[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 4:53 am Title: Chapter 16
Hella story! You do a very convincing Evil Lindsey. And the subplot about the erotic garden was a hoot. Great job and keep it up with the crazy productivity - we readers love it! TAG
Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 16
That was great, I loved it! ~ Kathhleen
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 22, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the image of the trees... Justin can paint them, maybe as an archway into a private space for Brian and Justin...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another fun fic, I'm loving it! You are the most prolific writer, you must write in your sleep... he, he, he....
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
I have to finish things it kills me to leave things undone. It comes from running retail stores. I have to refrain from writing on my work computer.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:56 am Title: Chapter 16
Another job well done!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad you started writing these stories! I have to say I'm an 'anti-??' lover and I eat up stories where one of he crew is the villain. Your's are done with such humor that they are a pleasure to read. Those of us who are absolutely fail at inserting the humorous aspect are a bit jealous. ;) Good work!
Roni
Author's Response:
I have to say I became obsessed with Paper Boats on the Hudson. I like to laugh so I want everyone to laugh with me. Thank you for all the compliments.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 16
You gave Brian and Justin the ending they deserve because they are totally devoted to each and their family, I am glad that Mel found someone who makes her happy and adores JR they are a good match.
I thought Emma was talking about Lindsay when she said 'Dirty Stinky Butt' lol, I am happy that Brian decided to have another kid because those kids will be showered with tons of love. The twins names are two cute I look forward to getting glimpses into their lives as they grow.
Brian telling Lindsay off was funny I am happy she got what she deserved sorry she brought an innocent child into her childish behavior, but hopefully his father is there to protect him when Lindsay goes off the rails (I doubt she will stop, for the moment she has just found a new target).
I can't wait to read it all over again this was just wonderful and I look forward to more from you :)
Author's Response:
I wrote a new story it starts out sad. I hope that it will work. It gets happier and of course will have humor. It bashes a lot of characters.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 12:36 am Title: Chapter 16
Where to start. The twins, how cute. Then they had another son. boys outnumber girls. Glad that Sarah and Mel got together, it seems perfect. Roe on the other hand is not nice to Brian. Frying a laptop? Naughty, naughty. I have to feel sorry for Jacob, married to Lindsay. Poor guy. There must be some way to get him access to his son. Thank you for giving us a look at four years down the line. A story about the Disney Cruise would be nice. You might need to research for it and take a cruise! I'm gonna miss this.
Author's Response:
My sister’s cat did the same to her computer. The Disney cruise is awesome and I already have a story for that. I will probably write the sequel in a few weeks. I can't wait to see Justin out smarted by his kids.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
Another great story! I really like Brian and Justin together raising a family. I hope you consider writing a sequel.
Author's Response:
Yep can't let the kids grow up without us.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH I'm so sorry to see it end!!! Lindsay got her gay man....and then got left by the same. Nancy should have been happy. She must be crapping in her shoe that Justin and Brian are great parents to their four kids while she's barely tolerable to Gus and possibly her other son.
The birth and baby names was so touching. Also glad that Brian was able to be a father again from the beginning with not only Justin's but his own. I LOLd at Emma calling Gabriel "dirty stinky butt." At first I thought she was talking about Lindsay, LOL but it was nice to see she was talking about the baby.
I would definitely enjoy a sequel or a series of one-shots showing the progress of all the characters in "Why Not Me." I have enjoyed it immensely!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
This one is probably my favorite so far. I want to watch the kids grow up. Can you imagine three genius kids.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsey is where she needs to be. shame her mom is such a bitch. She obviously learned her own behavior from her. Glad Nancy willgive gus's rights to Mel and Brian. Wonder how long she'll be away for.
The garden party.........what I've been highly anticipating. OMG.........I must say, I laughed so bloody hard reading this. I was on break at one of my jobs and people seriously were thinking I was a loon. I was in stiches!
The way you had everyone involved...the little details...everything. Absolutely brilliant description and so beyond my expectations! Loved it and have read it about 3 times just since last night.
I know you're getting ready to wrap this up. I really hope you think of something new to write! Your writing has developed even in such a short time. I was really impressed with your first story you put here, but even only 3 stories later there's a definite maturity and highly developed ability.
Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you I started this writing because I got to control what was done. I really thought I would fall on my face. My next one is at the beta this one isn't going to start out as funny but well I have to have humor so it will be there. Thank you for enjoying it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 15
Nancy is getting her wish after all... well at least to some degree. With Nancy signing over the rights to Mel and Brian, Lindsay has no ties legally to her 'shameful past.' I doubt that Lindsay will be very happy with Nancy's decision but then again it won't really matter since Nancy admitted Lindsay into the facility and therefore Lindsay can't check herself out at will. That would be an interesting conversation to read about, LOL
LMFAO!!!!!! OMG! The Garden Party was Absolutely STUNNING and so befitting the Liberty Avenue Family! I'll bet that Katherine finally learned her lesson about being a nosy neighbor. If she starts harassing the person 3 doors down, I hope they take a page out of Justin's book. I wonder what the husband would have thought of all that? He probably would have laughed himself to hiccups at the sheer genius and hilarity of it all. Brian definitely taught them well! I swear if they ever make a QAF movie, I want to see this scene in it!!! This was CLASSIC!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Don't worry...another chapter of SLA is coming sooner than you think! The alternating POV approach in this story definitely inspired me to delve into the characters' psyches and pull out some hidden (and not so hidden) motivations for their actions. It should definitely be interesting!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 10:36 am Title: Chapter 15
I can see that a lot of research went into this chapter. I really thought the Gardener's Association were real and to find out that it was Todd and Babylon dancers was hilarious. Wonder where Katie's husband was during all this?
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Love it love it love it
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:55 am Title: Chapter 15
You cracked me up with "the Gardener's Association members aka Todd and Babylon dancers for their help".
Poor Katherine: she really had no chance at all.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:31 am Title: Chapter 14
The cat is out of the bag: Sam blew Lindsay's fragile bubble as delicately as ever.
Good job Daphne!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 15
I must now to your wicked genius, that was too funny I am going to be laughing about that for the rest of the night, Katie was out of her league the second she opened her mouth that garden will be quite a story for years to come *lmao*
Nancy committing Lindsay and signing Gus's custody to Brian and Mel is going to make Lindsay's head Pop when she finds out and that makes me giggle.
I wish there was pictures of that garden party I bet the flowers were beautiful and I bet Katie won't be able to look at flowers without cringing in embarrassment. *roflmao*
I think I am seriously going to cry when this ends, but I am going to love reading it all over again! ;)
Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:41 am Title: Chapter 15
Again...HILARIOUS!!!!
Date: Jul 20, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg....this chapter was hilarious!
Author's Response:
Thank you I aim to keep everyone laughing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 14
Linds is right where she needs to be. The looney bin. If Nancy wants her compliant, she's gonna have a long wait.
Author's Response:
Think Stratford that's all I have to say. Garden Party is written finally took me forever to put it together.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 2:50 am Title: Chapter 14
OH MY GOODNESS, THAT WAS FREAKN HILARIOUS! Sam did exactly what I wanted him to do, Daphne was a brilliant puppeteer for Sam and Lindsay's reunion, I just love the fact that at first he couldn't remember her, then went straight to insulting in his own un-charming way, I was cracking up!
Brian telling off Lindsay was funny too, she seriously believes that she get Brian to stop being gay and marry her...The chick is off her rocker and destroying her room didn't help because now Mommy has her committed lol
Every New Chapter You Amaze Me :)
Author's Response:
I wrote the garden party hopefully it works.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 2:17 am Title: Chapter 14
LMFAO!!!!! I'm still laughing like a LOON at this chapter! First, the dinner conversation was fabulous and set the tone for the rest of Lindsay's evening. Can we say EPIC fail?! I think we CAN!
Then her ploy to get Brian to side with her and guilt him once again trying to use Gus as a bargaining chip/ BITCH! Brian's comment about her pussy had me laughing and wincing at the same time. DAMN!! That was so freaking Brian!
Then to top the art scene off, Justin makes a fortune by gaining a new commission off of the man Lindsay is supposed to be concentrating on. And then (Damn I love Daphne!) has to face the music of her affair with Sam in a public venue. LMAO!!!! Well at least it can't be said that she didn't follow Nancy's orders by not mentioning her past relationship with Mel (who I'm happy is chilling out with Sarah, BTW). Sam took care of ALL of that business including telling of her 'possible' skills in the sack.
Well, now Lindz is going to a psychiatric hospital indefinitely! I would say that is a fitting punishment for the pain-in-the-ass prima donna. I doubt she gets 'cured' since there's nothing wrong with her except that she's willful and spoiled... in other words, she IS her mother's daughter!
Happy Writing and HUGS!! Oh this was AAA-MAZING!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wrote to get your muse going. The garden party is written God I hope it lives up to everyone's expectations. Thank you for keeping me entertained during this.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 2:06 am Title: Chapter 14
lindsay is out of control and thankfully everyone recognizes her craziness. Love Daphne - and the garden as usual is fun- wish we could see pictures=- glad Gus is not manipulated by Lindsay
Author's Response:
I think crazy is Lindsay middle name. Thanks for staying with me.