Penname: purpledee Real name: Deborah
Member Since: Nov 30, 2016
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Summary:

Justin and Brian meet while Justin works for him. Brian ends up continuing to see Justin after and wants more than the occassional hook-up.

 

Lorie thanks for being my cheerleader as well as my Beta.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Bottom Brian, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Out of Character, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86495 Read Count: 225776
[Report This] Published: Jan 26, 2018 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Still love reading Craigs Cronies get theirs!

Love your stuff.  This is currently 3rd in my popularity poll!

Deb

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Oct 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

The end of another one of your masterpieces!

I really enjoyed this story and I'm enjoying 'Finding Home' too.

Love your writing, as usual, and can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Thanks Star!

Hugs,

Deb

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story, very well written.

Thanks

Deb

He's mine. by starlight Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 271]
Summary:

This is from Deb Tanner's plot bunny, Lindsay leaves Pittsburgh after she lied to everyone saying Brian impregnated her the old fashioned way. She meets Justin, who she never figures out is weathy but still uses to take care of Gus for her. Leaving Gus with Justin after a year. He finds out the woman he knew never existed, and the child he loves is his when he's listed as the father on the birth certificate.

 

Lorie, as always you inspire me with all your cheers, and Deb thank you for coming up with interesting stories, and also writing ones I love too.


Categories: QAF US, Plot Bunnies
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94943 Read Count: 223940
[Report This] Published: Feb 25, 2018 Updated: Oct 16, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi Star, just wanted to say I'm still enjoying all your stories, including the ones I've re-read many times!!

This is definitely my current fave closely followed by You Belong To Me.

I hope you are ok & wanted to just give you encouragement to keep on writing the good stuff!

Take care

Deb

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jul 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Another twist in the tale!

Very glad of the update as this is is my fave out of your current WIPs, although Alone comes a close second.

Thanks as always for your writing,

Deb.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thanks for the update for all your current stories.  I still like this best, but Alone is a close second.  Gus' Choice I still read, even though it's not my cup of tea, because you wrote it! I have tried to read the end of Life AWKI but I lost the plot, literally, along the way!

Thanks Star, I hope you are well,

Deb

Summary:

Justin and Brian never met on Liberty Avenue. Justin becomes a single father at the age of 19 and has to rely off his friends and family, meanwhile Brian fights in the battle of Lindsay wanting to play mother and Melanie wanting to play mistress. Brian, Michael, Ben, Emmett, Blake, Drew, and Ted also are dealing with the lose of Deb and Vic.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Chris Hobbs, Claire Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Peter, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anti-Ethan, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!)
Genres: None
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5722 Read Count: 15372
[Report This] Published: Apr 16, 2018 Updated: Mar 30, 2020
Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Apr 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Meeting the Parents

A bit confused as Craig & Jen just meet Gus & Brian in this chapter.  But at the beginning of chapter 2 it says they already met Brian and adopted Gus & Hunter as their grandchidren.  Maybe a mix up in stories?

Still enjoying it though.

Thanks

Deb L



Author's Response:

It's a been a while so I'll probably set it as a flashback as to how they met

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Apr 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The Attempt

Okay, still enjoying story and update, but, as this is the 2nd attempt to get Gus in their possesion, shouldn't Justin report it to the police to have them arrested?  Just a thought...

Thanks

Deb L

Alone by starlight Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

Justin's life is spent alone, only being sought out for his mind, and Brian for his body. Only Justin sees past the party boy to the man Brian really is. Justin can’t relate to people or why they do things and lives a solitary life because of it. He watches Brian, only because Brian quiets the mind he can't shut off. Brian watches Justin, not understanding why he needs to know more about Justin. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: None
Genres: Alternate Universe
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101017 Read Count: 123258
[Report This] Published: Apr 21, 2018 Updated: Nov 01, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay, new story!  This is different than your usual style and very interesting.  More psychological/philosphical and more 'in their heads'.  Choices is a bit like that too, but this is more so.  

Looking forward to the rest of the story.  Great so far.

Ta

Deb

Summary:

The Devilish Liberty Avenue Stud meets his very own Angel. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Michael Novotny, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36138 Read Count: 15916
[Report This] Published: Apr 30, 2018 Updated: Apr 30, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: May 01, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Father Figure

This was a really good story and well written.  I really got captured and pulled along by the story.

Thanks

Deb

Flashes by Tagsit Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

After having been missing for a week, Brian shows up at the Diner with no memory of where he’s been. Over the course of the night he starts to recall flashes of what’s happened to him and realizes that there’s another young man still missing and he’s the only one who can help the boy. The question is, will Brian remember in time to rescue the lost one?


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Rape, Torture, Unsafe Sex, Vulnerable Brian, Vulnerable Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Crime/Detective
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50978 Read Count: 23407
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2018 Updated: Jun 01, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: May 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party

Hi Tag.  I know you don't like being in the place that inspires these darker stories, but you are extremely good at writing them girl!  This is really good!

Just in case you might need inspiration, if your mood improves, there are a couple of stories on Midnight Whispers that might help.  They are in a similar vein: Gone but not forgotten by Moonshadow Woman and Missing by Icedcupcake.

Keep on typing!

Hugs

Deb



Author's Response:

Thanks. The writing does seem to be helping. Maybe, once I've got the boys all safe again, I'll be happier myself. Keep on reading! TAG

Summary:

Soon-to-be college senior Brian makes a bet with his new step-brother Brandon: for Brian to deflower their college's new president's closeted son and ruin their nosey neighbor's virginal son by the end of the week. The prize? Brandon has to spend the night with Brian, giving him what no man has had before. Can Brian complete his tasks without falling in love with a certain blond?

This story is inspired by the movie Cruel Intentions.

***STORY NOW COMPLETE!!!***


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brandon, Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Jack Kinney, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny, Original Female Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Debbie, Drug Use - Recreational, Family, First Time (Sex), Friendship, Jealousy, Language, M/M, Minor Character Death, Oral Sex, Slow Burn
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Michael/Ben, Ted/Emmett
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48246 Read Count: 27665
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2018 Updated: Jun 28, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue - No Tears Left to Cry

Really enjoyed this story.  Well written as usual by you!

Thanks hun,

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Summary:

Sequel to "Filled Silence" set in the Post-Stockwell Era, Brian and Justin makes some decisions that will redefine their definition of the word 'relationship'. Although inspired by the concepts within "The Experiment" by Wren and "The Dare" by Edom, it's my take on what should have happened in the series. ENJOY!!!

To the Wonderful and Talented Lorie Austin, Thanks for being my beta, but most of all, my friend. I couldn't do what I do without you.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gardner Vance, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Rodney, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Michael
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: JUST THE TWO OF US
Chapters: 98 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 422086 Read Count: 534170
[Report This] Published: Jun 06, 2018 Updated: Mar 05, 2024
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 69: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Hi Nichelle, still going great on this one, with writing up to your usual standard.

I Have a few confusing points, where this story differs from cannon.  Could you help me clear them up?

1. Where in the series timeline are we roughly in this chapter? You refer to gus as a toddler but if this is around series 4 surely he would be 3/4 now, so not a toddler.

2. Next, is somewhat of an assumption from this chapter; Unlike in cannon Brain didn't actually work with Stockwell in his campaign? 

3. Again, in this chapter it refers to Debbie getting a life of her own and Michael not being pleased about it.  Is this referring to the night at Sap's party for Justin, while Michael and the others ended up in jail for the night cos he was pissed with his mom dating Carl?  If so I'm confused, as in this story, Debbie doesn't meet Carl till she goes to see the police in chapter 57.

Thanks Nichelle, keep doing the good stuff,

Deb.



Author's Response:

Hey Deb,

So glad that you are still enjoying this very eclectic mix of Canon and AU. The response to this has been absolutely AMAZING and I remain so grateful that all of you continue to believe in my work. It's kind of convoluted, or as I'd like to think of it, Rewritten Literary Gumbo. So now to answer your questions:

Roughly this story is based from Ep:309 going forward, only I've also shortened the amount of time Justin spent with Ethan in the process. Somewhere in my mind, they were together about nine months, and to me, it shouldn't have taken as long as it did for him to figure out that he and Ethan were a mix made in hell. It was like watching what would have happened if Brian had given into Michael's wishes and became a couple. YUCK!!!!! That was SOOOOOOOO NOT a welcome image! So that said, I've moved up certain canon concepts to make them fit my vision of what could have happened during this time period if the writers had but time and inclination. For example, Brian and Justin's relationship as it was post-bombing has been reformatted and rewritten inside the post-Stockwell era, where they were just starting to really get their relationship on solid footing. The events that are happening regarding Claire, Michael, Lindsay, Craig and Lance are intermingled between Seasons 1-3, thereby giving the story its AU track. Which brings me to how the Sap storyline fits in...

In this work, Michael wouldn't have liked ANYTHING to take Deb's focus off of him and his goals. This is especially the idea given when it's mentioned that Debbie was beginning to develop a life of her own. True, that in JT2U, Debbie didn't officially meet Carl until much later, but she would have certainly been involved with other things. Remember that not only was she friends with Jennifer during that time, but that she was also the President of PFLAG, and possibly would have had social gatherings that did NOT include Michael. Her son definitely would not have been happy with that since in his mind, his mother's only reason for living was to serve him from the moment he was conceived. So that is why he would have gone to her house that night, as opposed to him stopping her from dating Carl.

Also in this story, Brian refused to work on the Stockwell campaign, and instead decided to dismantle it during his off hours. Gardner had the not-so-brilliant idea to gain the votes of the LGBT population by using Brian's openness regarding his sexuality. It backfired here because of a clause Mel had put into Brian's contract stating that, as a partner in Vangard, he could not be made to work with a client whose views were in direct opposition of his own. Gardner tried to override that clause, and enlisted the help of his lover (Lindsay) and Brian's 'best friend' to make that happen, figuring that between the three of them, Brian would bend to their wills especially if it threatened Justin in any capacity. Of course, it working on that particular campaign would have freed up Brian's time for Michael and Lindsay, and also kept him away from Justin. As for Craig's motive in obtaining the video, again it was to finally have something on hand to bend Justin to his will. All of them had motive and opportunity, except that none of them counted on getting caught and going to jail. So Gardner was the one holding that particular trump card, which has now backfired tremendously.

I hope this helped clear up the confusion!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Summary:

Four years, rich business man and artist Brian Kinney was shot and nearly killed but an angel, called Justin, saved his life, it took two years of rehab for Brian to return to almost being the Stud that he was before. But neither of them have forgotten the other; so when they are brought back together by Liberty Avenue's Mistress of Love, Marilyn, and his close friend, Emmett, sparks fly, to the delight of most of The Avenue, as well as Justin's friends Daphne and Chris.

But the thought on everyone's mind is who tried to kill Brian? Why did they do it? And just why is Michael's childhood best friend, Mercy, back in town? What is the secret she is hiding? This is a story of mysteries, justice and revenge but most of all love.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, George Shickel, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Mysterious Marilyn, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, Canon Divergence, First Time (Sex), Fluff, Friendship, Hatred, Jealousy, Mental Health Issues, Mentor/Protégé, Minor Violence, Possessive, Raw Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Toppy Justin, Vulnerable Brian, Vulnerable Justin
Genres: Alternate Canon, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Canon Divergence, Crime/Detective, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/George, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107810 Read Count: 104717
[Report This] Published: Jun 11, 2018 Updated: Jul 16, 2019
Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 35: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting

Thanks for the update hun!

Feel like I'm missing a gap in time, when we suddenly find Justin has been kidnapped in ch 34.  Am I losing the plot?

Deb



Author's Response:

Hey Deb, thank you for the review. Hope you are well. Between the end of chapter 34 and the start of 35 there was a three week gap, so no plot losing, more explanations to come over the next couple of chapters.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jul 17, 2019 Title: Chapter 42: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor

I couldn't get as into this as much as the others, but it was by you guys so was good anyway.

It was a difficult story to follow and even at the end here, I'm still not sure where everything fits in the story or the reasons why.  Especially in regards to Brians attack and how they worked out who did what to him.

Oh, well onto the next!

Luv & hugs

Deb L

 



Author's Response:

Hi Deb, I have to agree with all points and I was writing it! Unfortunately, coinciding with me doing this one was a dificult time in my life and this was a bit harder to write than the others. I kind of lost my mojo where this one as concerned, it is slowly coming back and hope you continue to enjoy my other stories.

Thanks,

Nicole xx

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Siren Call

No worries Nicole. Hope you're better now & life is treating you well.

Take care, 

Deb L



Author's Response:

I am doing much better now thanks Deb.

Nicole

My BFF by addict_writer Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

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Justin and Gus have been friends all their lives. Would their friendship survive when Gus finds out that Justin is dating his best friend's father?


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Chris Hobbs, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 10k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Coming Out, Dirty Talk, Family, First Time (Sex), Fluff, Friendship, Homophobia, Language, M/M, Mentor/Protégé, One-Shot, Underage Sex
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Justin/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27415 Read Count: 2432
[Report This] Published: Jun 13, 2018 Updated: Jun 13, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: My BFF

Really good. Thoroughly enjoyed this, as usual with you stuff!

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Summary:

Post 5-13. Brian ends all contact with Justin from one day to the other and Justin has no idea why. After five years in New York he returns to Pittsburgh and goes looking for answers that are long overdue. His whole life will be changed forever when he finally gets the answers he has been looking for. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, Anti-Michael, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Post-series, Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: Back for Good Universe
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110685 Read Count: 114675
[Report This] Published: Jun 17, 2018 Updated: Oct 03, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Jul 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Really loving this story.  I'm glad Justin isn't forgiving Brian.  Because to have someone keep you out of the first five years of your childs life IS unforgivable.

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Right now forgiveness is not in Justin's mindset... poor guy :(

I am glad you're enjoying the story. More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

I have really enjoyed these 2 stories, although I'm still not sure Justin should should have forgiven brian so easily. But it was inevitable once they were living in the same house together.  Of course I am still enjoying 'the pittsburgh years' as I do love a good Michael/Linday bashing!

I have been thinking maybe you could do a one off follow up to this forward 2/3 years. Michael gets released/paroled from prison and we see if anything has changed! Never say never!

Thanks for your excellent writing,

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you for joining me on this amazing ride :)

I have appreciated your comments and am glad you liked the story!

At the moment I am writing on a different story altogether, but I do have some ideas in my head about possible sequels for this universe, so who knows? Never say never ;)

Ugly Mirror by Tagsit Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 145]
Summary:

Ethan’s pursuit of Justin might have seemed like a romantic meeting of two like-minded, artistic souls, but was it really? What if there was a more sinister motive behind Brian and Justin’s breakup? Canon Divergent story starting with ep 2.16. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Ethan Gold, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, 10k+ Word Count, Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Ethan, Canon Divergence, Hatred, Humiliation, Justin/Other, M/M, Raw Sex, Vulnerable Justin
Genres: Alternate Canon, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Justin/Ethan
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113257 Read Count: 25428
[Report This] Published: Jul 05, 2018 Updated: Feb 28, 2020
Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 25, 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - My Real Punishment

Oh Tag, I didn't realise you have gone through something similar as I haven't kept up with this story as much. I know if anyone hurt any of my cats before, I would have beat the shit out of them. 

I had a friend that was in a controling relationship, with physical and sexual abuse from her 'man' (using the term very loosely!).  I eventually baited him enough, on a night we were all out, and when we were seperated he took a swing at me and then I proceeded to beat the shit out of him.  My vision was literally RED!  I have to say I really, really enjoyed it though!

Suffice to say she went back to him and then had other relationships in the same vein afterwards. I tried and tried to get through to her over the years, and so did many other friends and family, but nothing got through and she spiralled into alcoholism.  She eventually died when the chemo reacted badly with the alcohol abuse, shutting down her kidneys and liver, at the age of 45. My best friend since school.

I know this BJ story and your story are probably different, when there seems no way out or support.  But even when there is all the support in the world, sometimes even that isn't enough.

Love & hugs,

Deb L

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Unfamiliar Images

Sorry Tag.  Didn't realise it was so bad for you.  I hope you didn't feel I was showing any disrespect to your own personal experience.  I'm glad that you are past that & hope you are now okay mentally and emotionally.  And agree it's a shame your abuser didn't get his full comeuppance, despite all your efforts.  Maybe one day the gods of fate will hand his fate over to Karma & let her have at him!!

All my thoughts and best wishes to you,

Deb L

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 29, 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Brand New

Again, sorry for what you went through.  I know I can't understand it and i'm sorry for that.

To add to my previous story; My dad was like this too.  My mom suffered this type of abuse for years, coupled with his affairs shoved in her face.  We all suffered mental and/or physical abuse at his hands.  Mom took the full force of his mental/emotional abuse.  Me & his daughter r a diff story. (mom:son & daughter, dad:son & daughter. Me between the 2 of thier 2nd marriage & youngest)

I ended up being their carer before they died. ( ur single don't have kids (my youngest nephew was 25 at this point!!!)). 
I always knew mom would go before him, and she did.  He always made sure to tell us he was dying for the past 30 yrs of his life, to get the full attention he thought he deserved, to get us running around after him.
I had seen a documentary years before about psychopath traits & thought 'shit that's my dad'.  But now I know he was a sociopath with narcissistic traits.  I always made sure I was never pulled into these type of 'mindgames' with any of my partners.
The upshot; It was just me & him in the end. I made sure he ended up in hopsice care & other than me, no one in the 'family' cared enough to visit.  So he got very little attention and I made sure he knew why.  Ain't karma a bitch!!!
I also made sure that when I spread his ashes, I stomped on them real good, so that he would be shit on my shoe!!!
Again, sos for your story,
Deb L

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 29, 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Brand New

Okay, there is no way, Brian being who he is, would not seek some form of retribution from Ethan.  Even if he paid someone to do it for him!!!  So maybe an epiloge?

Deb L



Author's Response:

My goal for this story was to try to make it as realistic as possible. Yes, in a fantasy world, Justin or Brian or someone else would be able to get even with Ethan. But if you're dealing with reality, there's no way you can take on a narcissist without getting damaged. My own story, is illustrative: I escaped my narcissist five years ago, however, because of personal circumstances, I was forced to have ongoing contact. When I finally decided enough was enough, I tried to take him to court. That process took over two years, cost me thousands of dollars in attorney fees, and ended up with him manufacturing lies in an attempt to get me arrested and thrown in jail. He actually succeeded, by threatening my attorney with disbarrment, in  getting my attorney to drop my case. I had to go out, get another attorney, and we went all the way to court, before him, his attorney, and even the judge ganged up on me, and forced me to except a pittance in settlement. I basically got nothing. He has, literally, millions. And it drove me to the verge of suicide as well. The moral of the story is, just run. Get as far away as you can and don't ever look back. No amount of money or vengeance or anything else is worth the ongoing damage a narcissist will do to you. So, that's why I chose to end Justin's story where I did. I wanted him to get the happy ending I didn't. TAG

 

PS, thanks for sharing your story in the prior review. Sending you back all the support and love and trust you've given me by sharing. 😌

Summary:

This is the story of what happened in Pittsburgh during the five years that Justin spent in New York working on his career. What was life like for Brian, the Liberty Avenue family and Gus and Luke?


This story does NOT need to be read to understand Back for Good! Each story can be read on its own!


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anti-Brian, Anti-Debbie, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, Anti-Michael, Anti-Ted, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Post-series, Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama
Pairings: None
Series: Back for Good Universe
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128967 Read Count: 67873
[Report This] Published: Jul 15, 2018 Updated: Nov 12, 2018
Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Sep 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Still loving this!

You haven't mentioned the DNA results being back, but I assume they must have been at this stage, otherwise the FBI/DA woiuldn't have formally charged them.

I would like to see Lindsay in custody, aswering questions and having her dellusions shattered! And where is Carl in all this surely he should be keeping Debbie away from Brian and further assaults on his person!

Great writing, can't wait for more!

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for your comment :)

I haven't mentioned the DNA results yet as they're not back yet. It was mentioned earlier that it would take 3-5 days for them and we're only on the third day yet. And yes, they would have been charged as Michael admitted to having been a part in Lindsay's kidnapping attempt. Michael therefore implicated Lindsay as well and that confession would have been enough to arrest him and get a warrant on Lindsay as well. After all the DNA test was only done because she had a witness on her side supporting her story. Now that that witness has been proven to be a liar and has admitted to having helped kidnap Luke, the DNA test is only a formality at this point.

As for Carl, unfortunately the Pittsburgh PD has more cases that he is directly involved in that need him :( But we'll see more of him during the trial :)

More will be up soon :)

 

 

Reviewer: purpledee Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is great writing.

I hope that you do a courtroom scene with the 2 deluded idiots trying to justify themselves in their own warped way, and their reactions when thier sentences are handed down! and as much as some may rail against it ( Mel & Deb), they should know you don't mess with the Feds!!

Thanks hun,

Deb



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you :)

There will be a courtroom scene, yes... Though I have to warn that I am not a lawyer and don't work in law enforcement, so it might not be 100% accurate ;)

More will be up soon :)