Date: Aug 15, 2017 9:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Brandon was definitely a surprise, a good one tho. It makes me so happy that he's able to look through Michael's bullshit. You're the first person who interpreted Brandon's thoughts on the whole bet as I did. I always had the feeling he wanted to find out just how good Brian really is but everyone I talked to about it, told me nope. It's good to see at least one other person who thought the same. I also like Eden a lot. She seems very passionated about her job and this case.
Debbie is... Debbie. Always had mixed feelings about her. She did a lot of good things for the community and the boys but she also treated them unfair and especially Brian badly for no reason other than her inability to see Michael as a grown up man and not as just her perfect, innocent baby.
Justin wanting to face Michael and Lindsay just shows how strong he is. Wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the rest.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting way to add in Brandon to this story. TAG
Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Justin is very brave. I don't know if I would be able to face them.
Date: May 11, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting plausible explanation why Brandon lost his bet with Brian.
Poor Deb: she doesn't to be treated that way by her son.
Date: May 10, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think Michael bringing up Vic may be one of the worst most evil things I've ever seen him do... he's lucky Deb only hit him the one time!
Date: May 10, 2017 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is different than normal, but interesting so far.
Date: May 10, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another new fic to eventually add to my Kindle collection! You have your own section you know! :) Just saved the last 2 finished fics to it yesterday. :)
I like the style you're wwriting this in. I'm assuming it's all flashbacks for a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone is going to say in teh meetings!
There's going to be some enjoyable new characters. I love how you always blend them into the story so well. It's like they already belong.
Interesting that Brandon wanted to be Brian's bottom boy. I always kind of wondered about that in the show.
So...L&M tried to off Justin huh? Are they really that stupid that they actually thought they'd get away with it? Had to laugh a bit at reading that Michael double crossed Lindsey and tried to kill her. LOL! (sorry, laughter was in poor taste, but seriously...kinda funny) I guess he though she'd get blamed and he'd be off the hook. Dumbass.
Michael talking to his mom...utterly reprehensible! My LAWD!!! (to quote a brilliant writer I know) To play that game...to use Vic like that. And to think people he knows will fall for it...UGH! My thoughts though are that while he does come up with some rather intelligent ideas. Devious yes, but the amount of deviousness that he shows takes a certain amount of intelligence really. It's the part where he carries things out where it tends to fall apart. And in some cases pure dumb luck. It won't take long for everyone to figure out that he's scamming them with this pitiful BS.
Proud of Justin!! He's going to face the asshols! He'll have family there to support him as well. Strength in numbers as they say. He'll get through this with the help of those around him.
I can't WAIT for the confrontation. Very exciting actually. lol. Lindsey already knows their married, but not Michael. That will be a terrific revelation. Thank goodness Mel and Brianget along. Briand and Justin will now have gus thankfully!!
Fanfriggintastic start to what will inevitably be a terrific story.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 10, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Another Fabulous beginning toa new fic. Looks like it will be a roller coaster ride.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 2:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Love that you've made Brandon a doctor. That's going to surprise Mikey. The nerve of him and Lindsay. But I know you'll fix him good.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 2:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Don't get me wrong, I love your writing! But I feel like I missed the beginning of this story. Will it be like flashbacks to explain how we got to this point? BTW totally love you 🤓
Author's Response:
Thanks my dear. The flashbacks will come in from mid C3 in the sessions. Hope you continue to enjoy.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 1:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow what a way to open a new story.
Not surprised Michael would try to kill Justin cause his jealousy runs deep and killing Lindsay makes her the perfect scapegoat. (wonder if Michael was thinking that?)
Michael trying to pay Looney and Lindsay trying to play victim is beyond distressing because they still don't see how truly vile their actions are.
Everyone being together in one room to confront Michael and Lindsay will hopefully be a good thing for some and a waste of time for The Delusional Twins because they will be totally focused on Brian<smh>
Glad Brian and Justin have permanent custody of Gus
Brandon a doctor...Nice :)
Date: May 10, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 2
This fic has so much going for it! Can't wait to see how they all react when they are brought together for a meeting.
Deb slapping Michael! Next time he pulls something like that on her I hope she punches him in the mouth! That was pure evil to mention Vic like that!
Justin is coming back! Yay!
I wonder how Michael and Lindsay are going to handle hearing Brian's name is now Brian Kinney-Taylor. Looking forward to much more!
Deb Tanner
PS: I really wish I had thought up this bunny! I'm so jealous! :)