Reviewer: Britinfan1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2022 9:43 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

I thought Lynette's husband was named Oliver??

Author's Response:

Hiya

Her husband is Oliver in Love at First Bite II; if you've read that one as well.

Thanks

MissMerlot

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 1:52 am Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Before I get to the story, I just want to say, whoever made the new banners for this story and 'Smoke and Mirrors', did a FANTASTIC job. They are the most beautiful banners I have EVER saw. 

I was a little worried when I first started reading, thinking, "Nooooo, Faal, you can't go there", and I felt something was wrong with this scenario. Then I thought, okay, maybe this is a setup, and he plans to abandon Lindsay on the island. Then the knowledge of her being slapped with the news that Zee is actually still a part of Faal's life, and Lindsay was actually there for servitude, had me smiling and chuckling.

I loved the little smackdown Ronald's wife gave Nancy at the beginning. Her almighty thought of cheating on Ronald, got her what she deserved.

But Michael pairing with Stockwell?  Look out world! Are him and Stockwell in prison together? This is another story I am going to have to go back and look through, because I'm a little muddled on the why's and how's of prison, and how long they are sentenced for. And is Brian's position as Councillor, actually the Mayor?

Waiting for more of this. Already loving it.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^= 

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:00 am Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Great! Its finally here!

I was worried at first but the smackdown came later was Awesome by them. Still dreaming Linds really? , accept it you can never be Zee. One trouble taken care of. Its time to pay your debts Lindsay dear. Enjoyed Brian & Justin romance. Councillor BTK .

What is moron Micheal and Stockwall is brewing? Plus sinister Luther is upto? Better watch out. Brian and Faal are very protective of Justin and Zee and their lovely family.

Excited to read MORE. Kudos for your writing. Best of luck!! 🍀

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 6:54 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

It was a Brilliant Plan because Lindsay would be too busy daydreaming and acting all superior to notice that she got played lol

Lindsay will so enjoy catering to others high demands instead of being catered to <giggles> plus being on a tropical island sounds Wonderful especially with dishpan hands

Who did Ronald marry?

And since Marcel doesn't have as much as Ronald I hope he is an Amazing Lay?

So how long before Nancy comes to visit Lindsay?

Brian is a Councillor?

Too bad no one stopped Lindsay's email and Michael didn't get internet.

Great Start :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:43 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

A very interesting start.  At first I thought it was just a dream, but it seems that you have many an interesting plan.