Penname: Nichelle Wellesly Real name:
Member Since: Apr 30, 2016
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:

     


As an avid writer/reader of QAF fanfic, it is important for me to provide an escape from RL travails. I can be considered an Angsty Drama Queen in a very good way. It's my hope that you all enjoy what I produce.


Happy Reading and HUGS!



~Nichelle


 


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Loss by Nicolle Midnight Rated: M starstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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Justin heads for New York, leaving Brian alone until a terrible accident changes both their lives...Takes place post Ep. 513 after Justin has left the loft and before Michael convinces Brian to rebuild Babylon.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Implied Death, M/M, One-Shot, Post-series
Genres: Alternate Canon, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Could be Canon, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8746 Read Count: 3263
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2016 Updated: May 07, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: My life without you.

My heart....WHEW!!! This had me on an emotional rolleroaster crying both ugly and happy tears! Thank you for sharing this amazing one shot with us! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Alterations by NoChaser Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Feature

I am a sucker for "Brian in Peril" stories and this is one of the best I've read. The author does a great job dissecting Brian's complex mind. Phenomenal writing, interesting premise, and a satisfying ending. Can't ask for much more! -charming1

    

After Justin leaves for New York, the remaining members of the Liberty Avenue family go about their everyday lives, never suspecting that something serious is happening to Brian. When the realization hits, they find that everyone's lives are irrevocably altered.


Categories: QAF US, Admin Pick
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Debbie, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, Anti-Michael, M/M, Mental Health Issues, Out of Character, Post-series, Real Life Issues
Genres: Angst, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73327 Read Count: 121161
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2016 Updated: Sep 15, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: May 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Inhale. Exhale. Disappear.

WOW!!! THIS.... This is one of the first stories that drew me into fanfic! Thank you for sharing it here!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

THAT is an awesome compliment, Nichelle! Thank you and I'm humbled. ::blushes:: 

Summary:

 

Brian and Justin’s journey of love…


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: M/M, Post-series, PTSD, Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65081 Read Count: 98977
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2016 Updated: Nov 04, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: May 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Good Gravy, I MISS THIS!!! I couldn't help reading it (and "The Offer Still Stands" and "Christmas Presents") again for the third time around. Hopefully, your muse will return ASAP! 

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Welcome back! And in a truly magnificient way!!! What a coup for Kinnetik! While Brian's life is on an upward mobility track, Lindsay and Michael...LAWD HAM TURKEY foolery, foolery, FOOLERY!! SMH!

Michael thinking that Danny aka Divina owes him anything after all this time is laughable. Perhaps if they had found each other when Michael wasn't a grown ass man (and I use that term extremely loosely) that argument would fly. Not having a father cannot be an excuse- nor should it be- for disregarding moral standards and flouting the law. Try again Moron or better yet, do the right thing and go to jail where you belong! At least in jail he's entitled to 3 hots and a cot by law while serving his time. Now instead of just being a professional idiot, he's about to add professional bum and con artist to the non-existent, unimpressive resume of his insignificant life.

As for Lindsay....Good Gravy where to start with this Train Wreck?! I can't figure out if she's really crazy or just playing at being insane. For her to think that anyone owes her anything OR that Justin's life with Brian should be hers is definitely an insane thought. But since her actions are completely well-thought out and in some trashy chick handbook completely rational, it really makes me wonder what she is trying to claim. The judge ordered her to seek professional help but honestly, I'm not sure she needs it as much as she needs an ass whipping and a jail cell. I'm still fuming at her leaving Gus in the grocery store and then lying lie-after-lie to try and justify her neglect but she could remember how to spread her legs and get her back dug out by some dude in exchange for an article in Art Forum to undermine Justin's career and separate Brian and Justin. There are people who are truly delusional and are sick but then there are people who play at being so to excuse despicable behavior. I firmly believe that Lindsay is the latter! Hopefully they won't let her out of jail.

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 



Author's Response: Ted has become so much more than a CFO, he's truly Brian's right hand man. Poor Danny, to bad he didn't realize his sexuality before he slept with Debbie. He could have avoided the whole Michael fiasco, he shouldn't have to be subject to the raving idiot. Michael maybe a grown man, but he's still emotionally a little mama's boy. Brian's had it right all along, he so pathetic... Lindsay maybe unstable and manipulative, but that's only because she's driving herself crazy with all her absurd plots to ensnarl Brian's heart. She knows exactly what she's doing, and she not doing it very well... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ Unfaithful Kisses…

This is quite possibly the BEST infidelity "EXPOSURE" scenes I've ever read! The fact that Lindsay abandoned Gus in favor of "Funky Fuck" then tried to use said FUNKY to undermine Justin and take away ALL that Brian has ever wanted - the PERSON that Brian has always wanted is just...TRIFLING, IDIOTIC, STUPID, INSANE and a host of OTHER adjectives I could throw at that TRAMP! Although I wish that Justin would have told Brian beforehand, I so glad that he fought back in front of Brian and Melanie so that Lindsay couldn't talk or excuse herself out of it! And then Gus sealed the deal with confirmation that Lindsay was just plain NEGLECTFUL! 

As for Michael: The NERVE of that Snot-nosed bastard thinking he could whine, weedle and whimper his way back into Ben and ultimately Hunter's lives!!! I'm so HAPPY Ben left him with absolutely NO HOPE! This would be the perfect time for Pittsburgh PD and the LAPD to collaborate so that Michael can revive his deadened career as a hustler to Big Bubba and Bruno in exchange for 3 hots and a cot! He needs to get kicked back to jail if for no other reason than leaving Debbie and Carl essentially homeless while wiggling WORTHLESS WHINING WEENIE at people in exchange for undeserved freedom! 

Sooooooo looking forward to MORE!

WRITE On, Kathleen!

~Nichelle



Author's Response: "This is quite possibly the BEST infidelity "EXPOSURE" scenes I've ever read!" Wow! Thank you so much, that's sweet of you to say... It was Lindsay own petty jealousy that made her scheme to derail Brian and Justin's relationship in what she consider a very clever way. But, as usual it backfire on her, causing riffs between her and Brian, as well if not more with Mel... It's totally unexcusable the way she treated Gus. He way be young, but he's old enough to have his feeling of security shaken and to develop a fear of being abandoned. Now on to Michael, Ben was just an after thought. When he found himself stranded halfway across country at some dirty truck stop. It's just like him to try and manipulate the situation to look like he came all that ways to just reunite with Ben, when he actually a last resort once Michael was down and out needing money and a bed... I'm so happy your longing for more. Squeals! I'm trying to work my fics in a rotation and keep they all relatively current... I said trying.. Really... I am... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 ~ Confounding Kisses…

Amazing Chapter!!! WHOO-WEEEE!! Brian and Justin are HOT as always. It's so nice to see them together and weathering the storms that keep coming up in their lives.

Lindsay is just as much of a head case as Michael! Jealousy and bitterness thy name is Lindsay! The NERVE of that trick to think she should have her house remodeled. She should have her BRAIN remodeled so that she can actually have some damn sense!  Mel needs to take a page from Ben's book and leave her to her own devices...no wife, no kids, NO Brian! 

I'm proud of Brian! Even though he is finally seeing his 'friends' for the manipulative, jealous, petty opportunists they really are, it's better that he sees it now and has a chance to protect himself. With Justin and the others like Ted and Em by his side he'll heal.

I feel sorry for Debbie and Carl (primarily Carl) but perhaps now she'll see 'her baby' for what he really is- a spoiled brat who she constantly enabled. Hopefully witth Brian giving them the loft, perhaps there will be a way for Deb and Carl to work out WITHOUT Michael in the middle of things. But before that happens, she really needs to own her part in this whole mess and clean-up her stinking thinking; to start worrying about living her own life instead of that grown ass infant she raised. I could certainly go on about how I feel about Deb and Michael's codependency but that would take quite awhile.

Speaking of the ASSHOLE... LMAO! I couldn't help but laugh out loud when he was told that he needed to work on his technique! Even though the idea of Michael having sex at all disturbs my spirit (ECK, UGH, BLECH!), I will admit that the description provided me with much comic relief on this here Monday morning! It was also laughable that he believed that Ben was sitting somewhere waiting for his raggedy ass. MITCH PLEASE!!! Not only has Ben found a new love, he's found someone who is his equal in every way from education to life philosophy. And Hunter has moved on too! Michael is firmly imbedded in their past; I can't say that I'm sad about that at all!!

Looking forward to MORE. Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response: Brian and Justin steaming up the page is always the perfect way to start a new chapter... They needed it almost as much as we did... With Lindsay losing her job, hopefully Mel will finally reach the end of her patience, smacked in the face with the truth about Lindsay's lies. It may have taken Brian years to see all the manipulations Michael and Lindsay have pulled. But Justin's here now for him to confide in and help him accept, and move forward leaving them in his dust. I have to admit I loved writing the part of Michael as a hustler, and meeting Trevor. He was a fool to think Ben still cared, Ben has finally wised up and realized how toxic his relationship with Michael was. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ Blindsided Kisses

What a disgusting perverted SOB Michael IS!!! EWWWWWWWW!!!!! That visual will be tormenting me for the rest of the day! YIKES! Yet it seems poetic in a bizarre, twisted sort of way since Michael always downed Hunter for being a hustler. I just prefer to think of Michael (if at all) as an asexual creature without a peen...*shivers* @ that damn visual again! I hope Carl revoked Michael's bail when he brought home the police report or both Deb AND Carl will once again be paying for the Dumbass mistakes of Michael Charles Novotny. If anything Deb should lose her house and have to move in with Carl that way if Michael comes back, he'll have to fend for himself! JMO

As for Lindsay: WHAT A BITCH!!!! I'm glad Justin didn't give her the benefit of a response. She really wasn't worth his words. Furthermore, I'm glad that Sydney told her to take some time off although I really think he needs to get rid of her entirely. There's no way that she can effectively do her job correctly if she can't see past her own pettiness.

Brian: I'm both happy and sad that he decided to sell the loft. Michael violated it in more ways than he knows or will pay for. Brian should let Justin know what happened though otherwise Michael will always have some measure of control in their marriage. I vote for Emmett 'spilling the beans' since Brian is reluctant to do so. Sure some secrets are meant to be kept but this one could blindside Justin and that wouldn't be good for their relationship at all. Give him all of the information and let's see what he does with it.

Another great chapter and looking forward to MORE of them! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: EWWWWW!!!! Sorry for putting that image in your head. Yes Michael's a hypocrite as always, but somehow I see his new career choice it fitting. I feel for Deb and Carl, this time Deb won't be so forgiving of Michael's bad behavior... Lindsay is become her own worst enemy, even before Justin has a chance to take her down. I know they'll miss the loft, but sometimes you just have to move forward, and not look back. You're right Justin needs to know the whole truth, no matter how much it will freak him out... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 ~ Angry Kisses

First, Carl finally showed Debbie what she has always done! FINALLY she gets a long overdue reality check. Michael is NOT perfect and hasn't been since before Brian arrived into their lives. Delusional much Deb?

Secondly, Lindsay got a reality check when dealing with Justin! The nerve of her thinking that she could control things! I loved the way Justin laid the verbal-smacketh DOWN on that harridan. She really needs to stay in her place instead of thinking that she can rule both Brian's household and her own. Have several seats? YUP and they are ALL for Lindsay!

Third but not the least, I really wish that that Scuzzbucket stayed in jail! Deb gave him $100 to take a cab from the couthouse to her place? One guess where the short stalking scumbag has gone...

Anxiously awaiting another chapter!! Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Carl may have given her a reality check, but it might take a little while, or more disappointments from Michael for her to really get it... Justin's has no problem standing up to Lindsay, but it won't be stopping her from going into the abyss... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ Kiss of Death!

brain_bleach.jpgI read it again and thought that I would share this in case anyone else needed it! LMAO!
Hugs, Darling!~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Love it, it's perfect! But I'm not sure it will be enough to clean up all the slimy spunk Michael spewed across the loft! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ Kiss of Death!

I was both laughing and HORRIFIED by the scene with Michael in the Loft. OMG! I NEED Brain Bleach!!!!!!!!!! Hopefully Brian will either sell the loft or burn that place down. As much as I love it, fumigating it just won't do!!

Deb really needs to buy a freaking CLUE! If I were Brian I probably would have killed Michael, performed CPR to bring him back to life, then called the police! The nerve!! I'm glad there was surveillance video. Since Deb can't believe the things she's hearing, perhaps she'll FINALLY understand what her eyes have been telling her all along. Her son is a spoiled, petulant NUTBALL who needs to grow up and be held accountable for his actions. Carl's job just got a lot harder and I'm afraid he will have to make a choice between his own self-preservation and the damn Novotnys. I don't envy him!

Still completely addicted to this! Looking forward to another update SOON!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Laughing and Horrified, my work is done here! he, he, he... Carl will face it like a man, giving it to Debbie with both guns blazing. It's time she is held responsible, and it's not going to be pretty. The surveillance video is just icing on the cake... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 ~ Heartbreaking Kisses

WOW! What a chapter! Such an emotional ride through both of their painful pasts. I know that they will be stronger and better for their pillow talk. I also love how Brian trusts Justin more than anyone else. It's the way it should have been all the time. Hell if Justin was man enough NOT to divulge what went on in their bedroom (especially to nosy and horribly-misinformed Michael), then surely he had proven himself able to keep Brian's secrets. It's a pleasure to 'watch' their relationship growing!

Looking forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Thanks, they really are on an emotional roll-a-coaster, and your right it's all about trusting one another. With Brian finally talking about his past and all his feeling of betrayal, now Justin understands why he's built walls around his heart. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Soot-Covered Kisses…

WHOOOO-HOOOOOOO!!! Just Kiss Me Baby! I LOVE this one so freaking MUCH! But first and foremost, WELCOME to KD! I hope you have fun here exploring all the different content and stories offered! It is such a pleasure to have you, Kathleen!

Love, HUGS, and HAPPY Writing!!

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Thanks Darling! I'm happy to be here, everything looks great. I'm just starting to explore the site, good job! Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 ~ Defiant Kisses

Justin said what needed to be said. Hopefully he and Jenn will rebuild their relationship to be stronger than it had become in later years.

So happy with Ted and Brian's dynamic! Brian always pushed Ted to believe in himself and it looks like Mr. Schmidt has finally taken the lesson. YAY!!

Carl might as well just bring home the police report and show it to Deb; punkass Michael still isn't going to tell her...SMH It looks like instead of Michael trying to rebuild his own life, he's trying to adopt Brian's former or even a part of Justin's for that matter. When will he learn that he's not built for that life?

Although I'm truly happy for Justin doing a show for Sydney, I do NOT trust Lindsay at all! I wouldn't put it passed her to try and sabotage Justin's budding career out of spite.

I'm looking forward to seeing how that and the rest of this amazing story plays out!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Have you hacked my computer and read the next chapter already? Or is it a great minds think alike thing? Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Summary:

Justin meets a handsome stranger in a pub far away from home and gets into the spirit of St. Patrick’s Day. What happens the day after, when they find themselves sat next to each other on an aeroplane? 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Justin Taylor
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Dirty Talk, M/M, Oral Sex, St. Patrick's Day
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3489 Read Count: 3017
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2016 Updated: May 18, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Get writing, Sally!!! You can't leave me hanging on the string here, LOL! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle 

Dashed Hopes by YumYumPM Rated: M starhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

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Five years have passed.  Justin's turned 27, Brian just going on 39. What if Justin wasn’t the success he’d hoped to be in New York? What will he find when he returns home destitute, his hopes dashed? Has Michael managed to realize his fondest dream?  Can Brian and Justin overcome the mistakes made during the intervening years?

Note:  Though this may seem like a Brian/Michael pairing, it is not.  Michael is not nice and does hurt at least two characters.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Christmas, M/M
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16029 Read Count: 3993
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2016 Updated: May 09, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GREAT story!! Ooooohhhhhh-WEEEEEE, I wanted to punch Michael in his delusional head for every single misdeed against Justin but LAWD HAM TURKEY JEEEEZUS!!! When he hit Gus!!!!!! If I could have gone through the computer screen and injected myself in the story at that moment I WOULD HAVE!!! And then that fracking Lindsay and her idiotic self!! I wanted to line her, Debbie and Melanie up and issue them on huge COMMUNITY SLAP to knock the blinders off and some sense into them.

My heart went out to both Brian and Justin in this. I'm glad they took the time to know each other again before jumping back into the proverbial saddle. They needed to reconcile who they were then to who they are five years later. Awesome Job!! Looking forward to MORE of your writing!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I may have gone just a teeny-tiny bit overboard.  But Mikey seemed to take a life of his own.  Thanks for commenting. : )

Summary:

 

Brian goes missing during a sea cruise…


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Justin/Other, M/M, Real Life Issues, Substance Abuse
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance, Tragedy
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37298 Read Count: 51797
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2016 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Coming Home with You

Next chapter soon please! I really want Lindsay to get put in her place so badly!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Yes, she really is due for a smack-down... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Coming Home

Sequel??



Author's Response:

You never know... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Summary:

 

A trip to Meat Hook gives Brian and Justin new horizons to explore. A series of one-shots that could be read independently. BDSM themed.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), BDSM, Bondage, Bottom Brian, Drug Use - Recreational, Fetish (Don't judge!), Fisting (Pass the lube!), Humiliation, Kink, Language, M/M, One-Shot, Orgy (plays well w/others), Rimming, Role Play, Threesomes, Toppy Justin, Voyeurism
Genres: Alternate Canon, Could be Canon, Gap-Filler, Porny, PWP (Plot? What Plot?), Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Justin/Other
Series: Ask and You Shall Get
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3071 Read Count: 1747
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2016 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Ask and You Shall Get

WHOO-HOO!! A BDSM series! Great beginning. I really can't wait to see where you take this! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Gagging by addict_writer Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Second part of Ask and You Shall Get series. Justin learns all about gagging. BDSM themed. Can be read as a stand-alone.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), BDSM, Kink, M/M, One-Shot
Genres: Could be Canon, Gap-Filler, Porny, PWP (Plot? What Plot?), Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: Ask and You Shall Get
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1866 Read Count: 1488
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2016 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star
Date: May 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Gagging

YES, you got the nuance of the ball-gag and Justin's initial panic just right! I've seen many people panic when they first put it on because for some reason the concept seems very foreign. Most people breathe through their noses even when their mouths are wide open but it's the idea of when they aren't in control of the obstruction that causes the issue. So kudos for that!!  I'm glad that Brian and Justin will be exploring this side of their relationship. I've always thought that Brian would make an excellent Dom and since Justin is a Switch, he could be Brian's Sub but dominate everyone else. I'm looking forward to more of this!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Be Good to Him by SLHR Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 136]
Summary:

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AU after Brian breaks Justin's heart in episode 2. This is Mpreg, but I really like Mpreg. Craig marries Justin off to an abusive man after finding out Justin is pregnant.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Michael, Family, Justin/Other, Language, Minor Character Death, Minor Violence, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!)
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42144 Read Count: 95741
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2016 Updated: Jan 16, 2017
Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Home

Very intense chapter!! I CAN'T WAIT for the next one and definitely not for the talk with Michael. I really wonder what excuses he will give for his unforgivable mistreatment of Justin and interference with Brian's choices.

Glad that Erik returned and maybe even has more insight than Justin is initially willing to share.

As for Maxwell, now that Justin has filed an official complaint, I wonder what the rat-bastard will try to do next. At least Craig did something right, even if it was for the wrong reasons. Between the divorce and the fact that Marissa is alive and well, I don't imagine that he will just go away quietly without making everyone's life hell in the process. Hopefully someone can expedite the divorce proceedings though. That's really the first step to Justin getting free.

Looking forward to more of this fascinating tale! Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Next chapter had him and Mikey but it's not as bad as it will be.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Aug 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Dinner and a show

That little..... Thank goodness Brian had a few sweet moments with the boys before all hell broke loose with the Idiot man! I think the patrons of the Diner were just as shocked as Brian to see Michael in such a state. Not surprised he would go cray-cray. He's always been a petulant child whose body reached and surpassed puberty while his mind never did. Can't wait to see where you go with this!!

As for Justin, I doth detect just a smidge of jealousy in Mr. Kinney! At least I hope so!

Happy writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael is not dealing well. More moments with the boys in later chapters.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Ted Talks

I hope Brian tells Debbie!!! Since he doesn't want to pummel Michael, I'm sure she would hit the little turd! He's such a self-centered idiot. I hope Brian doesn't forgive him or buy into his 'Woe is Me' manipulations.

I had to laugh at Tommy drawing on the walls. I've been through that more times than I can count with my own boys. And although it has been many years since then, sometimes I find my wishing for those moments back! It's on of the first shared memories that Brian and Justin have of Tommy; a moment within the turmoil that someday they'll remember with fondness. Although Craig's reasoning for having the prenup drawn up the way it was wasn't at all altrustic, hopefully it will all work out in Justin's favor so that he can truly be independent.

Poor Teddy! But then again maybe not.....maybe Ted is preggers (or at least I hope so!). I always thought he deserved some happiness of his own. 

I can't wait for the next update and the aftermath of Brian's reaction to Michael's constant lies. 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Brian is being tight lipped about the whole thing It's sorta explained in new chapter.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: The Date

Jealousy thy name is Brian Kinney! This should be interesting!

I'm glad that Hector and Justin had fun on their 'date.' It sounds like it will be really great for Justin to get out and make some friends of his own. I feel bad for Debbie but definitely NOT for Michael. And somehow I don't totally buy that he is insane either based on the things he was saying to Brian when he was attacking the Jeep with the tire iron.

I continue to be totally absorbed in this story! Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Can't help it, I love jealous Brian. Truthfully, my s/l with Michael is going to be disturbing but not for reasons most people would think in a anti-mikey story.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 14: New Beginnings

Gus and Tommy are simply adorable! And Justin balances the three babes like he was born to do it. Brian's feeling the need to take care of Justin in spite of initally thinking that Justin was out getting off. That's a great thing.

I laughed at Brian's switch to black panels and I'm sure that every single parent- and some married ones too- could relate to his reasoning. Don't make me have a RuPaul quoting moment, even if it is taken out of context, LOL

Poor Justin but then again not so much. Even if it was because of a nightmare that he arrived Brian's loft, it's still where he belongs. The situation could have gone so far left. Brian could have been standoffish and Justin could have been as well when Brian asked him what was wrong. But it shows growth that Justin asked for what he wanted but I'm happy it didn't and that Brian didn't turn Justin away when he so clearly needs comforting.  

Looking forward to MORE~

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

They're a little less adorable in new chapter but there is a reason for it. Justin is good with the kids. LOL. You can quote RuPaul anytime. I use quotes from Drag Race in my head all the time "Go back to Party City where you belong" is my favorite. More about Justin's nightmare and reasoning for coming on to Brian in later chapter. I don't think Brian ever could turn Justin away, the whole show was written on it.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Lindsay

That......That.......THAT BITCH!! Oh now she's sorry....AGAIN... but she should pay with her life at the hands of others, not her own. And Sam should definitely go down as an accessory. Seriously, the two of them deserve each other! If she had left that dirty man's extra 'Belly Button' alone, perhaps she wouldn't be in the mess she's in. Lonely Lindsay??? By a new toy or a male latex doll! Geeze! She deserves everything coming to her and more just for being stupid!

Lawd, it's not even 10am EST and I need Beam after reading that! LOL

WRITE On Pam!

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

HAHA. Too funny. I'm trying to write but i've ditched the two tries i've done on this new chapter. I'm glad you 'liked' it.