Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 13

That breakfast scene is just too cute. I kept smiling through the whole thing. 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Can a chapter be hot and cute at the same time? And Michael and Mel are both in for one hell of a surprise....I can't wait.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 5:28 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh I am cracking up that Michael thought Mel would support him while he sits on his Ass neglecting Jenny and ordering more toys.

I so can't wait for Mel to go to Debbie's house that smackdown will be epic and Mel is going to wish she stayed in Canada or chose someone else to be the father.

Mel is handling this situation like she still has all the controls not realizing that she lost before it even started, the moment Gus went to Justin she lost everything and now she is hanging on by a thread.

Deb is going to snap her in half with just her voice alone no way is she taking Jenny out of that house. ( I wish the next chapter was up already I could use a big belly-aching laugh)

Lindsay wised up and jumped off the ship now she is doing the right thing for Gus and Brian, perhaps one day she will make a fantastic grown-up. 

I just love a good story when Mel gets her comeuppance wish there was more like them :)