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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2019 11:42 am Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

Wow,no wonder you had to get this story out of your thoughts.  It is fantastic.  Love the writing, but then I love everything you write.  I am slow at reading right now, but I will get caught up.  Take care and keep writing.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2019 6:45 am Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

Really love how they decided to not only stay together and how they discussed the ‘trial period' but also how they decided who they could trust with ‘all' the information and ‘some' of the information. Vic would always keep their truth to himself until he's told otherwise; so would Jennifer. I think Ted would even if Brian didn't threaten him. LOL!

Love the Prince siblings. They certainly know Lindsay! And poor Stephanie (or is it Josie?), drooling over both Justin and Brian without a chance in the world; just like the rest of us. LOL!

Lindsay claiming Justin was in a semi-abusive relationship?! What a bitch! Can't wait for Brian to hear about that!

"foreign asses" I love that!!! It is so Brian!

I do believe that Brian and Justin are going to fit in perfectly at DPAA.

Loving this fic!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2019 5:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

Well I like Dee and DeMarcus they are honey straightforward people who don BS about who they want working for their company.

Brian and Justin Wil fit in well here because they enjoy being around people strive for success instead of expecting it to be handed o them just by association.

Lindsay is going to be the biggest problem when she finds out the door to Brian's coffers will be shut off towards her and Ted should be in charge of the money for Gus and Only Gus.

Plus Justin is going to achieve the kind of success Lindsay never could because she is too lazy to work for it, but she will bust her flat Ass to manipulate a situation for her own Happiness and selfish goals.

The amount of effort she and Michael expelled to get rid of Justin could be used to forge their own success instead of trying to ride on Brian's coattails and assume a position by his side that neither are qualified for.

Brian and Justin will be able to breathe in California instead of being strangled by others selfish demands.

Cynthia will enjoy California!

It is beyond time for Brian to figure out that Lindsay and Michael should have been regulated to his past, they are much to needy and self-absorbed  to realize that Brian never needed them but they can't function without him.

And it is time to deal with Deb and her need to blame everyone for Michael's selfish behavior plus her need to bully Brian until he bends to get will, it is time to cut the dead weight and move forward cause Deb, Michael and Lindsay would rather see Brian drown than leave them behind.

Justin's assessment of who to tell about their marriage is accurate let Lindsay, Michael and Deb to flounder trying to find out what is going on while they get everything set up in California and for their friends.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2019 3:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

I love how you describe Emmett when he spills the beans and gets people around him so confused that they forget what he just said.

It's great that they are thinking to get Ted on board; that would avoid the crystal period.

These quote are genius:

“Portfolio, passport, wallet, overnight bag, laptop, suit, lube… you,” Justin answered

“Briefcase, garment bag, passport, wallet, reservations for the hotel and car, laptop, condoms… you,” Brian answered.

It's rare when Brian acknowledges Justin's resilience, emotional strength and maturity.

Justin's words for Brian are also impressive: "with that innate grace and power, Brian Kinney was a walking, talking aphrodisiac", "He was as potent as one dose of Viagra, and dangerous to peace of minds everywhere."

Justin is also noticing things that he wouldn't have a few months ago: the "Keurig" he would like to buy.

"unattached and eager to escape a semi-abusive relationship": this one is going to bite Lindsay in her flat ass!

It's great that DPAA were already looking for both Justin and Brian, due to Liberty Air ad.

“Who the fuck are you?” is my favorite quote from Brian; he really is bold. I would say that the rest is history because it seems that he already has the job even before the interview.

DeMarcus is pretty accurate: "as much as you and Justin are alike, you are also very different.”

The fact that DeMarcus is sitting across from Brian on another sofa instead of the other side of his desk says a lot about how he sees Brian: already as a partner, not as a candidate.

I already told you several times: I LOVE your style and your stories!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2019 1:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

I'm looking forward to seeing how they let Vic, Emmett and Ted in on the secret.  It looks like QAF is moving to California. 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2019 8:21 am Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

it's going to be so much fun to see the reaction of Lindsay and Michael when they realize that not only is Justin staying in LA the way they want, but Brian too. It's good that Dee and Demarcus know Lindsay they will certainly be able to help. Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2019 4:22 am Title: CHAPTER 4: WHITE DIAMONDS Part 2: SIDE TO SIDE

This was such an awesome update! I chuckled through so much of it...I found the part with Emmett - although very true - fairly funny. And you already know my feelings on *cooing*... but yes, Ted needs all the preparation and ammunition he can in order to deal with Lindsay accordingly.

When DeMarcus got into Brian's car... I laughed outright at Brian's comment about how Justin felt about foreign asses... that was classic.

It was SO nice to see DeMarcus and Dee have Lindsay's number. But, when it's actually disclosed about Brian being a partner in the firm - that Lindsay and Michael believe they got Justin's foot in the door at - well, let's just say, we better all get earplugs. Them thinking they were removing Justin from Brian's orbit - only to find he landed smack in the middle - yep... going to be fun!

So, what's all happening in Pittsburgh?

HUGS  ~Cathy

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