I just started reading that story yesterday and completely fell in love with it! It turns out to be a beautiful idea and really well executed. Gus is absolutely adorable and so is the relationship that he and Brian are developing.

I was really curious about how you were going to introduce Justin in this. That was surprising, but in a good way! I like that you got Molly into this, she is such an underused character (including in the serie) and I really like "mature and responsible" Justin. It's gonna create an interesting dynamic with Brian. I can't wait to see how their relationship will evoluate. That's interesting to see Brian face such a life altering situation, that happens to him all of a sudden, and the impact it's having on him.

The only thing that I didn't really understand is what is happening with social services finally... Did he call them or not after talking to Carl? Carl kind of advice him to retain some information or let say "edit" the story regarding his paternity and maybe also the situation with Lindsay, so if he did call, what exactly did he tell them and what are they going to do? I think this would need to be clarified...

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Is this really it or do you plan to do an epilogue? I really hope you do! I absolutely loved that story, so maybe that's just me not wanting to let go, but I felt the ending was kind of rushed in this chapter... I mean, they got a miraculous solution and formed a plan, but we don't get to see how this will play out and what's going to happen next.

I wish we would see the quilting club's reaction to Justin's return and how the locals will handle the "gay invasion" that Brian is planning. I wish also to see how Justin's return in the world will go, what he's gone do now and if he and Brian will have success with the new book, etc. Maybe you could do a "a year or a couple years later" epilogue with some flashbacks like you did for other stories? I really hope you do, this story is so great, I feel it deserves a thorough plot resolution so it feels really complete.

Thanks for this story, perfect for this time of year!

Glad to find a new story by you today!

I think it's the sequel of "My Only Sunshine", isn't? Because it's not indicate as being part of this serie, so that got me confused at the beginning. 

I don't have time to read a lot now, but I can't wait to see what you have in reserve for the characters. I love alternate canon stories, it's interesting to see the characters in basically the same universe, but evoluting differently.