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Bio:
Seasons 1& 2 Hybrid with emphasis on the bashing and the recovery from it as I think it could have/ should have happened.
Initial Plot Bunny from Deb Tanner: What if Michael had tried to stop Brian from going into the prom and had witnessed the attack?
Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Claire Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Father Tom Butterfield, Gardner Vance, George Shickel, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, James Stockwell, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin Taylor, Kenneth Reichart, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bashing, Bottom Brian, Brian/Other, Drug Use - Recreational, Hatred, Homophobia, Justin/Other, Language, Mental Health Issues, Minor Character Death, Non-Consent, Non-Monogamous Pairings, Orgy (plays well w/others), Out of Character, Prostitution, PTSD, Rape, Real Life Issues, Self-Harm, Threesomes, Toppy Justin, Torture, Voyeurism
Genres: Alternate Canon, Angst, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Justin/Other, Emmett/George, Justin/Other, Michael/David
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 285328 Read Count: 212211
Date: Mar 07, 2024 Title: Chapter 53: CHAPTER 41: MONEY MATTERS vs. MANIC MONDAY Part 2
Love your acronyms; I always get such a kick out of them. <3
Please update - I can't stand the wait for Constance to have a FEW words with "Miss Lindsay." Hopefully in front of Brian, Justin, and Mel. Fun times are ahead!
I know the smart thing for Gardner, was beating it out of the office, but I would have liked to see him wheedle a bit more. Really get Constance's dander up, before her meeting with Lindsay.
If he goes to Chicago permanently, he wouldn't need the title of co-CEO, would he? Or is that the title he would have fallen into in Chicago? So in Chicacgo, he'll the Executive Manager?
In regard to: Trying to give the pitch of my life to one Brian Kinney. I'm not sure if I follow, because they've already got everything lined up for Kinnetik. Work done on the building, and employees lined up, right? I sometimes wonder if I'm mixing stories up.
Have a good one. I really appreciate you taking the time and giving us these chapters.
XO ~Cathy
Date: Jul 25, 2019 Title: Chapter 41: CHAPTER 29: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS… STRAIGHT Part 1
THIS WAS AWESOME!!! I totally LOVED their easy-going camaraderie. You would think they had been best friends all their lives. You did really well with this chapter, Nichelle. BRAVO!
I, too, worried a little about John and Peter, and the lack of DNA, but I would think the state of Pennsylvania, would recognize that Brian took them in, clothed them, fed them, hired a care-giver for them... really has to account for something. And Jennifer could still be a possibility. Molly might have a devious nature, but she's not a BAD child. She would probably love to have kids her age around to help her plot and scheme.
Speaking of which... how's Craig holding up??? Has he had to clean the pigsty or the calf barns, yet? (you, not being a country girl, have no idea how awful a calf barn is!)
Oh Well. Again, I loved the chapter,
Cathy â¤ï¸
Date: Jul 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 42: CHAPTER 30: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS… STRAIGHT Part 2
This was a nice little update. It was good Justin talked everything through with Daphne, I think it probably helped him see things a little better. And that conversation with Brian... he may just end up being surprised how it turns out.
Brian knows what his best friends are capable of and what they have said and done. Maybe Justin's brand of love and honesty is something he might find he's really needing.
I'm not sure if anyone is keeping Mel and Brian abreast of all that's going on in Pittsburgh right now... and I know they can't deal with any of it... but at least knowing ahead of time... might be beneficial.
Well, since Justin, Daphne, John, and Peter were at the restaurant, I'm going to presume that Gus is in the stroller sleeping while they were eating. *smirk*... sorry... couldn't resist.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
LOL! You are presuming correctly. Funny thing about my guys in relation to Gus. The ONLY time Josh and Sam went to sleep AT ALL (or should I say when the heck they were supposed to) is when they were out and about in their strollers. Josh has Wake-Sleep disorder in which for every minute he sleeps equates to 1 hour of awake time. Meaning that if he sleeps for 20 minutes, he's up 20 hours straight. FUN, right? As for Sam, he suffers from insomnia, and both are Elopers. My family has spent many years sleeping in shifts so that we can watch the doors and windows. Needless to say that sometimes we miss their strollers even now! But at almost 24 and 18, we all have learned to keep a good sense of humor about it otherwise. Laughter really is the best medicine in situations like these.
As for everything else.... have you been peeking at my screen all the way from your house? Let me find out you have a spyglass that reaches all the way here, LOL
HUGS and LOVE,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 44: CHAPTER 32: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS… STRAIGHT: PITTSBURGH EDITION Part 2
If Cromley stops to think about the situation as a whole, he should be having Craig arrested for statutory rape. Criminal charges and prison should be forthcoming. But, I AM confused. How does it figure with Craig as the father, that Jennifer would be the grandmother? Because, even after it was determined Craig was the father, Mindy STILL said Jennifer would be the grandmother. Jennifer wouldn't be ANYTHING! Not any legal title. The wife/ex-wife of the father. Nothing more.
The twist with the Hammonds... I cannot imagine where that is going to go, because Brian isn't Joan's blood. And even if that DOES NOT factor in, there is NO WAY on God's green Earth Brian would marry Lindsay. Brian will have more power with Justin than he EVER would with Lindsay. Miss Delusional is at it again.
EMMETT'S GOING TO BE DADDY!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Apr 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 45: CHAPTER 33: LEGACY… ONE FORGED
A fine web you weave...
I have to wonder if Virginia is aware Brian DOESN'T have to marry to inherit. I'm almost thinking she is, and that's why she's hellbent on getting the documents. So, the big question, is what is the deal with the Peterson's, and just why does she want the union between Brian and Lindsay? There must be a side deal there or something... or maybe blackmail of some sort.
And maybe I'm thinking too hard...
But, good job, Frankie... you spoiled their underhanded maneuvers.
The Schickle residence will be a good place to stay while in Pittsburgh... because other than the hospital, they will be unattainable there.
Can you imagine John and Peter's impression of the Schickle Mansion? I can just picture the wide-eyed wonder.
And Emmett's going to be a daddy soon! Is he in the delivery room? I hope they have smelling salts close by.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: May 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 46: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE
I've sat here for a little bit after reading this trying to absorb everything. And unless I'm missing something, just how does it benefit Virginia, Nancy, and Joan by making sure Brian married Lindsay? UNLESS Lindsay was involved with the plot, and agreed to 'pay them off' for making her dreams come true. Because, just the fact that Brian and, therefore Lindsay, would have been rich beyond means, I doubt selfish Lindsay would have shared the wealth. Which brings another question to mind, if Lindsay IS aware of the inheritance, does she want Brian because of the inherited wealth, or the fact she thinks she loves him and he belongs to her?
Now, on the flip side, I think copies of those documents should be made easily accessible to all those little flooosies. Let's see what attorney they use, and see how much change is made, and the whole lot of them will be going bye-bye for a VERY long time.
And ah, poor widdle Joanie... I presume she thought by making Brian her power-of-attorney, was not because he'd know when to pull the plug, but because he would be responsible for her well-being. He'd have to take care of her. And with all his wealth, she would be taken care of in a style she had been denied her entire life, besides him having to deal with her. Ah dear, Karma's a bitch, because not only will she never see Brian, I hope he hauls her ass in some less-than-adequate ward facility where care and treatment befits how she cared and treated him his whole life.
I look forward to your very descriptive writing regarding Joan's horror when she realizes that it's Justin and Melanie she will be dealing with, and not Brian, himself.
Thanks for the update!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: May 18, 2021 Title: Chapter 47: CHAPTER 35: A NEW DAWN
OMG - BUT I HAVE MISSED THIS! So, so good!!
Lindsay telling Nancy fibs - doesn't she realize the TRUTH wil come out? "Gardner and I decided..." More like, Gardner laid the law down, even after you begged and cooed.
And if either of them think Nathan is going to help them... Well, you just made me LMAO! Ooh, do let us hear them ask and try to cajole the help from him! I will want popcorn for that! It should be entertaining.
“If you have an emergency, please dial 911.” WAY TO GO, RONALD! And why do I have a feeling Nancy is about BROKE? 6k isn't going to last long at the Hilton.
Mikey, Mikey, Mikey - you are persona non grata. Do everybody a favor and leave. Because even if Brian or Justin can't come near you - doesn't mean there's not at least twenty other Liberty Avenue people willing to don dark ski masks and do the job themselves. And I'm very curious about his last statement about what Lindsay does with the EXTRA money from Brian. But - fun could be had for all (except Mikey) if he shows up at what he assumes is Mel and Linds' house! LOL.
I'm going to have to go back and read a little on those conditions on the inheritance because I was thinking about how Joan got the inheritance if Brian married her choice. But since Brian isn't Joan's - will that matter? If I get stuck, I may come hollering... be prepared! LOL
Good Chapter - and thank you so much for finding the time to bring this to us!
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: Sep 17, 2022 Title: Chapter 48: CHAPTER 36: SONG OF THE HEART
As son as I read: but there’s also been a new development - I was fairly sure there were two babies. Oh God, Emmett's going to go broke buying all those girl clothes. Even though they are babies, I can see him insisting they each have their on wardrobe!
No smelling salts - or fish - this time! LOL...
Emmett's gonna be a fantastic father!
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Sep 17, 2022 Title: Chapter 49: CHAPTER 37: I AM SINGING
Do I sense another dyke in town in Desi? Ooh... Emmett would be so proud! And Lula has proven to be the fun-lovin' aunt we all expected. I think everybody is in for some laughs. And I can only imagine the lip-kicking a few women and Michael will have coming!
I'm so happy for Heather and Joan. They can finally be together the way they've wanted to be!
Lookout World... here comes another twosome with the namesakes of Justin and Daphne! Should be lots of fun!
AND OMG, Joan is awake! Let the FUN begin!
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jul 11, 2023 Title: Chapter 51: CHAPTER 39: REVELATION KNOWLEDGE
OMG! OMG! OMG! When I saw the update in my email, I was wondering if I could try to do some somersaults, but realized if I got down on the floor, I probably wouldn't be able to get back up! LOL...
Where do I start??? I've been rereading this for the last two and a half days. I just finished it a short time ago. WOW! To have a wish come true! I was actually contemplating leaving a review.
I actually read this chapter twice. I think I read it too fast the first time, then slowed down to help me take in everything. I was going to ask about the seals. I was wondering if it was probable to have something like that duplicated. I mean, when you have experts that can read or duplicate a signature, then aren't there professionals like this? But then after Emmett's process of elimination, it was found anyway. Now, the copy that Frankie found, will that match the one that Gene read out loud? And just who did they get to make all those phony wills and testaments? I'm also curious about how each one differed. And wouldn’t it be funny if Joanie’s “care and feeding” took care of her monthly stipend and emergency fund? Boy would that chap her hind end. The fact that she still owes money on her house is kind of unreal, anyway. BUT... this brings me to question if you are going to let “widdle Mikey” die? Because if he does, I doubt Joan would ever see the light of day again. Granted, she will get prison time, but with death, it will be life. But maybe Mikey will have no desire to heal, especially if doesn’t hear Brian talking to him. Granted, I heard nothing or even knew time passed when I was in my coma from having my neck broken. But there are others who say differently.
I really had a laugh when rereading this story. It cracked me up when Lindsay was thinking about how it was wrong for Melanie to have slept with Shavonne. Well, I think she should look in a mirror… and see what the face of a “wrong person” looks like. At least Melanie had class (until Lindsay), and didn’t sleep with bottom feeders.
Thank you, thank you, thank you, for this wonderful update. And I so appreciated your sentiment. I’ve missed you so very much, too. Good luck with your paper. I’m sure they are no fun.
My love and tight hugs, beautiful lady!
Cathy
Date: Jul 11, 2023 Title: Chapter 39: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS
Hey Chelle,
I've been rereading this story, trying to get it done before you update it.
This chapter wasn't ringing any bells, so I wonder if I had missed it when it was posted, since I didn't leave a review. Anyway... my question is... has too much time passed for Brian to file any abuse charges against Joan? And, would the laws back in 2001-2002 be the same as for 2023? Maybe they have been uodated since the telling of this story vs today's laws?
Well, needless to say this has been a lot of fun reading it all at the same time. It really helps to get the excitement of waiting for an uodate all the more fun.
Take Care.
Hugs and Luv,
Cathy
Date: Jul 11, 2023 Title: Chapter 51: CHAPTER 39: REVELATION KNOWLEDGE
Oh dear me! I came over to look through Ambigusweetie, and it suddenly hit me that one of the biggest reveals of this chapter, was the dollar amount of the will. I mean - OMG! How can a couple of families amass that quantity of money!!! That's just unreal! Anyway... please give us a warning in advance when Lindsay is going to find out, so we can put on noise-canceling headphone. She might break the sound barrier and be heard in the U.K., Ireland, or possibly the world. If Ms. Loosy Goosy would have just been a little more patient, she would have more money than her little heart could ever spend. I have to wonder if she'll connect the dots and remember that it was Nancy who sent her to the bank that day, and that was what started her downfall.
Well, maybe Brian and Mel will give a million dollars to everyone at Christmas! LOL...
Cathy
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yeah, all I can say is that Ms. Plans is in for quite a few surprises, beginning next chapter. I don't think she'll be able to come up with enough contengencies to prepare her for the knowledge of both Brian and Mel being out of her reach permanently. But we all know Lindsay always seems to regroup instead of retreat. On the surface, I already know when the whole Circle of Cuntery is going to find out about Brian's inheritance, but it's going to take a while to set up.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
Chelle
Date: Jul 22, 2023 Title: Chapter 52: CHAPTER 40: MONEY MATTERS vs. MANIC MONDAY Part 1
Lindsay's list of grievances had me laughing. All the way from Brian down to lowering Russo's zipper. Criminy... how does that woman even walk straight? LOL...
I've just got to say, "Good luck, Lindsay, if you think you can get in good with Murph so that he will give you access to the mainframe." LMAO. If only she was able to hear his thoughts about her!
I just can't wait for this whole sordid mess to blow up in Lindsay AND Gardner's faces. I can see Gardner spitting and sputtering that Constance ruined his fun. Although, maybe Gardner should thank Constance for getting Lindsay out of his hair. Because I'm under no illusions Lindsay WILL double cross him if it will benefit her.
Needless to say, I sure hope Carl and Shavonne can find the weak link in the station, and find that report. But yet, I think there is a way of getting deleted info on a computer. Hmm, I'll have to ask my son. He's the computer wizard.
Lastly, FBF... out of all the acronyms I could gather in my head, does it stand for: F**K Buddy Friend? None of the others fit, as I don't see them being FB friends. (and it took five minutes before I came up with that one.)
Well, I'm still giggling here. Thanks for the double post today. I thoroughly enjoyed them.
Hugs,
Cathy
Justin has been back from New York for a week and in that time the "family" just wouldn't leave him and Brian alone to enjoy their reunion. There have been countless calls demanding Brian produce Sunshine, unannounced visits and several walk-ins performed by Michael, of course.
On one such evening, as Brian and Justin are in the middle of foreplay, Michael barges in and without regard to what he interrupted demands that they join him and the guys for a night out at Woody's. When Emmett suggests a "couple's pool game," Brian and Justin have to decide if the stakes are too high -- Freedom from Family vs. Learning to Share. Who will win the Tawdry Tournament?
Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 10k+ Word Count
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: ALL IN
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14290 Read Count: 6418
Date: Sep 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: ALL IN
Really liked this. The tournament was hilarious. Mikey was a pain in the ass. I wish Brian would have put him on the spot though, when he was putting Justin down. Then the asswipe went directly to the loft, after telling them he would agree to the terms of the contest. How is Ben allowing this? Well, on my way to start, "All In 2:Love and War"...
Hugs, Cathy
Brian and Justin's reflections on the Death of an Icon
Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Post-series
Genres: Alternate Universe, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fic
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4068 Read Count: 726
Date: Sep 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. I too, loved Prince. He will always live through his music. Thank you for this tribute.
Hugs, Cathy
The first episode of season 3 was unbelievably off the mark for me - and for so many reasons.
First, Justin made the biggest mistake of his life by choosing Ethan over Brian, showing just how far he had strayed from the ability he once had to read the man who had thrown away his rule book, and was scrambling to write a new one as he went along.
Worse still, in my book however, is that while Brian had plenty to answer for to Justin regarding his behavior, it was his family that once again blamed Brian for all the wrongs in the world, never once considering the fact that hitting Michael was so far out of character for Brian that something really huge must have triggered it.
Once again the golden child could do no wrong, only Brian knowing how far out of line his so-called best friend's comments about Justin had been, and everyone quickly rallied around Michael with love and support, while directing nothing but anger and disgust at the one man who had always been there to pick up all the pieces in their lives.
Ok...so now that I got that off my chest
Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anti-Michael
Genres: Angst, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3483 Read Count: 4705
Date: Nov 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- it could have happened
I have read this a few times. I love "anniversary party" and "MIKEY'S BIG MOUTH" fixes.
It's a really good story. You even got Brian admitting his feelings, you got rid of the fiddler, letting us also know that he never really 'had' Justin.
Debbie walloped her son across the head - Well, about the only thing missing was everybody telling Mikey he disgusts them, and Ben telling him 'adios, amigo. I can't be with you anymore.' LOL.
(Do you get that I don't like the little weasel very much?)
Hugs, Cathy
After eight years of marriage, The Taylor-Kinneys are about to find out they really DON'T KNOW each other at all. Danger, Intrigue and at the bottom of it all the TRUTH. Loosely based on Mr. and Mrs. Smith, WELCOME to Assassination Nation!
***THE STORY IS NOW COMPLETE***
Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Dave, Minor Character Death, Violence
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Humor, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71074 Read Count: 24717
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: MAKE ME DO FOR LOVE WHAT I WOULD NOT DO
HOW IS IT, THAT I HAVE NEVER READ THIS!?!
I was needing to get out of the heavy, so I looked at what else you've written, and settled on this!
Very different concept. I see we don't have Mel and Lindz as cast of characters, so that in itself should be interesting. I did see it's Anti-Cameron, which should be interesting since Mikey is holed up with him.
But, let's see... for still having 53k words to read, we've already have read of, Stockwell, Hobbs SR and Chris, Gardner, Craig and Ethan's demise. Boo-hoo. I'm trying to figure out who we have left. Well, David of course, (it stands to reason) the Sap, HMM... Russo and Kip? I'm doing my best to think Villians here. Reichert? Okay, I'm done...
The only thing at this point that I can see, is B/J talking, come clean with each other, and join forces... because I can almost be certain they don't kill each other.
Good Story, so far.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- LOVE COMES DOWN TO THIS….
Okay, I could have sworn the beginning of the chapter was something I would have watched in The War of the Roses, with Kathleen Turner and Michael Douglas if they had been secret hitman. Shooting up their house? hene...
Okay, so you are bringing in Mel and Lindz? Okaayyy!
Absolutely loved this... 'killing husbands while fucking'... I did see a woman do that on a movie one time too. Kind of messy though. If I ever write a murder mystery...
Loving it!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- LOVE, EXCITING AND NEW….and EXPENSIVE as HELL!!
Holy mother! A big enough arsenal within their home! And they kept their lives SECRET!?! And I loved some of the places you came up with that Justin was using as hiding places! Sneaky blond!
Now we have the little pissant following them! Lordy! If he follows them to where they are going, they are going to have to tie him up and muzzle him!
Is the warehouse at 6 Fuller, corner of Tremont?
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- LOVE ON TWO-WAY STREETS leads to POSSIBLE LONELY HIGHWAYS
WOW! So much going on. So, Sap and Kip... EEW! Worse yet... Brian and David??? So, Michael must be a replacement therapy. So sad that Brian didn't give David the fight he wanted... NOT!
So, Michael hasn't seen Brian for ten years, but he still thinks he's his best friend. Yeah, I don't think so. Am I surprised everybody thinks of him as a sniveling, whiny man? Nope.
I thought of one more, could-be, bad guy. Brandon. I wonder if he will pop up. Anyway...
I like Jen's and Ben's past, nice touch.
Why didn't Em see and notice Jackie's attraction and lay a big 'ole wet one on Ted?!? that would be comedy in the best of form.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- LET LOVE RULE
I see I was wrong earlier about the address. Apparently, Brian and Justin already own the loft.
I was enjoying the chapter immensely, until toward the end. I have mixed feelings. If Michael is aware of what's going to happen, why push buttons? If you're going to stick around, either OBEY, or GET OUT! Because you know what's going to happen, if you don't.
EEW, YUCKY... Justin, Michael... So, not only is Michael jealous of Justin, he's jealous of Brian, too. He's wanted both of them... permanently, and they have both shunned him sexually, and yet have each other.
Is this where I say I'm looking forward to David's demise? Besides, I can't take any more of his fantasy thoughts about him and Brian. *shudder*
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- CHAPTER SEVEN: IT’S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE Take 2
That was ... Interesting.
David is a scum of the lowest kind. After everything David said at the table, when Mikey does not show back up and they go looking for him, there is going to be no question in anyone's mind who killed the two in the bathroom.
I really hope there is a slow, painful death planned for David.
Ah-ha! Brandon was a good guy. I guessed wrong.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- LOVE AND WAR
You're kind of sadistic, aren't you? Even I shuddered with the 357 Magnum between the legs. Ouchy, Mama!
I hope Debbie gives it to Cameron good! VERY Painful. I hate men who exert their power and strength over someone weaker.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
WARNING: EXTREME GRAPHIC VIOLENCE ...
Here I was so sure David was going to get his just-due, and yet the other two cretins who suffered their demise. And oh, what a demise it was. It didn't bother me reading it... what does that say about me? *yikes*
But through the ?horror? I really had a good laugh... mini-uncooked bratwurst ...
Wherever do you come up with this stuff? have you ever read Richard Laymon? It kind of reminds me of a couple of his novels.
Well, I do hope we get to be witness to the Docs, too.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Hmm... I just realized I never left a final review. Not surprised as I had stayed up all night reading it last time, while devouring a 12 pack of diet pepsi. Anyway, it was an awesome story. I liked the slight changes you have just made too. If I could have added anything in to the final scene with David, I think the guys should have stood in front of him, Brian reaching around and jerking Justin off, then when Justin let go of his release, sprayed it all over David's face. Kind of a 'Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West'. Think it would have worked? Yeah, probably not. But David certainly would have lost any erection he had.
Thank you for bringing ALL of Liberty Avenue into a remake of a cross between Mr. and Mrs. Smith, and Dexter.
HUGS ~Cathy