Date: May 24, 2016 9:41 pm Title: Christmas Eve
Another quick review for this chapter: I forgot to say how much I enjoyed your reference to Ted and Justin's exclusive club, Coma-Sufferers-R-Us. That really set me off laughing. Not funny if I didn't expect Justin to wake up but since I do...still chuckling.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: May 23, 2016 7:53 am Title: Christmas Eve
And I thought the last chapter had twists and turns! Yikes! I may have to create a couple family trees if this gets much more complicated, lol.
I'm glad Erik genuinely loves Ted and that he's been protecting Justin, keeping him safe from Maxwell.
I hope Gus and Tommy aren't about to be harmed in some way. Did they sneak out of the house for an adventure? Does Tommy want to go find his papa? The thought of Maxwell getting his hands on both of them is really scary.
Author's Response:
Hopefully the story isn't going to get too confusing. I don't want to end up confusing myself. I've done that before. I'm glad you're liking the story so far.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 5:08 pm Title: Christmas Eve
Strange coincidences . . . TAG
Author's Response:
Yep.
Date: May 20, 2016 2:42 pm Title: Christmas Eve
What a surprise (AMD noti a good INE, sorry) to read about Erik and Justin. Anyway, I'm glad you're going fast with the story.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you didnt' like the surprise. But hopefully the rest will be to your liking. Thank you for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Christmas Eve
OMG!!!! Erik is Vic's son and he had an affair with Justin???? I am completely FLOORED!!!! And I already can't stand that whiny bastard Michael (yeah I'm an Anti-Michael junkie). I hope Justin wakes up very soon with his memories in tact! The fact that both Justin and Erik were trapped by Max is....ARRRRGH!! Please write fast! You've left me breathless here!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long for the new chapter. I'm saving the real anti-mikey stuff for when everyones there. I'm glad I shocked you by Erik.
Date: May 20, 2016 11:59 am Title: Christmas Eve
Ok I wasn't going to read this when I saw the child abuse warnings but I managed it ( I work in child protection) but I am finding this very interesting
Author's Response:
I'm glad you gave it a shot. And if it makes you feel any better that's the last part of abuse on any of the kids in this story.
Date: May 20, 2016 11:40 am Title: Christmas Eve
Hmm this chpter is really good. I'm hopping that Brian will really be to save Justin now. Hopping be able to bring him home to Tommy. Please let Justin be happy to see Brian and still really love him. Please more soon!!
Author's Response:
I hope you like the new chapter as much as the last.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 5:55 am Title: Christmas Eve
uhoh, the boys listened to all that! Let's see if I have this straight. Erik is Vic's son and possibly Marissa's father. He knew that Justin is Tommy's father and didn't tell anyone? Where are the boys?
Author's Response:
Yes about the Erik, But the boys didn't hear the story. They had already left on their mission. Next Chapter.
Date: May 20, 2016 5:35 am Title: Christmas Eve
What the HELL! You are blowing my mind.
Author's Response:
I'm glad.