NO, Brian didn't get his clams, AGAIN? What sort of fucked up universe are you writing here? ;)

That was so bloody hot, Brian fucking Gary, while Justin watched and gave instructions, then helped him out at the end... meow. And the audience watching on. Why can't I find a beach like this?

Poor Brian, sunburnt and twisted ankle, clams would have made him feel better ;( LOL

Oh Justin, you naughty boy, blowing Brian in the middle of the store.... that was hot though. And I don't know why, but the idea of Brian with a cane is so yummy lol

Phew, it's getting hot in here *fans  self*

That karaoke scene was sizzling. Firstly, I love picturing Justin up there, singing his ass off, shaking his bootie and getting the crowd going - and I seriously loved how both Brian and Justin put Ethan in his place. But that dumb fuck is clueless - and I kinda worry he may cause trouble along the way... Cant Brian just push him overboard and be done with it??????

LOL Sally, I feel honoured... kind of ;)

It's funny how much them holding hands made me smile. It's like they're both craving this closeness, this need to be together, and they both don't really know it yet. It's like Brian went there for a reason, he needed some cookie (and lots of hot ass) in his life.

This makes me want to take up mini golf.... well not really, but damn, I'd have loved to have watched that game *sigh*

It's weird how perfect it is to have such smut and such cuteness all in the same chapter, but it works. I am so excited to have Gus visit. And urgh, Lindsey and Mel are going to really rile Justin up, I can feel it lol

Whether Justin is willing to admit it or not, he was hurt by what Brian had said and the cold shoulder that he was getting. They both deny to each other they want more, but their actions and emotions speak a completely different story. Oh, silly boys <3

Ahhh! I had so many emotions while reading this chapter. Firstly, the morning sexytimes scene was hot -  and Brian is getting braver when it comes to Justin going near his ass. Will there be a side story as to why he doesn't like bottoming or is it just because he's a deliciously big, bad top?

The whole scene with Lindsey made me so mad, but then the moment Gus came on screen I was smiling so huge. He's fucking excited to pick seashells with his Daddy. Justin is going to MELT seeing Brian as a Daddy, I just know it!

That party was hot, and the skinny dipping was exactly how I pictured it. Poor Brian, though, that porpoise just wanted a friend ;) But seriously, throwing in about how the kids spent their summers learning to swim and Brian was at home hiding his bruises? EMOTIONS, MAN!

I am so in love with this story. And you ladies.

It's fucking sexy as hell that Brian can cook, is that weird? Also, I now want to try making my asparagus like that #random.

Urgh, fucking Lindsay, and Melanie need to DO ONE. Brian is a fucking good dad, just because he fucks around, that means nothing when it comes to what sort of dad he is. And I love how Justin can already see this. I know this is meant to be a super hot smutty fic, but I do hope we get to see Gus with Brian on the island... :)

Okay, so I was going to start my review by mentioning how much I LOVE drunk and carefree Brian, but that can wait, okay? WHAT I REALLY WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT... "“You are gonna fuck the mad right outta me. That’s what we are gonna do. Now get in the fucking house, Cookie!”" < that was so fucking hot I cannot even... Justin must think he has died and gone to heaven.

Brian didn't realise just how much he was enjoying his cookie's company, did he? And the fact that he's been dreaming of being fucked by him surely says something - but of course, our Brian is in denial, isn't he?

love love love. You girls rock my world.

Oooh! I look forward to where you're taking this and I can't wait to read more. Great idea :)

OUR BABIES ARE HAVING A BABY.

Lindsey and Michael need to DO ONE. How dare she come into Justin's house and talk to him like that?

Loved this <3