Penname: BritinManor Real name: Cathy
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Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: There was that threesome once... or twice...

If Justin got the giggles the first time around when he figured it out about Brian and Ben, I can just imagine his reaction to this!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104: What if Justin bought Buzzy's?

Hmmm... Does Brian secretly know Justin yet? Or does he meet him after Michael points him out in Woody's or Babylon, after he's been complaining relentlessly about him for the last hour? Sounds like it could be very good...

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Justin Plays in the F**koff Bet.

I really like this bunny. I once thought how funny it would be if the bet was something Justin broached between himself and Brian. I'm not sure if your bunny involves Brian, Justin and Brandon, or just Justin and Brandon.  Any of the ways would prove to be an interesting story, but if the bet was between just Brandon and Justin, Justin would win hands down as Brian would never bottom for Brandon. OH WAIT!  It just hit me. Brian wouldn't be on the list.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145: Final scenes of series finale – real or fantasy?

Great opportunies here. I really like the idea that it was a daydream. I like to believe that Michael was using that as a reason to keep Brian close to him now that Justin is gone. Michael's illusions, I'm sure, is that he doesn't believe Brian and Justin would  continue a long distance relationship. Maybe not rebuild... Brian is above that scene now. (I guess I don't see him doing a 180, and going back to that scene anymore.) And I like the angle of Justin living at Britin, building his portfolio, where the inspiration is overwhelming and he is producing work out of this world. And of course, Brian has given him a credit card to help him survive in New York. How long before Brian finds out? How does Brian find out, and what is his reaction?  Writer's you have full reign. (I'd like to think he's pleased) after some persuading from a certain blond, and after Brian sees the work he's produced. Could be a good Anti-Michael and Anti-Lindsay fic.  Geez, I wish I was a writer.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Michael uses his 'key' with tragic results...

Was rereading Plot Bunnies again today, and this kind of stood out.  Scenarios:

1 - What if the three of them had already been going at it for awhile, and Brian was returning from taking a shower?

2 - What if this is a client of Brian's that they've known for a long time?

3 - What if Brian and Justin broke their one-time only policy, (or even 2nd-time only policy) and they all knew each other really well?

Lots of possiblities to look at. All-in-all, it could be a great Anti-Michael fic. While waiting for Justin to wake up from a coma, maybe since Brian knows the truth he starts looking at other events where things didn't always add up, and he starts to see them as possible Michael related. (the loft being robbed is one) Also, would Brian press charges? Would Michael go to prison for Class A Felony Assault 1?  But suppose the bashing never happened, and this is after Brian has opened Kinnetik? So many ideas.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Michael uses his 'key' with tragic results...

How does Brian learn the truth?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123: For those of us that love Anti-Michael fics...

love anti-michael.  this sounds like it could be awesome.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Brian married Michael

ABSOLUTELY... NEVER-NEVER. WHO COULD EVER WANT TO SEE BRIAN MARRY MICHAEL?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118: Michael tries to ruin Justin

I REALLY LOVE THIS CONCEPT... SOMEBODY NEEDS TO WRITE THIS

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109: After arguing w/Justin, Michael disappears...

it could be good, just so Justin or Brian isn't responsible for the disappearance

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Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Brian and Lindsay's college escapades...

God... Sounds Really Good!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: What if Mel and Brian are more related just by being Gus' parents

Sounds almost too good... I'd love to read something like this.  I can just about imagine all the things that could come up, especially with their history. Regarding Jacks estate... I presume he was a lot more wealthy than in canon...

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Is Mikey up to no good or just crazy?

Something I would LOVE to read. Mikey crazy...  Yeah, I can definitely get behind that.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

OoooooooH.... SOMEONE please write this.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Still More What Ifs

Some really good plot bunnies... I especially like #11, but I think #7 holds real potential. I also put in #122, which features Craig as a closet gay man, so that's very plausible.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - ALL SURROUNDING MEL'S PREGNANCY

I ABSOlLUTELY LOVE #6!!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - More Random What Ifs

I hope someone can do justice to #30... It sounds like a great story idea.

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Date: Aug 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: A Whodunit...

I love suspense/thriller fics (I'm a BIG fan of Dean Koontz)...  Anyway, I gave this some thought, and I like the Gus and JR angle. Only, Michael has planted the evidence leading to it. He's upset because he has made some major screw-ups lately (as only Michael can do), and he hasn't been able to afford to give support money for JR for a long time, resulting in Mel being in the process of having his parental rights revoked. 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128: What if it was roleplay...

Great story idea. This could prove to be very good... I can see an anti-Michael fic in the blooming.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126: How did Justin's hair grow so fast?

Could be a good crack fic... I can see a 'Pinocchio' in the concept.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Mpreg

Kiddoditto:

In regards to this Bunny... Ashita has a story called, 'Britin: A Day in the Life'... where a planned pregnancy takes place. She has 107 chapters written, although she hasn't updated since July 19th. There's a prequel called, 'The 25 Days of Smut-Mas'. VERY good so far.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84: Michael's new toy...

Perfect crack fic. Did Michael take a picture of Brian to a wax sculptor at PIFA? And, how did Michael get enough money to pay for the sculpture?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79: Justin and Brian meet when...

I can see all three of these plots as good reads. Good Job Deb!

#1 could have so many possibilities. Justin was already going to work for Brian, sooooo... maybe he goes to work in the New York branch instead.  Mel and Lindsay could both lose their parental rights. But, what happens to Jenny? Is Michael any kind of a father? Can Michael afford to keep Jenny? Are Michael and Ben still together, or has Ben died and left everything to Hunter?

#2 the race is on to prove Justin's innocense, and find the real kidnapper. Does he look similar to Justin? Is it a set-up? Does Michael find out Justin and Brian know each other and are having a secret relationship, and Michael is trying to get Justin out of Brian's life? Is Lindsay involved with Michael's scheme?

#3 Okay... Just how young is the 'young blond'? If it's only been two years, the little boy can only be a little over a year old. Scenarios... Did Brian and Justin have their one night stand? And did Justin top Brain, so that Justin is the father? Or, is Brian the father, and recognizes Justin as his one night stand that he has never gotten over? How would Justin have come to be with Gus in the park? What's Melanie's reaction when she learns the truth of Lindsay's deception?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80 - Lindsay's deceit...

Wow! Could be intense. Another angle to the bashing... But maybe Brian can intervene in time. Or, Maybe Chris decides he really likes Justin... Hmm...

Reviewer: bjluv Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139: Expanding on bunny I previously posted…

Hey Deb!  This sounds great!  I like the new concept you came up with. I originally liked the idea, as you can see, but your expansion far outweighs the scenarios I came up with. The question is, How does it come about that Brian learns the truth? Did Lindsay leave the 'Father's Name' blank on the birth certificate? Does Mel know the truth? If not, what's her reaction when she learns of her wife's deception?  This would be an awesome read writers!