom' in the hospital.  And another thing...on a roll now...with their wedding Brian wanted to stay and she shoves him on the airplane!  Off to type some more anti-Lindsay and Michael!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

"Open a can of, bitch please?" Love it!

Also, Lindsay bringing all her wrath down! Ha fucking ha! And what power? I love seeing her try to WASP her way out of an embarrassing situation. She just ends up looking more ignorant and like the classy wannabe that she is.

Oooh...I'd just love a scene where they all form a line just to smack the shit out of her...one.by.one.!!!

Keep posting girlfriend!



Author's Response:

I did enjoy that line it has to be said, something that Nichelle would definitely say.

I shall keep posting...C43 being tip-tapped out, hope to post tomorrow.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Hahaha! Michael buying his own toys! From his mother!!! Justice prevails! 



Author's Response:

Almost prevails...there's more to come on that!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Just curious...have you abandoned this story? I hope not...it was always my happy place at the end of the day.



Author's Response:

Nope, just had a bit of a break...for Christmas...C55 is being posted in about 10 minutes xx

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Yay!!! It's back!!!!

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Brietling? Is this a British thing or am I just that old and don't get it?



Author's Response:

No this is a MissMerlot thing.  Basically, Zee did something so sexually amazing to Faal that he bought her a Brietling watch in gratitude, so any time she says that to him, he knows he's in for a good time.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ah, gotcha...Thanks for clearing that up. Must have missed the reference somewhere.

Summary:

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What if Justin didn't run off to New York after Brian's loft got burgled? What happens when he decides to face the situation like an adult? Join us on the journey to find out.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 500k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Family, Getting Back Together, Jealousy, Oral Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Slow Burn, Toppy Justin, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/David, Ted/Ben
Series: Tricky Business
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 780683 Read Count: 139677
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 10, 2022
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th

I'm with jazzepoet...way too slow on the romance front for me; however, I must commend the authors as I don't think I've ever read a fic in this fandom where spelling, grammar, and punctuation were as nigh on perfect! Even the proper use of blonde/blond, brunette/brunet. Now if we could just refrain from using bicep rather than the proper biceps. And yes, I know bicep is considered a derivative according to the dictionary, but really, biceps is the proper terminology.
I also know I'm probably beating a dead horse and I know it's been stated that the British-isms add color/character to the story, but honestly, as an American reader it just yanks me right out of the U.S. QAF headspace every time I see a "whilst", "anyroad", "cuppa", etc. That being said...I'm not the owner of the story and you must proceed however you see fit, but it is disconcerting to say the least.

Over all it's an entertaining story! 😎

Author's Response:

Thank you for your exhaustive review. We are terribly chuffed that you are enjoying our story and appreciate our grammar. :) We shall indeed proceed as we were. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

Hmmm...was just rereading the part about not getting any worse than Dubya. Guess we all know now just how much worse it can get! 😆



Author's Response:

I (Karynn) had to scan this chapter to remember Vic's comment about Dubya. Vic probably would have expired on the spot if he'd known how much worse it actually would get.

We're thrilled that you're enjoying our story enough to reread parts of it.

Happy New Year!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st

Operation twat retrieval! 😄 Love it!



Author's Response:

Brian is very clever with naming this campaign. :) Thank you for commenting. :)

~ KaBrynn

Summary:

Vegas, booze and our boys. Justin graduates Med school and goes with Daphne who is getting married, before they leave the country for their new jobs.

 

Lorie as always thank you for being not just my beta but a great sounding board.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Claire Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Joan Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Sam Auerbach, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Cancer, Out of Character, Wedding
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake, Vic/Rodney
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96684 Read Count: 328809
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2017 Updated: Mar 12, 2017
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh! I am so loving this! I live for anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay stories and nobody does it better!

I keep telling myself I'll never start reading another WIP because I just can't wait for the updates, but this is so awesome!

Keep it coming!

Summary:

This is a PB from the lovely Deb Tanner.  

Brian wins a month long sea cruise...so Michael decides to move their relationship from PG to Rated R.  But things get in Michael's way...

Couldn't do this without my wonderful betas...The Muskababes!

Disclaimer:  I own nothing.  The copyright is owned by Cowlip and Showtiime.  No infringement is intended whatsoever.

***COMPLETED*** ENJOY!


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Rodney, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, Family, Friendship, Post-series, Rimming, Vulnerable Brian
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Humor, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Other, Other Cast Pairing, Ted/Blake, Vic/Rodney
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279921 Read Count: 633485
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2017 Updated: Oct 18, 2017
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Oct 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Dinner

Wow! Lindsay has been gone two years and Melanie is still pregnant! Damn! Brian has some super sperm! Although if I was Melanie, his sperm would never 'do the backstroke up my fallopian tubes' again! Lol...loving this story though. You are the undisputed queen of the Mikey/Lindsay smack down!!!

Love it!!!

 

Summary:

 

This is a story about how a love of food and dog bring certain members of the Avenue to the loves of their lives.

Once again, love and thanks to our wonderful betas...Kathy, Bea and Nichelle xxx

Much love and kudos for the wonderful banner goes to Anja Witt xxx

I own nothing...no copyright infrignement is intended whatsoever.

 

***NOW COMPLETE***


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brandon, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Justin Taylor, Kiki, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 10k+ Word Count
Genres: Humor, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Ben, Brian/Justin, Brian/Lindsay, Emmett/Drew, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126635 Read Count: 171634
[Report This] Published: Oct 23, 2017 Updated: Dec 24, 2017
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Plans are Set in Motion...and there's a Switcheroo

Ok admittedly, I haven't read all of your stories yet, but if you haven't already, I am dying for you to write a scene where Michael gets out of someone's car and slams the door, but, unbeknownst to him, a mechanism has been triggered (preferably by Brian) to make the door fly back and nail him in the nuts! I would pay good money for that to happen!

Summary:

Justin and Brian have just announced their pregnancy to the family, much to the joy of many, and the aggravation of a few. Celebrate their ups and downs, their joys and sorrows and surprises, as they make their way through the last five months of pregnancy and their first days of being fathers.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Tucker
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Drabble, Established Relationship, Family, Fluff, Friendship, M/M, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Out of Character, Post-series, Raw Sex, Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Canon, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: Sunbeam Chronicles
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 402134 Read Count: 264910
[Report This] Published: Jan 02, 2018 Updated: Mar 22, 2020
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 47: February 14

I don't usually submit reviews unless I'm particularly thrilled with a story and I don't ever read WIPs unless I'm guaranteed consistent and frequent updates. That being said, I am thoroughly enjoying this story and love all the Mikey/Lindsay smack downs...can't stand those two varmints!

Keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 68: March 7

The hustler's name on the show was actually Blake (strange enough since Ted's Blake had already been introduced in the first season), but as has been stated many times...Cowlip never really let little details get in the way! Lol!

Really no biggie and has no bearing at all on your story; just one of those little quirky things that stuck in my noggin. 😄

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: May 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 86: March 22 (Part Four)

Damn! #Truth!

This is the reason I love anti-Michael/Lindsay stories...love to see them get their comeuppance! I could devour chapter upon chapter of the stuff! You go girlfriend!

Summary:

When Ted and Blake make some impulsive decisions, which of their friends will stand beside them?

****NOW COMPLETE!!!!****


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Established Relationship, Family, Friendship, Language, M/M, Post-series, Raw Sex, Real Life Issues, Tearjerker
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Ted/Blake
Series: Bittersweet Universe
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30341 Read Count: 22810
[Report This] Published: Mar 07, 2018 Updated: Apr 05, 2018
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Victorious

*Baby primate*

I snorted coffee from my nose...thanks! 😄



Author's Response:

 

Kellydeer,

Always loved when Justin threw himself at Brian and he smiled and caught him, so sweet.

Who wouldn't want to hang onto that body.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Summary:

What if Brian agreed to the unthinkable and offered to start a family with Justin . . . and then it all went to hell? Set post series. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Original Character, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Family, M/M, Post-series
Genres: Alternate Universe, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Justin/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124538 Read Count: 48007
[Report This] Published: Sep 21, 2018 Updated: Feb 28, 2019
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Glad You’re Back, Sparky

..."bleached-out escapee from the FoxNews white-supremacist-anchor-woman-line-up look"! Lol!

 

EPIC BURN on Fox!!!

Summary:

It has been two years since The Avenue was liberated from Michael and Lindsay, but now they are coming back and bringing enemies and friends with them. Brian, Justin, The Family and The Avenue are determined to right a wrong, save an innocent and protect their Duchess. But can they do it and if so what will the cost to Brian and Justin be?

 

Disclaimer: we own nothing, no copyright infringement is intended whatsoever.

 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brandon, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Kiki, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Beads, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bondage, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, Celebratory Fuck, Dirty Talk, Established Relationship, Family, Fluff, Friendship, Hatred, Masturbation , Michael/Other, Minor Violence, Orgasm Delay/Denial, Raw Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Sex Toys, Spanking, Toppy Justin, Vulnerable Brian, Vulnerable Justin
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Other
Series: Food of Love
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130916 Read Count: 129666
[Report This] Published: Dec 10, 2018 Updated: Jul 11, 2021
Reviewer: kellydeer Signed
Date: Aug 19, 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Kicking Back

Just curious as to why Deb couldn't do the DNA test?



Author's Response:

To be honest, it didn't occur to me - default mind went get it from Daniel.

Thanks

MissMerlot