Penname: BritinDynasty Real name: Pushpanjali
Member Since: Nov 27, 2018
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Love reading fanfics *BriTin. ❤


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[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: May 15, 2021
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Date: Jun 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 39: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

❤ Justin is a keeper. Love the way he never let Brian feel any less (In Qaf, after Stockwell, during Cancer). Lindsay, Micheal, Joan, (Deb too) are total fool, if they think "Justin is a kid" . Proven yet so far, Justin don't kid when it comes to Brian. Its good see Brian and Mel banterings along real family.

Curious, what Syke left for Brian? what will happen Next? Also in Pitts. But More likely The Delusional Twins (M&L) Rolling on their As***.

ThankYou, for update. Hugs ðŸ’•

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Date: Jul 08, 2019 Title: Chapter 40: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Once over the obsession with show, one see how vain, immature is Micheal, Lindsay and Deb characters are. Can not get over their pathetic attempt to interfere between Brian & Justin.

Absolutely No Mercy or Pity whatever gonna happen to Moron Micheal & Lunatic Lindsay (worst excuses for friends ever). Brian, Justin are better without them. Wonderful written.

Hugs ðŸ™‚

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Date: Jul 25, 2019 Title: Chapter 41: CHAPTER 29: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS… STRAIGHT Part 1

This conversation Brian and Mel see each other as friends both always been, but was blinded cause of Lindsay manuplations of years. Clearing the distances & concerns. I agreed on Qaf Leda is better match with Mel. Lindsay character never behaved equal with anyone.

Judge will on first count ban Cunt Jaon from breathing. Peter & John are Best without & away her. Brian's Right Justin is more a Man than a boy. He always has.

Thankyou for updating. Kudos to your wonderful writing. ❤

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Date: Aug 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 42: CHAPTER 30: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS… STRAIGHT Part 2

It was healthy update.

Justin shown so maturity. His thoughts on their relationship. Justin's right, he & Brian need to communicate, Speak up ( in Qaf it would hav clear many things & would not been played emotionally by idiots Micheal & Lindsay). It was only cause Justin (and Gus) Brian feel loved & burden free.

Kudos to your writing. Curious for more. Hugs❤

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Date: Sep 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 43: CHAPTER 31: THE NEED TO GET A FEW THINGS ...STRAIGHT: PITTSBURGH EDITION

I like it. Lindsay having no say. Good for Vance, showing some sense not letting Lyndsay having her way. Being thwarted in her attempts. Glad for Lynette and Emmett. And I agree, with Em decision for not involving Momma Novotony (its her & her OFFspring fault). :)

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Date: May 31, 2019 Title: Chapter 38: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Wonderful update!! ✨

Glad there will lawsuit on Mikey's whiny mouth, his screeching. I Don't know how Brian, Justin and others ever stand him in Qaf. Micheal just hides so behind double faced lies. Emmett is infact a beautiful example of Proud Queen. Micheal should take lessen how to be Mature. More imp. from Justin & Brian.

"Trinity of Twatry" lol. Emett right, Baby is genius. Suberb! writing. Enjoyed it. Hugs❤

& Whatever Carl thinks, hope it works out. Curious that How will Lindsay & Micheal & Joan (twerking Dumba*** trio) will react of knowing Brian & Justin being Out of their reach with Mel, Gus, Peter, John.

Summary:

SLA BANNER

Justin has escaped a gilded cage mired in abuse. Having finally broken free, he is now looking to redefine himself as a man.  When the offer to become the new Art Director for Kinnetik PA comes in, he jumps at the chance for freedom.

Brian hires Justin as the new Art Director for Kinnetik PA but Brian has secrets of his own. Can each of them teach the other to trust someone other than themselves? 

THE STORY IS COMPLETE!! 

HAPPY READING!!

~NICHELLE


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brandon, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gardner Vance, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James Stockwell, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Mysterious Marilyn, Original Character, Ted Schmidt, Tucker, Vic Grassi
Tags: 100k+ Word Count
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188278 Read Count: 74034
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Jul 08, 2019
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Date: May 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 29: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY

I Would love to STAPLE Lindsay's mouth. Nothing justified, what she did to Gus.

You always successfully put us on edge. Will they able to stop plane taking Sunshine?! or not?! What is Conner's plan?

Fantastic writing! More please. :) ❤

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Date: May 08, 2019 Title: Chapter 28: CHAPTER 28: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS

A comforting speech David but not gonna help cause Justin with Seven is kidnapped. Conner really dreaming long. So much Suspense.

Sending lots of love & hugs... hope you get enough time update next one. Can't wait. ðŸ’•

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Date: Feb 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 27: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH

Gus is a brave kid. I hope he will be okay, so will be Leda.

Lindsay & Craig gonna certainly pay hell for their crimes. Hope Micheal pays his debt too. Their messed up thoughts are same.

Stockwell out.... we have a mystery killer ?!

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Date: Jun 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 30: CHAPTER 30: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 3: A TIDE TURNED

O My GooooOoOoooodddddd!! Showdown awaits...

Well done. More please. ❤

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Date: Jul 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 32: EPILOGUE: TO INFINITY AND BEYOND

Justice done great! Kind of feel emotional seeing this story completed. Going to read it again. I loved every second of reading it. You are amazing. ThankYou. *Emmett *Hugs❤

Summary:

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Several months after Brian and Justin part ways, a private airing of their dirty laundry results in a night of passion that neither one can forget or stop. But what happens when Brian is tired of playing second 'fiddle' to the fiddler? And how the hell do they keep the Gurus of Gossip aka the 'family' from finding out about their affair?
Based on the plot bunny from TAG!


Categories: QAF US, Plot Bunnies
Characters: Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Other Cast Regulars, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Ethan, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bashing, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, Hatred, Jealousy, M/M, PTSD, Real Life Issues, Season 3, Toppy Justin, Voyeurism, What if...
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Humor, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Justin/Ethan
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 291087 Read Count: 185736
[Report This] Published: Sep 13, 2016 Updated: May 21, 2020
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Date: Mar 28, 2019 Title: Chapter 47: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

No holding back indeed. As far as possible from trouble twins. Seeing How Micheal is, hope Deb not give them trouble. Excited to read what happen next...

Thankyou for update. H&Kss:)

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Date: Aug 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 49: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD

It would had not come this far if Deb had realised how immature, whiny, manuplated Micheal is. Looks like she still not ready to see full mirror. Micheal raging, fuming is always a bliss. Great!

So glad to see your update. Kudos to your writing. Hugs ❤

Summary:

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What if Justin didn't run off to New York after Brian's loft got burgled? What happens when he decides to face the situation like an adult? Join us on the journey to find out.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 500k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Family, Getting Back Together, Jealousy, Oral Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Slow Burn, Toppy Justin, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/David, Ted/Ben
Series: Tricky Business
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 729701 Read Count: 114706
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 29, 2021
Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed
Date: Dec 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Saturday, December 9th

Fantastic chapter !

I started cracking up from the Diner scene. You had us all from very start. Brian and Emmett laughing together to hide their evesdropping lol. "Give the man an Oscar" and other dialogues, Superb!

Poor Brian , thinking Who the hell is BOB taking over His Sunshine. I can just imagine Brian's face when he will came to face ,more like holding his replacement in hand the "Battery Opperated Brian" 😁 oh God *squealing like Emmett.

*hugs In love with this story, Kudos for your writing.

Merry Christmas! 🙂



Author's Response:

Welcome! We're thrilled that you're reading our story. :)

BOB is one of our most popular original characters. :P

Thanks for all the lovely compliments - and for taking the time to leave a review. :) Comments are the best motivator ever.

Happy New Year! :)

~ KaBrynn

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Date: Jul 13, 2019 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

Wonderful update! Hugs to You, Brian and Ted. Feeling great reading this chapter. As Justin finally been taken care. Waiting is over. Oscar telling about 2 thugs attaked Jus night before. Ted concerns over Sunshine. Love Protective Brian for Sunshine (even he gonna ream some sense into Justin later). Love it, how event fold out. Also Ted is one who become a true friend of Brian after Justin. I respect it. Carl is truely a father figure.

If Deb noticed, (In Qaf) she would have know how Brian was miserable alone before Justin came. Even sweet, Deb only cared for Micheal, who is 30 but behaves immature, sits on his arse, read comics & does nothing. *Brian's voice "It's true."

ThankYou for update. Satisfied. Gonna read it again.⭐:) hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely comments, Pushpanjali. :) We always look forward to hearing from you.

Well, Justin has almost been taken care of. Right now he's freaking out, wondering whether his bad decision to take drugs will have drastic consequences. He's lucky to have Brian and Ted looking out for him. Protective Brian is always popular (as is protective Justin). And now we have protective Ted! It doesn't get much better than that.

You're right - Ted is a true friend - better than a certain so-called best friend. ;) Although, to give that unnamed person some credit, he probably would be there for Brian, if not for Justin, if he actually knew what was going on. Do we hear a high-pitched whine? :P

Based on your comments about Deb, you might enjoy the one-shot I'm (Karynn, aka eureka1) currently writing. It's not at all anti - you-know-who is still the best friend - but it addresses some of those same concerns from Brian's perspective. Look for the fic in roughly the next two weeks. It was supposed to be out for my third anniversary as a writer, but real life has sucked, and interfered majorly, so it’ll be late.

We're made up by how much you liked this chapter. Our apologies for leaving Justin - and you - on a cliff for so long. :/ Keep holding on with your fingertips! - it'll be a while before we get out the next chapter. There is a teaser in the FanDoc, though; take a peek if you haven't yet.

Hugs back atcha. :)

~ KaBrynn

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Date: Jun 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Justin always been a remarkably strong person beside Brian. Being in so much pain still Justin was able to school, give test. later doing GG-job. I don't fault Justin taking those pills in Pain Haze State.

Love reading Justin's school, his class conversations & Brian Loft comic scene.

Action Needs to be taken. IF Brian wants his "Sunshiny Wet Dreams Come True", He needs to be known what Justin been through. Also Keep Justin for Kinnetic(after his treatment). Hobbs needs to be put in his place, so does two thugs who tried take advantage of Justin.

ThankYou, for the update. Hugs ðŸ™‚



Author's Response:

Justin is incredibly tough - that's one of the many characteristics that makes him a good match for Brian. :) The decision to take drugs was a bad one, but understandable under the circumstances. He does need to stop and think about what he's doing, though; there could be serious consequences.

We're made up that you enjoyed the scenes at St James. :) Brian and his cohorts had a great time, although Brian remains convinced that he was almost completely sober. Sure. Keep telling yourself that, stud.

:D Sunshiny wet dreams :D Good one. That's the desired outcome for Operation Twat Retrieval. :D

Is there anyone who doesn't want Hobbs to get his just deserts? Besides Hobbs himself, that is. Maybe Dickhead, although there's doubtless another jock ready to cozy up to him, so he probably doesn't care all that much.

Thanks for the wonderful review, Pushpanjali. :) We should have a teaser for the next chapter up soon - we're banishing real life!

~ KaBrynn

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Date: Apr 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

"blond blowjob fairy" Brian's so onto Justin. Kinnetic is on its way up. Hope Brian would convince Justin to work with him, so leave GGB work. Enjoyed banters of Cynthis, Ted, Brian.

I feel for Justin. Frau is so kind, hope she & Daph, Syd will kick the hell out of Chris. Most importantly Kinney's reaction of this attack on Sunshine. Payback is needed.

Thankyou for update. hugs !:)



Author's Response:

We love that blond blowjob fairy almost as much as Brian does. :D

Oops! I forgot a couple of the women when I responded to YumYumPM's review. Frau Rose and the monitor, Angela, should definitely be added to the mix.

We'll have to see whether Justin fesses up to Brian and, if so, how the stud reacts. You didn't actually expect us to reveal all the plotty goodness to come, did you? :D

Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer, Pushpanjali. :) We're working on the next chapter - now if RL would just stop being such a royal pain.

Hugs back atcha.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th

*in Brian voice "  I'm glad you updated. Thanku, its always a pleasure to read more of this fic."

I love their intimacy. Hot! Hottest couple ever! excited for Brian's next move of his OTR.

I wonder if Mikey ever knew about Brian bottoming for Justin, more than often, hard in nights. Micheal's delusion a** would be farting probably. ðŸ¤”*😁

Aside from Brian & his *Operation Twat Retrieval, one of my fav. is Justin, Daph, Sydney scenes. Also the snowy atmosphere described during Justin's walking. Hugs to Deb n Vic for taking care Justin (SAT, Bob) . 

Kudos for your writing!❤



Author's Response:

Ooh, Brian is being super polite. He must want us to convince Justin to move back in with him ASAP... yesterday, preferably. :D

OTR? What the fuck is that? Brian wants to know. My one true rump, maybe? Yeah, yeah, keep believing that, big guy.

That might be too mild a reaction if Michael ever finds out about Brian bottoming for Justin, but it would certainly raise a stink. lolol

Thanks for letting us know what you enjoyed most about the chapter. It's great how each reader almost always has one fave that is different from everyone else's - in this case, the snowy atmosphere. :)

Thanks for reviewing, Pushpanjali. We got a kick out of your comments. :) The teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed
Date: Dec 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th

A Christmas joy reading. Loved it.❤

Thankyou Harley for spitting on face of the BOB-napper Micheal , he been always shitty to Justin through series. More I watch, the less i like him. Mikey is 31 yrs closet brat don't know when to shut up...badmouthed behind Brian. His nature is such manuplating.

Vic don't justifies on Micheal's behalf. Let Micheal face his f**kups. I bet Micheal is behind the robbery(also in show cause Justin been new, doesn't mean careless, directors & writers didn't cleared that robbery matter) . Truth will come out, it can't be hidden

Love the Father-Son time, Justin nearly blushing all over Gus, Harley, Vic & Deb banterings. Gus's "Dad Fuh Jusshhin" sounds like reminder. Wish Vic's health get good. Love understanding between Ted & Ben. Also David and Ben's take on Justin in undies. 😏

Happy holidays & have a great year 2019. ðŸ˜Š



Author's Response:

The perfect exchange for Christmas and New Year's - we write and post, and you review. Thanks, Pushpanjali. <3 It doesn't get better than that.

Harley got the perfect revenge for Michael's BOB-napping and dumping the dildo in his cage. Although Vic isn't blind to Michael's sometimes childish behavior, he doesn't know how awful Michael is to Justin, since the teenager doesn't 'tattle' to Vic. 

The theory that Michael is behind the robbery is a very popular one. We'll have to wait for Carl and Wen to complete their investigation, however, to find out whether he's the culprit. The two detectives refuse to be rushed, so we can't say when the truth will come out.

Yay, another convert to 'Bented'. :D So far, all our readers like the pairing.

Many thanks for more lovely compliments - we're chuffed that you enjoyed this chapter so much.

We wish you a great 2019 as well. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed
Date: Feb 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th

The joy of reading �’�😍  *dreamily .....

It reminds of my time of NET paper, all same. You nailed every descriptions, every moment, students anxiety, exam instructions. 

"You should make a beeping, backing up like that." So do Ted leering at Justin like that. ;) . Love Syd's name game, the whole diner scene , group of them playing it. Micheal's stupidity is given. That underwear should given him clue that Brian & Justin are still together doing it. Btw Thanks David. I'm not gonna eat dumpling now. Yupp!.

Brian should really stop Micheal annoying behave towards Justin. In Qaf directors were like trying to hide Micheal's every wrong behaviour. As at many times Micheal was one to blame.

I love Brian name for Justin "Breathtaking" ❤. One of the name I love Ted's given  "Territerial" for Brian is for Justin. Enjoyed it all very much. 



Author's Response:

You and Ted. :D :D Both proceeding dreamily... :D

The 'joys' of those all-important, do or die, standardized tests are really relatable, right? Thanks for letting us know we nailed it.

The diner scene was a real hit with our readers. Michael is offended that you don't think he'd be better for Brian than the blond wonderbutt. :P

You can look forward to at least one more round of the one-word description game. We may even solicit our readers' input, so keep an eye on the Facebook groups.

We're so proud of our favorite brunet stud for 'breathtaking.' Talk about nailing it. :D :D And Ted really did have the last word.

Thanks for reviewing, Pushpanjali. :) Our wonderful readers motivate us to keep writing. A snippet for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc if you want to take a peek.

~ KaBrynn

Summary:

 

A Partner-free Week Getaway has sent relationships spiraling out of control. After a public altercation, landing the couples in front of Judge Marcus, four skilled counselors will have their work cut out for them to save the well-known couples of Liberty Avenue.

The question is: can they be saved... or do they even want to?

*This ambitious work is 5 stories in one fic! 

Before I Let Go: General and Counselors Povs

Staying or Going- Brian and Justin’s story

In or Out- Michael and Ben’s story

The Wife or the Mistress- Ted and Blake’s story

Fire and Ice- Emmett and Drew’s  story

 


Categories: QAF US, Plot Bunnies
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Melanie Marcus, Original Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Drug Use - Recreational, Established Relationship, Jealousy, Language, M/M, Out of Character, Post-series, Real Life Issues, Season 3, Season 4, Toppy Justin, Voyeurism
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 190994 Read Count: 156640
[Report This] Published: Apr 06, 2017 Updated: Jan 08, 2021
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Date: Jul 18, 2019 Title: Chapter 64: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: 7 LIVES EXPOSED: IF ONLY YOU KNEW…

Hope that Yuri guy get pain of getting ride off island with Micheal. "Micheal simply is, Always will be the Most Pathetic Character." He needs a hard knocking lesson of life. Good idea to have Alex there, while opening those letters.

Also Can't wait to read Brian feelings on Justin's letter & what Brian writes in letter for Justin. What is happening in Pitts? Did Deb learn her mistake taking idiot son side?

ThankYou for the updates. hugs:) ☘

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Date: Jul 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 66: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: 7 LIVES EXPOSED/ IF ONLY YOU KNEW Part 3

Worth reading every words. The depth you given is beautiful. amazing, especially Brian & Justin. Their caring & loving for each-other. Kudos to your writing. ⭐

Still upset with Qaf writers for messing up, seems ended show in rush.

ThankYou for update. hugs:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your continued support of my work, Pushpanjali. It means more than I can ever express in words. Admittedly, I'm ambitious in a way few are when it comes to producing work of this magnitude. So it is such a joy, relief and pleasure to know that it's all paying off, and that you all are continuing to enjoy this labor of love.

HUGS and LOVE,

~Nichelle

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Date: Jul 23, 2019 Title: Chapter 67: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: GIVING UP IS SO HARD TO DO…

Thats right. Micheal will be left with nothing. Out of 3 main cast, Hal's character is only, who is total Immature, Clingy, Whiny, Irresponsible. Being nice never sits him. You did justice writing all characters.

Hope Tino+other idiot get crashed into ocean deep & Michel to hear how Yuri got reaped a new one by Justin (Mini-Rage).

Micheal disgusting fantasy of palm spring (want to wring his neck with Deb's apron). like it when Mikey get served. He & Deb deserves it. Making nice with Ben will not help. Brian is better without them. Like chapter title, Mikey thinking concerns me. Him hell bent on rid of Justin by any means, still knowing he could Not Win.

Curious for more. ☘

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Date: Jul 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 68: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

You are Amazing! So fast. sending *hugs💗

Love every moment. Ben reaming michel another one. Him looking in mirror, feeling free. Ben deserves better than Micheal. Don't know how Debbie will react? aside from blaming others rather herself & her 35 years old infant. "Like Mother Deb, Like moron Micheal." Screeching, whining together.

Thankyou for Wonderful update.🙂



Author's Response:

Thanks so MUCH! I'm glad that you are continuing to enjoy the story! There will certainly be MUCH screeching and whining for them to do in the coming days.

~Nichelle

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Date: Jul 26, 2019 Title: Chapter 69: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

You are a beautiful writer.

I agreed with every analysis points.

Micheal character was never an ideal type as Qaf writers tried. He always was an immature & needy, totally clingy. Ben loved him, still Ben has to stoop low to be with him. Can't be said same for Michel.

Hope the guys clipped his mouth, so his Screeching get shut. Let Michel keep fuming. Did he hear about Yuri having his pea balls ripped out by Sunshine.

Loving your stories. More please. Hugs ❤