Wow Ladies,

This is a wonderful story with a Brian I love to see. So caring and warm for the people he loves. And love he does. A lot of people are on the receiving end of his generosity. His deep love for Justin is heartwarming.

It's good to see Michael thrown out of the lives of Brian and Justin. His presence is like that Laura character full of venom. They both are obviously jealous of what they can't have.

Can't wait to see what Lindsey comes up with to get what she wants and how Mel is going to react to that.

Ladies thank you for giving me a wonderful time reading this one.

XOXO

Meriam

Hiya,

First of all: Great story.

Just after I started reading I got angry at Michael and as I went on reading I got really upset about the way he was intruding in Brian and Justins life.

At the end of the story I nearly peeed myself with laughter at Michaels ludicrous excuses. The stupidity of that child in a mans body. The utter lack of empathy. All the world has to revolve around poor little Mikey. He sure got his come uppance,

Thank you for a story that had me going through a range of emotions. A very nice way to end an evening.

XOXO

Soirsa

Hiya,

I remember you joining Tags on Summer of Sin. Man, we did have some fun nights, didn't we? Hard to believe it's only a year ago.

And what a year it was. You providing us readers with some amazing stories. You have become one of my favorite writers and have me jumping for joy when a new one comes out.

I also started writing, though very tentatively and more as a therapy. I'll propably never post the story I'm currently working on for it is way too dark and way, way, way to violent to post. 

The working with bullet points is very familiar for I always wrote my essays like that. Quick jotting down of notes and then working from one to the other.

Thank you for giving us a peek into your world and I'm looking forward to more of your work.

XOXO

Soirsa

Hiya T.A,

Started rereading this one from the beginnig and what an amazing way to spend a dreary sunday. 

I love the way this story unfolds. The way you alternate the chapters in points of view is really good. Now we get to see what Justin is actually feeling and thinking.

Poor Justin to end up this way and lucky Justin to end up with Brian. Yay to Brian to stand up for Justin and taking him on and not letting those disgusting perverts get to our Sunshine.

The build up to this chapter was so well done. To see Justin slowly crawl out of his shell is so moving and so well written.

*smut alert* for this chapter well given! This was piping hot and very moving. Loved Justins point of view in this chapter.

Let's leave our boys to bask in the afterglow and no doubt the morning will bring even more lovemaking for that was what this was. The tenderness and caring way Brian lead his PC into it was deeply moving.

Now that Brian has iniated Justin into the pleasures of gay sex no doubt Justin will want more. Let's hope they can enjoy each other for quite a while for I think that nasty bottomfeeder Bellweather hasn't given up hope to get to Justin. I forsee Howie hatching out all kinds of plans to get his hands on his so hotly desired blond.

This story is so different from the previous stories. It reminds me a lot of Smoldering in the way Justin has been damaged to such a massive degree. Once again you wrote a Brian I really love. A caring, warm and loving Brian. A Brian who deep down is lonely and wants to be loved and taken care of as well. A Brain who is able to get a damaged teen to trust him and find himself again.

Thank you for another marvelous story.

Looking forward to more updates.

XOXO

Soirsa

Hiya,

First an answer to your questions. Wraak is zoet can be translated in revenge is sweet. Or revenge is a dish best served cold. And there isn't really a Dutch word for kapow but in my part of the country we say: Vol op je muil gaan (which would roughly translate into: Slamming face first into a brick wall) also known as: total and utter humiliation.

NOw back to the story and the chapter. I get more and more exited when an update comes up.

You are spinning a story here towards the most exquisit revenge ever plotted out. And everybody is pitching in, Ted and Jennifer: who would have tought them this devious. Little J: OMG that is a master in the making.

Mel: I do hope she will finally see the light and leave Lindsay. Leda would be so good, no perfect, for her as a partner. Jenny would love to have a butch mother instead of that pussy Lindsay.

Blondy and little Whiney will be torn to pieces, ground into dust and scattered to the four winds when this story is done. Serves then right!!

And so looking forward to the wedding of Brian and Justin.

Should you have anymore questions about the Dutch language just send me an email and I will try to answer it as soon as I can. (in and out of hospital at the moment - breastcancer is a bitch) Mail me at; meriammaatje@live.nl

XOXO

Meriam

Who would have thought Brian to be the one to give Daphne all that money to buy those shares. And all that as a gift to Zee and Faal. It just shows how much they both mean to Brian and Justin.

Whiney and Bitchie are slowly digging their own graves..... They are just to damned stupid to realise that their plan will backfire in a giganormous way. I hope they hire an "assistent" that robs them blind.

So looking forward to the next chapters. Can't wait for the wedding.

XOXO

Meriam

WOW, WOW, WOW!

Mickey got slapped down again. And double this time. Firstly by Solomon and then Faal. Great another night in jail for him. Will he ever, ever learn. Guess not. There is a saying here in Holland. Een ezel stoot zich zelden twee keer aan één steen. Roughly translated it means that you have to be an enormous moron to make the same mistake twice. Well Captain Whiney sure did that and he will certainly do it again. The brainless moron should be commited!

And our Blondie? She sure got her come uppance. Still she will keep on trying as well. The fact that she was willing to share a home with Mickey to raise the children had me gobsmacked. I already had visions of Gus and Jenny running the household and Lindz en Mickey lounging around. Lindz with her head in the clouds and Mickey's head burried in a comic. Poor kids..... Luckily enough Solomon, marvellous puppeteer that he is, had them dancing on their strings the way he wanted them to dance. Thank God, he decided in favor of Gus and Jenny. I could kiss the man.

And now on to the next court session and the next slap down for Dumb and Dumberer. And please: Give Zee a chance to smack them both down. I would love to see her skinning Lindsey alive.

Thank you for two marvellous chapters.

XOXO

Meriam

Once again a humdinger of a chapter. And once again in stitches.

So Nancy and Ronald finally found out about the extent of deceit, abuse and malice Lindsey is capable of. So they're considering cutting the apron strings? Wow, that will leave Bitchy and Whiney without any income for both of them are jobless and homeless as well. That flee infested hovel is just around the corner. 

Now Bitchy has to get her head out of the clouds and seriously start to consider which direction she wants to give to her life. It were best to just pack up her scrawny arse and leave town altogether. Start somewhere new. The same thing applies to Whiny. He really should get his head out of his arse, his foot out of his mouth and grow up. The time for comics and collectibles is over. 

And all the lawsuits? May the odds ever be in the favor of everyone but M&L. May the consequences be bloody and demeaning. 

Justin remembering the Prom: Tears, tears, tears. OMG I cried my eyes out. And Save the last dance for me as their wedding song? This is not going to be the wedding of the century but the wedding of the MILLENIUM.

Thank you for including team T and T in the story as well be it ever so tiny. I do really appreciate that. And thank you so very much for yet another wonderful update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Big, big hug with sprinkles on top.

XOXO

Meriam

Hiya,

You did it! 
I peed myself! I actually peed myself laughing! 
Captain Foot in Mouth playing tonsil hockey with a lesbian. MWAHAHAHA!!! My sides are still splitting! This is THE best scene EVER. And on top op that Brett Keller kicked Mickey's arse in public. OMG! I will never, ever, ever forget this.

Lindsay and Michael drinking that precious wine is really unforgivable. I hope replacing those bottles will bankrupt them both. I can see that flee infested hovel on the horizon already. 

Lindsay going to Melody's party in a tuxedo? She doesn't have the style nor the class to pull that off. She will be the laughing stock at that party. An ass dressed up as a horse is still an ass isn't it? 

And her courtcase? May it be long and bloody for what she did to Emily is utterly cruel and vicious.

Thank you for making me laugh this long and hard. I needed that.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO

Meriam

Hiya,

I just can't find the words to describe this story. 

This one and it's prequel Whispers take my breath away. I'm always jumping for y=joy when a new update is posted. 

You write the perfect Anti-Mickey and Anti-Lindsay stories. 

I love Zee and Faal. I love everything about these stories.

My new favorite stories. 

I hope you'll keep writing for you brighten up my dark and stressfull days. Your stories help me to keep a positive outlook on life.

Thank you so very much for your wonderful work.

XOXO

Soirsa

Hiya,

I say again: My God you sure know how to write Anti Dumbwitted Duo. Every chapter again I'm waiting to see what Dumb and Dumberer come up with now.

By the way I love the way you use a smattering of Dutch in your story. I live in the Netherlands and am aware of how difficult Dutch is to some people. So thank you for using my native tongue.

Plese don't see this as a critisisme but Onwelriekende teef is a too nice an expression to use for a bitch like Lindsey. I personally would call her a: smerig rotwijf or a: achterbaks rotkreng. These expressions have a more vicious impact.  My reaction after reading about her was one of: Smerig akelig kutwijf. (filthy cunt).
I hate Lindsey from the bottom of my heart in this story. Such a conniving, filthy, backstabbing and egotistical bitch.

Michael? He just has to take his head out of his arse and start growing up. If he keeps up this behaviour he will end up pennyless, homeless and totally alone.

Thank you for this wonderful story. Every time an update appears my heart skips a beat. Please keep up writing for you make my world a whole lot brighter

XOXO

Soirsa 

Hiya,

I can't tell you enough how much I love this story,

They way you are building up the tension is really nerve wracking,

Sooooo looking forward to the moment Blondie and Whiney are getting their come uppance.

As the saying goes in the Netherlands: Wraak is zoet! (google it and feel free to borrow)

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

XOXO

Soirsa

Hiya,

You, my dear, are one of those writers who know how to write about "the sex" without it ever being vulgair.

Three gorgeous, hot men in a threesome, what's not to love? This one is raunchy, raw and piping hot. Just what I need while the rain is lashing the windows. Vivid imagery and an easy flowing style pulled me straight and deep into this story.

I watched Nip/Tuck for about three seasons. Then I lost interrest but this wetted my appetite again. Maybe I'll return to it.

Faved you and this story.

XOXO

Soirsa