[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Geez, a year for his supposed store improvements and nothing's been done? How did Ben not think that was weird?
I love when people start getting a wake up call as to how much Brian is not an asshole. It always killed me in the show how those who should've known better held onto their delusions.
The way Brian and Justin take care of each other is so sweet. The intensity of their connection from the very first episode is one of the best I've ever seen on screen. You're capturing it really well, along with Brian's snark, which is one of the quintessential parts of Brian Kinney.
LOL @ the statue debacle. Michael's such an idiot.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Carl is such a nice guy! Funny, discreet, loving, tolerent... He also knows how to mute his son in law! Ben is so patient!
Date: Mar 03, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 2
A full-size Captain Astro statue!? $15,000! OMG the manchild is crazy!
I knew he wouldn't refurbish the store!
"What the hell just happened?" I asked Kiki
"That was him not giving a damn. Wait till he doesn't give a fuck just ask Ted what that feels like." LOL! Gotta love Kiki and her take on Brian Kinney!
I can imagine what Mikey's reaction would be to finding out that Brian was playing his own brand of footsie with Justin and that Mikey was now sitting in Justin's, uhm, spot! LOL
*Sigh* I love how Brian and Justin take care of each other.
"Michael what's the problem, can you get to the bare bones of your grievance quickly, I want to make love to your mother...hello? Hello? Michael are you there? Works every time! LOL!!!!! I LOVE CARL!!
Certainly can't blame Ben for leaving the comic shop! Mikey truly is an idiot!
Deb
Date: Jan 10, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Michael is just so stupid. Why doesn't anybody ask where all the money went? I guess they will ask soon. I have a feeling that David doesn't have Michaels best interest in mind.
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
The scene under the table at Woody's was so fun and hot; Ben is cool in this story as well as Emmett and Hunter.
I love how Brian is with Hunter and how Hunter is with Gus.
I hope Gus and Jenny will continue to share their feelings.
Author's Response:
Thanks
MissMerlot
Date: Sep 28, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
David???? Michael is back in contact with him? How idiotic! Lol
Author's Response:
We are talking about Michael remember, of course he's an idiot!
Date: Sep 27, 2016 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
'That David is investing for me' WTF?! Sweet Jesus! Michael is going to drive me to drink! Ben, wake up & leave the asshole....
Author's Response:
Grab a bottle and a straw....he gets worse! Happy reading and sipping!
Date: Sep 12, 2016 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
The fact that Michael is still whining about having to pay back $$ is unbelievable. The fact that he assumed he wouldn't have to on such a large amount is mind bobbling!!
Be bet between Ben and Hunter...funny as hell! You know they've had to undergo listening to Michael often when they can place that bet! LOL The fact that Ben is willing to match the money has me concerned. I'm not sure that Michael will continue how own repayment if he thinks that Ben;'s contribution will cover it.
Hunter experiencing Brian shopping...while funny and exasperating was very sweet of Brian and Justin and I know that Hunter apprecaited it. (as much as it exhausted him. lol)
LMFAO!!!!! At the thought of Brian taking Michael shopping! and brian bitches about what Justin wears?!?! the very though of it is too funny!
Footplay between B&J...can we say HHHHHHHHHHHHHHOT!! Yowza!! (and very amusing in parts! the fact that Ben adn emmett caught on was funny!)
OMG......Michael is an IDIOT! I really can't wait for all this to come back and kick him in teh balls. (getting kicked in the ass isn't painful enough for him.) And everyone was able to bear witness to his stupidity. Him talking about Ted like that.....man alive! His leve lof hypocrisy too is ridiculous! He doesn't want anyone to discuss his business, but he can run off at the mouch about anyone else...
OH!! adn that stupid statue?!?!? Again, everyone was able to see how stupid the man/boy is. Ben is pissed and rightfully so. Oh the fallout is gonna be good!
that Michael is keeping himself involved with David is heinous! Especially his reasons. He's an awful awful man!
It's so nice that B&J have taken Hunter under their wings so to speak. Having him join them to TO. I know Michael will not understand, that he see's it as not being fair to him...oh sorry...to Jenny. *eyeroll* I'm waiting for Brian to set him down and give him a dose of reality.
so much happening! Will await the next chapter with bated breath again. As much as I'd love to rad the next one right now!! lol, I appreciate the effort it takes to write. I'll be patient.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks Elaine, I am so glad you are enjoying it. You and Nichelle are bang on with a couple of your assumptions, I have been cackling with glee at setting him up for a mighty big fall and it will come and he will be hit, literally by someone unexpected, hard! Hopefully C3 will be up this weekend.
Take care
Nicole
Date: Sep 11, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm sorry but chapter 2 is incorrect. There is a repeat of the chapter and I can't understand were is the end of chapter 2.
Author's Response:
We are trying to fx it. Sorry about that.
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2016 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hate to tell you this, but the chapter is still here twice. Though I didn't remember David investing money for Michael last time. Michael is still as dumb though. lol.
Author's Response:
I know we are trying to fix it. Sorry about that.
Date: Sep 11, 2016 11:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow so not only is Michael being a complete ass, but he's a cheating ass. He has his priorities all messed up and in the end poor JR will be hurt because of it. I think sooner than later Ben will find out about David and vice versa....because I get the feeling that David doesn’t know anything about Ben.
Author's Response:
Michael always has priorities messed up and yes poor JR gets hurt down the line, but don't worry she makes sure she tells her daddy what she thinks.
Hope you stick with it.
Nicole