Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 4:30 am Title: Chapter 3

Love this Brain.  Yeah for Mel .I always knew she had some balls,  she just didn't take them out to play. 

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love Love Love it!!!  Justin is too funny messing with Lindsey ha ha!! Little Miss Entitiled has met her match.... Keep up the good work!!

 

Liz

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

Having trouble with the ratings.  I give one and it disappears.  So here it is.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved, loved, LOVED Justin's interaction with Lindsay! It served her entitled ass right! But then here comes Brian and Mel following that 'SET YO' ASS DOWN' moment with the metaphorical one-two punch combo to the throat, which is bound to leave her speechless for a little while! YES! I can't even begin to express how much glee this chapter gave me. I'm especially looking forward to Lindsay discovering that Brian's 'trick' is much more than she ever bargained for. She must be angrier than a room full of hissing rattlesnakes that her attempt to use the baby's umbilical cord as a noose to tie around Brian's neck is NOT working as she thought it would. Damn greedy, selfish, egotistical HO-CAKE! I'm almost sure before she goes to bed, or at the very least, first thing in the morning, she'll be on the phone to Inspector Go-Go-Fuck-Himself to complain and whine that they are so obviously not the center of Brian's universe anymore. Let the fruitless plotting and planning COMMENCE!

Keep Going! This is FABULOUS <in my Emmett voice>

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ah, so very happy Melanie was observant of Lindsay's little tirade. I think she should also inform Brian of Lindsay's drinking!

I originally was ready to jump on you for answers, when I noticed that chapter 1 was different from the outline you gave on your summary page. So, sorry if I was throwing 'what's going on' questions at you! That was rather a unique idea.

Is Ted (and Cynthia) the only ones aware of Justin, or is Mel, too?

Looking forward to more.

HUGS ~Cathy

Author's Response:

I saw all three of your comments at the same time. I'm so happy you're liking it! 

Hint: some know, some are suspicious.

I'm hoping to update once more today,

Love,

xoxo 

 

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh getting interesting can't wait for more.....

Author's Response:

:D