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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2019 7:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

Whoa, that was hot!!! It's been a long time since such a scene has been written on KD, not that aren't other hot ones. They are burning when together, but add a very willing third and the temperature is up to the roof if there was any where they are in PS.

I love this story because of the premises making Justin quite an equal to Brian, who is enabling it, promoting it. Their display during this night is just the best ad they could have written to promote themselves, not that they needed it to shine and to be noticed. If someone from the team they will meet later is in the crowd, I hope it won't interfere with their future.

It's funny that Brian mocked Justin when he came from the parlor with his nipple ring and now he can't help it: he knows how Justin reacts to it and how it enhanced their foreplays.

Amazing job Nichelle!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 8:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

Loved this the boys do know how to party, can't wait for the next chapter No pressure

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 8:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

This gets more interesting with each chapter.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 8:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

*Super blushing* That was AMAZING *HOT.

Fantastic written. Their Observations about everyone are Correct.

Love the fact that Brian & Justin are having time of their life, without any worries. Keep it cumming on & on & on.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 4:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

Justin as the outsider truly does see what Michael, Deb and Lindsay are like they all have their own little fantasies and without Brian to rescue or blame they have no more excuses to avoid the truth glaring back at them through the mirror.

It is so sad that Brian allowed himself to be subjected to their abuse just to hold onto their version of love, but thanks to Justin he is seeing that love comes in many forms and that though it may not be easy at least it doesn't come with thousands of conditions.

Mel not marrying Lindsay is smart but it comes with major problems that she will need to face without seeing Brian as the villain in her story.

With time Mel could be one Hell of a lawyer but she needs to get over her insecurities that all men are out to get her, cause while most would enjoy seeing her fail Brian could care less, he isn't out, has never been out to sabotage her that she can do herself, he just wants everyone to reach their potential.

Maybe now she is ready to see that Lindsay isn't a saint but a Wasp Princess who wants the life she was born to have, but it won't be with Brian because he is Without a Doubt Gay and that one night of sex with Lindsay does not make him bisexual, I mean if he was then he wouldn't have waited this long to sleep with Lindsay again, that is just Lindsay's fantasy which will never happen because Brian doesn't settle for boring when he can have Unbelievable Every Night with Justin.

Everything Justin said about The Whiny Three is dead on accurate and getting away from Pittsburgh is the only way Brian can breathe so why not make it a permanent move?

Ted, Emmett and maybe even Vic might enjoy the freedom of living in a new environment without being told consistently that they are okay but not good enough to succeed.

Keeping Lindsay out of his business will drive her crazy along with Michael and probably Deb cause Jennifer will know everything.

Brian and Justin Are So Hot That Sun Blushes!!! lol

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 12:49 pm Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

Well damn! That was hot, Hot, HOT!!! I'm sure the rest of their time there was just as hot! Whew! Need to cool down. Lol!

Glad to see the munchers didn't get hitched after all. Although sorry that all the gang's work putting it together was for naught.

Looking forward to seeing how Justin handles his interview and how Lindsay will handle not getting the updates she will be expecting it Justin accepts their offer.

And also can't wait to see Michael & Lindsay's reactions to Brian's move.

Looking forward to the next installment.

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 11:19 am Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

Wow a lot of porn and some deep conversation wonderful combination 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 10:49 am Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

I really enjoyed the enlightening conversation at the restaurant. Justin laid out some hard truths... and it once again showed Brian's maturity that he sat and listened. The idea that the company can NOT utter a word to Lindsay, will be a very good negotiation. But come on... did you REALLY have to say: If you were the two of them... I know... inconsequential... but thinking of Brian being either of them/like them... shudder. And a thought passed through my mind about the wedding. I think the reason Lindsay was so anxious to have Brian walk her down the aisle... was to also feed into that fantasy of "Here Comes the Bride" ... with whom she feels is her true intended/or who she WANTS to have as her intended.

Their arrival in Palm Springs was HOT! Could you picture Mikey in that scenario? Nah... me neither. I mean... there is a REASON Brian has chosen to partake of one tantalizing morsel and not the defunct one.

And, what's this crap about Deb and Lindsay calling for a week? Debbie, probably because he bugged out of the wedding... but Lindsay should be smart enough to leave him alone! What is she hoping to accomplish? I'm lost...

I wonder if Debbie is aware of their schemes and manipulations.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 8:16 am Title: CHAPTER 3: WHITE DIAMONDS

It was hot especially the second part of course. I think I like their discussion so much. We see that they are very realistic with what is going on with their friends and family. They will take Lindsay and Michael to their own game and I feel like I'm going to love it! Another wonderful chapter. I really like this story.

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