Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2024 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: NEW WORLD ORDER

Oh Lord, the Kip debacle has more to it... it will be interesting to see what Lindsay and Michael had to do with that, especially since Justin beat Kip at his own game.

You wrote the part about Lindsay so clearly, I had no problem seeing her outrage on her face. I got a few chuckles out of her meeting with John. She definitely needs someone holding the whip that should keep her mouth and antics in check.

So, I hope there's a sister chapter next, updating us on Michael's horror, letting us know how his marriage is going. :D

Thanks for the chapter.

Hugs ~Cathy