[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2025 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Jesus! Those women should be corralled like some wild animals. If this is the way they are in front of Gus, along with Michael's idiocy, I don't blame Gus in the least. I did get a chuckle out of Lindsay calling parents and their comments about her not being a good mother.
A new lawyer! This mess is getting bigger all the time. I have to wonder if Mel was forging her boss' signature. I can't see a stand-up attorney doing something so underhanded that it would get him disbarred. No wonder Brian was hitting roadblocks. I think we have a very angry Brian on the warpath. Look out, ladies!
Michael, Michael, Michael. D.E.L.U.S.I.O.N.A.L. If he thinks Brian will want him for getting Dad and Gus reunited, all Brian will be is PISSED. If all this was going on, Brian will demand to know why it took so long to tell him. And where's Debbie during all this? She's not the 'suffer in silence' type, nor not see her granddaughter for a long stretch of time. At least Jenny knew Gus' plans. In a way, I'm sorry she knew and told them.
How is Michael funding all these trips to Canada? Is he flying or driving? Either way, it's gotta take a lot of money. I doubt his job pays him well enough. Does he have the comic shop? Lord, is Ben having to pay spousal support?
Date: Jan 02, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I hope Brian really does have a chance to get his rights to Gus back. He would be way better off with his father.
Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm so excited to find out how underhanded Mel was about the whole paternal rights... she is sneaking coniving bitch that needs to pay for it!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really can't stand that Delusional Dickkiss Michael...UGH! Brian will want to be with him if he can get Mel and Lindsay to let him see Gus?? What kind of moronic misfit uses a child for such purposes? But then again its Michael...SMH As I said, PATHETIC!
Mel and Lindsay....LAWD NO WORDS!
Hopefully Jen's Brother-in-Law will have some good news for Brian and Gus.
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 1:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I knew there had to be a way for Brian to get his parental rights back he was tricked by Mel and the sleazy attorney because he was trying to do the right thing for his son.
I always wondered why Mel ran to Brian to help her get rid of the French guy Lindsay almost married when her name is still on the house and she is still paying the bills despite the fact that they are apart, plus if Lindsay needed help she could always go to Brian she had no problem asking him for help paying for daycare when she had to go back to work after Mel moved out...hmmmm perhaps Brad should look into that too??
That never quite made sense to me Mel always touted herself as being stronger than Brian, I thought she had the bigger dick so why couldn't she get rid of the French guy without bringing Brian in??
Michael living in delusional land again thinking after years of flaunting in front of Gus that he is a better Daddy, that now because he brings Gus to Brian wrapped in a bow that Brian will just be so grateful that he and Michael will hook up at long last?!? Boy Please Get A Life!!
He has a better chance at getting his Ass kicked then landing in Brian's bed with or without his clothes brrp...I just threw up in my mouth ;)
Mel and Lindsay are about to learn what it feels like to feel the wrath of one Brian Aiden Kinney and I don't feel sorry for them at all.
That moment between Brian and Jacob was so moving can't wait for them to have more with Gus as well.
I hope Brad has a private investigator cause there are some people in Canada who would love to talk to him/her.
Excellent Chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Michael is all mixed up. Thinking if he gets Mel to let Brian see his son Brian will be all love and kisses. I'm glad the Brian and Justin are trying to solve this delima, but I can't help but wonder why a smart man like Brian used a lawyer that worked with Melanie and thought he was getting good advice? Love Brad. He'd going to do Brian well for being a member of the family. Yay! Love this story!
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, I am shocked, was ACME out of convoluted, stupid(with no chance of success) schemes? Are we sure that was Michael Charles Novotny speaking? Mel should really check for clones or a space podðŸ˜.
I hope all of them get more than their just desserts.
Jacob is a Sweety and I hope Gus doesn't give Brian too many problems about not being there.
As usual a wonderfully thought out tale.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Fantastic action and emotion packed update! Between the last chapter and this my allergies have been acting up, lol. Poor Jacob worrying about meeting Brian and all the wasted years. They are just going to have move forward. The same for poor Gus.
If Michael had been sincere, he would have actually almost been a good father, but nope he's scummy.
Linds and Mel are an embarrassment.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Michael can be so dumb; can he really believe that Brian will welcome him if Gus was back in his life because he made it possible?
Lindsay and Mel are terrible parents and they will realize it the worse possible way, by losing their kids.