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Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Justin Plays in the F**koff Bet.

I really like this bunny. I once thought how funny it would be if the bet was something Justin broached between himself and Brian. I'm not sure if your bunny involves Brian, Justin and Brandon, or just Justin and Brandon.  Any of the ways would prove to be an interesting story, but if the bet was between just Brandon and Justin, Justin would win hands down as Brian would never bottom for Brandon. OH WAIT!  It just hit me. Brian wouldn't be on the list.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104: What if Justin bought Buzzy's?

Hmmm... Does Brian secretly know Justin yet? Or does he meet him after Michael points him out in Woody's or Babylon, after he's been complaining relentlessly about him for the last hour? Sounds like it could be very good...

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: There was that threesome once... or twice...

If Justin got the giggles the first time around when he figured it out about Brian and Ben, I can just imagine his reaction to this!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Different outcome of Gui situation

I so agree with you Angelhead. Everything you said about Brian is true. I found that topic quite disturbing. It's one of the mistakes I found within the series. And he is legally Gus' Father, so regardless how much time he's spent with Gus, it shouldn't reflect on his custody of Gus. What a wonderful way to seal Brian and Justin's relationship a lot earlier than in canon.  Michael's reaction is born of pure jealously. He's already jealous of Justin, and this would escalate into pure hatred of Justin. So I can see a real Anti-Michael fic here too.

I really hope someone will look back on these past bunnies and pick this up, as it could be a really great read.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: Melanie is given a gift...

More importantly, what's Mel's reaction to Justin saying, "Lindsay will stop trying to get his."  Did Justin catch Lindsay making some attempt to get Brian in bed, and this is the outcome? This could prove to be a crack fic, or could really lead into a serious AU mutil-chapter fic. If I had my choice, I'd go with the latter.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Michael decides on a career change

Does Michael know enough about hot sex to even plan one?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Brian buys an unusual camera...

Just think of Brian's reaction when he sees Lindsay and Michael's and has to compare it to Justin's? Even Mel's could surprise him.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Experiments with Paint aka The Million Dollar Painting

I love SNO's comment and idea, but would like to expand on that. Would the boy's even want to sell it, even for a million dollars? I'm sure it would be publicized in the local papers, and what would Michael's reaction be?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115: Michael heard the doctor's message instead of Justin

YAY! Another Anti-Michael fic. Always a sucker for stories where Michael puts his foot in his mouth. I see lots of angst, but a very happy ending when the truth of what Michael did comes out. How does Brian finally learn the truth, when he hasn't spoken to Justin in a long time, and also won't give Daphne the time of day? Could he be at a restaurant entertaining a client and over-hears a conversation about how Michael was on his phone that night at Woody's, relaying how Brian had cancer?

Come on authors. This could be a very good read. Just think of all the possibilities you could come up with for this!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Ghostbusters Crossover

Okay Deb, I think this is one for you to write. With your classic, humorous one-shots, you could do wonders with this.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Hey, Uncle Doctor Dave...

With the distinct dislike David and Brian had for each other; oooh... I think I could really like this. Will blood be enough to bond the two men, or will their dislike for each other, turn more towards Hate?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The night Craig rammed Brian's Jeep

I would love to read something like this. The different ideas are great. If Craig's car was locked onto Brian's jeep, causing neither man to be able to drive off, the cops would HAVE to be called, and the truth revealed. Craig wouldn't have had the argument with Justin the next day on the sidewalk, causing Craig to hit Justin. Would Jennifer leave Craig sooner? What's Craig's outcome? His insurance would have to pay for Brian's new jeep. Would he have to pay restitution to Brian, hospital bills, loss of work... etc.

What if he did cause someone to be killed? Craig would have to have been unable to drive away, so Brian wouldn't have been held responsible for the accident. Craig would go to prison. Jennifer would divorce him, receiving everything, which means there would have been money available for Jennifer to pay for Justin to go to PIFA.

If it wasn't Brian's jeep, Wow! That guy would probably not pull out any stops in suing the insurance company against Craig, but what if he found out Craig thought the jeep was Brian's, and retaliated against the homophobe, and in turn did something horrible to Craig?

All these scenarios could be really good. But the bottom line in all of this, Justin wouldn't have moved out of his home, as Craig wouldn't have been around to kick Justin out. 

Anyway, I always wondered how Craig was able to drive home with as much damage that was done to his car in the show.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: I'm thinking this would make a great crack fic...

I'm chuckling just thinking about it. But, who's pregnant? Justin? Brian? Or, BOTH?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Does Ted really want to be Brian Kinney?

Sno, you just cracked me up!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147: Brian disappears

I absolutely love mystery and intrigue. Sounds like Mikey is Mikey. Believing the worst of Justin, and the best of Brian (in Mikey's eye.) I don't think the cancer should return, though. Justin should be able to prove him and Brian haven't broken up, as he can prove what he's doing in Philly, and someone must have seen them together at some point.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Ted gets his chance with Michael

Hopefully, run screaming for the hills! (but not before talking to Brian and Emmett and asking them how they can stand to be around him.)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2019 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163: Justin owns Britin Airways...

I could go for a really good AU, and this sounds good. The author could go many directions with this one. Most of all, I would love to see what they came up with as the 'who' and 'why.'

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160: Escort servce

Ooh la la! This could prove interesting. I'm taking for granted the escort service doesn't provide bedroom detail, unless the escort makes a special deal with the gentleman under the table?

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2019 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160: Escort servce

Huh! Unfortunately, I must have 'forgotten' the word 'legal'.  Then the question would be 'is that mandatory'? So, IF Justin is hired, well, we wouldn't want hm to go there, right? Just Saying. ;)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2019 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161: Coach Kinney/Dr. Kinney/Craig’s ghost/Mel’s pregnancy…

You got winners again Deb. #3- Craig haunting - kind of gives me the shivers, though. He's such a unlikeable homophobe. Oh, but wait, Idea Struck... Would serve the so-and-so right, if he had to observe Brian and Justin in the bedroom. :)

#4 - could also result in JR suffering lifelong effects such as cerebral palsy, mental retardation, visual and hearing impairments, and poor health and growth.

But, ABSOLUTELY LOVE 1 and 2. I much as I love Canon Divergent, I also LOVE really good AU's. And these sound like winners in my book.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2019 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162: Another slight twist to the loft robbery

It's very interesting that you came up with a burglary plot, as I'm currently writing one. I have the story completely outlined and haven't written much more than the prologue. Of course, Michael and Lindsay are behind it. I wonder if I can change gears? So after ten minutes of contemplation, how's this?

Being it's Molly's birthday, and Craig is certain Justin will show up, sets the plan in motion. Then he contacts Hobbs, who kidnaps Justin. What neither man is aware of - maybe not even Brian yet - or better yet, he is - is that they just found out from the doctor that Justin pregnancy is considered - high risk.

What do you think? And the big question - can I write that? I certainly will give it a shot.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173: Justin disappears from hospital/Justin as a recluse

Oh goody!!!  First to comment...  Can I say... F**king Michael?!? (This would be a good one shot.)

Combining the two... Does Justin recognize Brian as the man from the parachute? And if I can add to this... maybe Justin is a world famous artist that paints under a pseudonym, and doesn't attend any art exhibits.

Either way... did Michael escape unscathed by Brian?  Didn't think so...

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134: Brian severely beaten and left for dead...

This sounds so awesomely good! Leave it to Debbie to again cause an uproar.  Justin would probably have to have Cynthia backing him, (maybe even Jennifer) and have Brian's POA and have a Financial Durable Power of Attorney for Brian, otherwise we just KNOW what would happen. I can see a great Anti-Michael and Anti-Lindsay plot here. Does Justin have any idea why Brian was beaten up in the first place? Was he in the diner when Debbie was ranting?

Thanks so much Deb T for another great Plot Bunny!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159: Justin goes missing in London...

OOOOHHHH!  It was sounding good like a reunion meeting and a "Let's start a relationship" type thing.  THEN - you continued with the he's missing and the lone business card and I was HOOKED!!!!  I thoroughly LOVE mysteries and suspence. THIS has both.

I know I have said before, that I wish someone would write this, but by gosh, this one I MEAN IT!!!!! I can picture scenarios in my head already. I'm trying to think of a good mystery writer that we have, that would be perfect for this. Any suggestions???

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164: Someone is selling my what?!

Hmmm.... Is this a different take on MPREG?  I just posted a different take on MPreg. Because if it's a porn site, I can't see women visiting it.  This could be really hilarious, though.