This should be very ineresting-  glad that Brian is supporting Justin in his efforts-  now if this time the courts actually support Justin and Brian- all will be good-  I know that folks sometimes feel for Debbie but in many ways she is maniupulating and does as much harm to Brian as Mikey does to him.  By making Brian feel guilty and not act based on what "she did" for him as a teen, she is just as bad as the rest of them.  No one should hold Brian's actions or reactions as something he "owes them" based on their acts when he was a teen.  ( hopefully that made sense)

Voyeur indeed- very interesting-   I hope Justin listens to Melanie and pushes for Ethan to pay-  he ended up in the hospital and it was Ethan's fault.  So glad to see an update and I can't wait for more.

Still loving this story.  Love the scene with Molly and Mel-  really Craig is a closet homosexual-  awesome.  Lindsay is a real bitch and Michael is just plain stupid.  Can't wait for the next update. Serioulsy- Ethan robbed Brian-  and what about Taryn's children/ Justin or Brian's child-  that will be the uttimate question

so happy to see an update on this grand story.  YOu've put so many plot twists and turns in there to keep it going.  

WEnt back and reread the last 4-5 chapters and it really jelled for me.  I remembered the rest of the story but the last few had so much new information and reveals I had to get a better grip on it.  Love that Brian has one child that is his and Justin has one too.  Not sure how the co=parenting will go but it will be interesting.  I can't wait for the trials of dumb and dumber.  

I enjoyed that one. Caught by your parents- how embarassing

I really enjoy this story-  the alternate reality where they both remember but try to make it better this time. This is only teh first season-  are you going to rewrite the entire series until Justin leaves? 

I did like the ending.  You tied up all the loose ends nicely.  I love the epilogue that shows what happens in the far future. 

Love the wedding and everything that happened that weekend.  Love that Zee got Lindsay and Mike a special edition of the wedding.  Sad to see this story end, but I know there will be more great stories from you.

Lindsay is so spoiled-  thinks she really hasn't done anything wrong-  love that the judge questions why the emancipation and the desolution of the marriage-  now if we could just get a way to get her totally away from the family for good

lots of good stuff here- hard to pinpoint all of them-  surprised that Michael was ok with Hank- I think he's hiding something

I just want them to kick Lindsay to the curb for good.  I don't understand ( well I do- the kids) they don't jsut tell her to leave-  she's conniving, self centered and obviously doesn't care about the kids or Mel-  with as much effort as she is putting ( or not putting into the marriage) she should just leave-  but of course, her good little wasp ways would not look favorably on all the good food, and adventures and being a part of Brian's inner circle being taken away.