Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow. That was intense. I hope Brian and Justin will come out of this okay.
Date: May 16, 2017 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Just so intense... the balls (sorry for the that) of Debbie to out Brian's cancer as if he deserved it because Michael is an unlovable asshole... Michael WAS loved by Brian as a brother, but that wasnt' good enough... and she WAS loved as a mother, but now she's just a mother fucker and lost everyone's love!
Date: May 16, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn Deb! She is so vindictive. I can't believe she threw his cancer in his face.
I'm glad Justin is there to take care of him. I just hope Brian will be okay.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
You are a fantastic writer because I want to climb into the page and slap Deb until her style changes.
What she did putting Brian's cancer out there and staying that he deserved to get it there makes me so effing mad that not even striking her is enough I want her destroyed beyond measure.
Deb is the worst kind of abuser she mentally beat down an abused child and then moulded him to follow her dictate or she would pull her love away, after years of that of course Brian wouldn't know how to fight back he was trained not to.
She also taught Michael to use the same triggers to get Brian to bend, then one night a hot blond was standing under a lamppost and their control began to crumble.
They were all conditioned to ignore the insults and cruelty because it was disguised as 'It's a joke, or ' I didn't mean it, you know how I am.
Or the record that will never change: After All We Did For You.
It is about time for Deb to reap what she sewed and see that in the mirror is not The Mother of Liberty Avenue, but The Bully of Liberty Avenue.
Mel, Hunter, Ben and Emmett got me all teary-eyed with their reactions, but Brian's broke my heart because Deb may have just destroyed the last little bit of love Brian had for her.
Smart to keep Deb away from Gus.
Date: May 15, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow! This was a difficult chapter! But it was an amazing one, too!
Deb finally showed her true character - Brian is to blame for everything and if it's not Brian then it must be someone else's fault because she and Mikey can do no wrong!
"And you only apologised because you wanted me to feel sorry for you having fucking cancer! In the one place you deserved it to get it!" That is probably the lowest most disgusting thing she could have said. She will never have Brian or Justin in her life again after saying that.
"No longer listening to you, you abusive bitch!" Mel glares at her. "So glad that Gus will have nothing to do with you either!" Well said, Mel!!
Well, I hope Deb's happy with only Mikey in her life because she just blasted everyone else out of her life!
Looking forward to more!
Deb
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
The thing is that I would have loved to see Emmett tell her exactly why she's wrong about it being Brian's fault. Maybe someone should get Deb a mirror so she can see how hateful she's become? How dare she say what she did.
Date: May 15, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow....you weren't kidding in the least. How can Deb face herself in the mirror after saying such cruel shit?
Date: May 15, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Whoa!!! I thought we went thru some major trauma, but this is a disaster for Brian.
How could Deb do that to him? That's right, Michael got it from her and his actual father who didn't live to spread the truth either.
I loved the reactions from Mel, Hunter, Ben and Emmett. Ted already knowing, he couldn't act surprised, but helped to clarify Deb's lies.
Deb is worse than Joan, because she did it on purpose, each and every time. Joan was too weak and/or drunk.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow...just wow. Not what I was expecting, but very good. I probably shouldn't have read this chapter at the office. If I as a reader had a hard time reading this, I can't imagine what you went through writing it. Great job.
Date: May 15, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Holy FUCKING SHITBALLS!!!!!! I want to reach through the computer screen, and throttle Deb! No...not enough...I want to reach into he rthroat with my balled up fist, grab onto ner vocal chords and rip them out! I want to slap her across the face sor freaking hard that she'll still fell it next freaking year!
O.......M..............F...............G! She is as bad as Joan, if not worse! At least Brian KNEW whatJoanwas like. He thought he had a mother in Deb. Now he actually knows the truth. OMG...Please don't let him suffer to long the trauma that is Deb. I hope it really doesn't trumatize him too much and that he is able to withstand the rest of these sessions. And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, make Deb SUFFER the pain of a gazzilion firey ants eating at her twat!
adn for teh gang to find out about the cancer they way they did.Mel's reaction in particular was so touching and heartfelt. I'm so glad that they are on teh same side in this one.
OK...I'm a bit emotional after reading that. I need to go back and read it again though. Fuck me! I'm so bloody freaking pissed off! LOL.
Dayum that was a most excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine