Penname: BritinManor Real name: Cathy
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Summary: Justin Taylor is a young and rich CEO that Brian becomes determined to add to the Kinnetik portfolio. Even before meeting the young man, he becomes hungry for much more. What happens when the ultimate top more than meets his match?

 

STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: Anti-Michael, Jealousy, M/M, Out of Character, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123102 Read Count: 47483
[Report This] Published: Jul 16, 2021 Updated: Jul 23, 2021
Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 16, 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Hunting We Will Go

Can we have someone slug Mikey’s mouth shut? Maybe Brian? How about haul him out by his ear and tell him to shut his trap about his life and stay out! It wouldn’t take me but three seconds of my time to get rid of him.

It seems Justin wants to set up a three-way, with Brian in the middle. I’m anxious to see how the night progresses.

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

Not to worry, when the time is right, Michael will be put in his place...but, by who and how? Fun fun. LOL. Michael is certainly a pest that needs to be swatted fiercely!

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

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Date: Jul 16, 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Surprising Realization

Wow! These are two very determined men. And with Justin allure and persistence, and his predatory instincts, I still think Brian will bottom first. Maybe something like a deal closer on the account.

It’s going to be fun to see how it plays out.

Sean must really feel how Brian is way different than the rest, that he’s so concerned and nervous.

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: One Door Opens

Wow, wow! Gutsy move on Sean’s part. I suppose he wanted to know ‘why’ or ‘what’ Justin sees in Brian.

But if Brian tells Justin about their little rendezvous, I think Sean will be history.

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Closing the Deal

So HOT! Yummy, yummy. And our normal hunter, Brian, just became the prey. It looks like some hot, fun times ahead.

So I hope after that meeting that Brian’s mind is elsewhere and he totally forgets the request to spend the evening with Mikey, Michael thinks he’s setting himself up - and it wouldn’t surprise me if Michael broke up with David - but widdle Mikey is soon going to see himself replaced, and then I think trouble will be brewing.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael probably isn't going to handle someone of Justin's determination and strength in Brian's life. I think we know his objections won't matter one bit. If he was wise, which we know he never is, he would accept what he has with David because he will never get what he so obviously wants. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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Date: Jul 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Brink of Insanity

Someone has just gone over the bend into a crazy, mad psycho world. If I was Brian, I’d get a restraining order, because I have a feeling he’s going to need it. Mikey will probably be showing up at Kinnetik, or waiting when he gets out of Kinnetik, the gym, Babylon… yikes! I’m scaring myself!

If I was Brian, I’d go take a scalding shower!

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Taking Care of Business

OK, I don't know about others, but I am literally drooling here! LOL! I almost need a reading break again!

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Haha. The sexual tension is high, perhaps that's what happens when you have two ultimate tops so intensely into each other. :)

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: An Agreement Reached

I have no good words to say how powerful and amazing this story is, and to say I love it is an understatement. Although I hope there is some relief from all this sexual tension and some actual story pretty soon. I don't believe there was PWP tag. LOL…

I was hoping for a heated, heated kiss about the time widdle Mikey burst in unannounced. Because I know THIS Justin will chew him up and spit him out, without a second thought.

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Cathy. I do hope you continue to enjoy this story. This take is so different for me, as you know, and I thoroughly enjoyed telling their story here. No, I don't consider it PWP but at times I can see where it might seem so. LOL. 

Mikey is probably used to Brian going easy on him because of their long-standing friendship; however, Justin won't be so kindhearted. Not at all!

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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Date: Jul 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: It Begins With A Kiss

Well, the whole dominant factor was entertaining... but the REAL fun is whining out in reception. God, I'm so excited to see how that goes down! I have a feeling that Mikey will try to talk back to Brian, and supernova Justin is going to put the little man in his place! EXCITING!

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Facing an Enemy

Wow, wow! That was explosive! I really hope Brian figures out that the ONLY reason Michael wants him isn’t because he’s ‘in love’ with him, but the mega dollars that go along with it.

I mean - how pathetic. A man that age begging to be loved, and in front of witnesses, one which is supposed to be a friend.

I’m surprised Justin foot didn’t come out so Michael tripped on his way into the elevator. He wouldn’t necessarily be tripping him down the stairs, and maybe the knot on his head would pound some sense into it.

Will we actually be seeing much of Emmett and Ted in this story?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael is about the most pathetic he could possibly be in this story. I remember having fun writing him like that, and actually hearing the whine in his voice as I did it. LOL.

This is a different Justin in this 'verse. He has no patience for someone like Michael, and I wouldn't keep pushing him if I was Michael. But, the little worm isn't that smart, or so it seems...

I can't remember how much we see of Emmett and Ted, perhaps some, perhaps more of Ted since he does work closely with Brian. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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Date: Jul 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Recapturing the Mood

Lots more hotness - but I enjoyed Ted’s attempt to make Michael understand. Michael has gone around the bend and entered Crazy Land. Then Michael said that the blond got to Ted too… man, where’s the crew with the straitjackets?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael is beyond delusional here, it's borderline creeper. Hopefully Brian is taking all of Justin's warnings to heart. 

Thanks for commenting!

:)

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Date: Jul 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The True Master of the Hunt

Okay, I'm not coherent. I gotta hurry up and get my jaw off the floor. I don't have much in the way of anything intelligent to say so let me just say that was HOT, HOT, HOT, HOT!!!

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: A Conspiring Evil as Desire Soars

Lots of HOT sex in this story… LOL…

But now we got some plot at the end. Michael’s crazy if he thinks anybody will take that job when they find out just who the guy is. You don’t mess with billionaires/multi-millionaires (whatever Justin is) and expect to live.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

The steam is deliberately amped up in this story since it's such a different take and a display of what would happen if Brian encountered someone equally dominant as himself. Definitely was meant to be a story with a lot of sex, but I think there is plot as well, perhaps more as the story moves forward. 

Thanks for commenting.

:)

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Cunning Plot and an Unquenchable Desire

Alright… I really hope there’s a few chapters of plot pretty soon. These men can only have so much sex, right? And is Brian going to keep playing bottom boy? He is gonna be so sore he can’t walk if they don’t trade off. And I would think Brian would demand he get a chance to top Justin.

Michael is crazy. How can he think he will get away with this? How much will Debbie get out of him?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, there is definitely a lot of sex in this story, but again, I think expected when Brian has met someone equal to himself in all ways, perhaps even more arrogant. LOL.

Regarding Brian topping, Justin hasn't held anything back about that being something he does not do. Things would have to develop more in order for Justin to change that rule that I think is more strict than Brian's ever has been. However, we do have more plot on the way, of course, largely with Michael's insane nonsense, but that won't be the only bit of drama either. Of course, that's not to say there won't be more sex. There will. LOL.

Thanks for commenting. 

:)

 

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Morning Bliss

Wonderful! Justin had surveillance on the little worm. Or were his phones tapped? Anyway, your time is about up, Mikey. Looking forward to how this plays out.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin is extremely resourceful and not like the Justin we normally see - obviously. LOL. Mikey doesn't have a clue in many ways, but I'm sure his wakeup call is coming.

Thanks for commenting!

:)

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: An Obsessive Evil

Old Kippy boy was true about one thing, you are forever in their pockets and they can demand money at any time. If they threatened Deb, Michael would have to get the money. Mikey is so inept, I’m not sure how he could think this through anyway!

I love this plot development.

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Just Another Day at the Office?

I really hope that when Brian and Justin actually get together, that there is a switch up of ‘top/bottom’. There is no way that Brian could forever be in a relationship if he was solely a bottom boy. No way.

So Mikey is in a dilemma. Stay at the shop and meet Kip, or go to Kinnetik to see what Brian wants…  Although if he’s not at the shop when Kip comes, Michael could be in trouble that way too.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Since there is a bit left in this story, it's possible that the dynamic will change between Brian and Justin. I do agree that the Brian we know wouldn't bottom this much. At the same time, in this story, Justin does seem a bit more of an alpha male that even Brian. Perhaps that will even out in time. I guess we'll see. :) 

Mikey is definitely in a bad position. Boo hoo about that. LOL. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: A Shocking Declaration

Well, Mikey knows the truth now, but will it be enough to back off? Or maybe he won’t believe them?

Hugs,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 19, 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: A Bond Severed

I really have to wonder how Debbie will take the news. And I’d be surprised if she doesn’t blame Brian, or at least ask him what he did to cause Michael to do this.

Michael talks about life savings. I’ve never know him to have 15,000 just laying around. His cash flow always seemed paycheck to paycheck.

And here we go with Brian bottoming again. I just really don’t think that’s fair. Justin is taking a part of Brian’s livelihood. He’s always been a top, and unless they can switch, Brian will never totally belong to Justin.

Hugs,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 20, 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Awkward Encounters

Sounds like Justin is going to have his hands full of a not very friendly Sean.

And Debbie… she still seemed uncertain if Brian wasn’t to blame somewhere in there. Even after hearing the tapes: but tell me, exactly how much did you do to cause it?

She KNOWS Michael is guilty and at fault, but still doesn’t want to lay the whole problem at Michael’s feet.  Now I wonder if Michael will be totally upfront with Deb, or will he try to sugar coat it. There’s just way too much story left to think all will be sane from here on out.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Debbie always seems to need to blame Brian. I don't think she can ever accept that Michael does these terrible things on his own. Even when she has the proof someone else has to be the blame. 

Yes, there is a bit of story left so probably too soon for smooth sailing just yet. 

Thanks for commenting!

:)

 

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Date: Jul 20, 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Closing One Door to Open Another...

Poor Sean. I think when he went back to CA he KNEW - and that’s why he slept with Brian. But then to get the call from Justin, his heart wanted to believe Justin had decided that they could be together again.

Why do they always fall for someone unattainable?

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 20, 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Game Changer... or Road Block?

This is a subject that I’ve already commented on. You can’t take a top like Brian and make a total bottom boy out of him. Especially now, finding out that Justin isn’t skittish from a past rape. He just wants CONTROL. And that's just SELFISH!

So if Justin wants a commitment and later possible monogamy, they share the top and bottom positions. Because if Justin isn’t willing to give Brian the chance to top, their relationship is doomed.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin probably doesn't realize he's being selfish. It's just how he's always been. I suppose becoming rich and powerful at such a young age has contributed to many of his tendencies. 

But again, give it some time. There are a lot of chapters yet. Something might change for them. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 20, 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Choices... and Consequences

Good for you, Brian. Justin is being selfish. Real love is based on Compromises. Do het couples ALWAYS watch the channel the man wants? Hell NO! Brian would lose something of himself if he settled to always being on the bottom.

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 21, 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Opening the Lines of Communication

I’m glad Brian is sticking to his beliefs. I know there’s LOTS of story left, and that scares me about Michael too.  I’m sure in time, Justin will consent, he really does seem to love Brian. How would he feel if the tables were turned?

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin does love Brian. Justin is extremely dominant here and a bit ruthless as we've seen a bit of in his dealings with Michael. I think for one so young to achieve success as he has he would have to be. Even if Justin allows Brian to be the top, I can't ever see it being a 50-50 exchange in this particular story. I guess we'll see how it all plays out.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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Date: Jul 21, 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: An inevitable Decision

YES! HALLELUJAH ~ ABOUT TIME!

HUGS,

Cathy

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Date: Jul 21, 2021 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Dream or Reality?

I hope the evening goes as planned. I was a little iffy when Justin said First time. (like this is going to be the Only time.) I hope he’s totally aware that from here on out it will be a give and take situation.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think Justin is going into it thinking he is doing what the man he loves needs, and he certainly doesn't love the idea of Brian tricking, so what choice does he really have? At least, in his mind. This should give them a better chance at their future and relationship, but I can't see Justin changing completely. In this 'verse, that would change who he is as well.

Thanks for commenting!

:)