Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2019 11:50 am Title: Chapter 6

I really enjoyed the small POV from Carl he is often overlooked 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2019 7:45 am Title: Chapter 6

Michael does not understand what he did, he is stuck in his delirium, a pity for him. I do not wish him dead but I hope that his fellow prisoners will make him realize what he did and its consequences. Everyone's scared for Ben I hope he'll be fine because Jenny needs him. Are you planning on letting Michael know that David is getting close to Ben, he's going to explode! I can not wait to read what's happening on Lindsay's side. Great update

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

I do hope Michael isn't dead but I hope is head is pounding when he wakes up?

Ahh If Only That Has Also Been Lindsay Too ;)

The kids had to know Jenny is scared along with Gus and everyone else for Ben I do hope he will be waking up soon.

David and Ben got sucked into Michael's world and they were smart enough to get out now they can find Happiness whether it's as a couple of just friends they will know that loving someone isn't a mistake the mistake is pushing it away because of past hurt.

Michael like Lindsay is just don't a minor bump and in time everyone will move past this pain and see that Happiness isn't a passing momemt, it is a Lifetime of Joy and Laughter with very few dark days.

Everything Carl thought about Brian and Michael is accurate Michael abused everyone around him because he is Selfish and Self-Absorbed, Vic was the best Father Figure Michael had but instead of embracing and cherishing that time they had together he saw it as a burden, while Brian cherished every second Vic spent with him as more valuable than gold.

Brian took crumbs and turned them into diamonds with sheer determination to never let anyone beat him down again.

While Michael took diamonds and turned them into o crap simply by being a lazy, pathetic, disloyal son, friend and father, he was given every advantage to succeed and wasted it (Just Like Lindsay) by expecting everything to just be handed to him for being born.

Michael and Lindsay were so determined to make Brian love them Forever that they didn't care about the collateral damage they were doing and even after being caught they are looking for excuses to get out of jail so they can stalk Brian again, they don't care about Mel, Ben, Gus, Jenny just what they Want, Crave, Need, Desire, Covet.

Thanks for the Update 😃