Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
It all comes out. About time.
Date: May 18, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 8
I really hate Deb in this one...I can't believe she is acting like this
Author's Response:
You're not going to like her in the next chapter...but I am going to ease up on her for a bit. Michael forgets that he's being evaluated and starts to show his true self...
Hope you continue to read.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Owww! I lived how things are coming out about Deb's hand in things. Keep the chapters coming. Love your stories.
Date: May 17, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Have calmed down slightly since yesterday's chapter. DAYUM that was emotional! totally gut wrentching. I was a fall down mess after reading that. Goes to show just how talented you are. Your gift is termendous to be able to achieve the emotional reactions you inspire in your writing!
How is Brian really? He seemed to have gone from near catatonic to seemingly OK in a relatively short time. I really hope that he doesn't retreat into an emotional black hole. That he realizes the huge support he has around him and holds onto that.
Oh I hope they are able to keep Deb away from Gus. I can't even imagine the shit she'd say around him...
she certainly has deflecting down patt and taught Michael the same thing. Things don't bode well for any of those 3 and rightfully so.
Jennifer and Daphne are a welcome addition and perfect timeing. They were able to negate what Deb was saying.
So incredibly intense sessions. Brutal and so emotional. It must be exhausting to write.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Yeah it has been knackering and C9 was not easy either. But its back to the pooor-widdle-Mikey show in the next few chapters and B&J start to reconnect...
Hope you still enjoy
Cheers
Nicole
Date: May 17, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
So relieved that Daphne and Drew came: every support that can help beat the Novotny is welcomed.
We learned some small facts (Hunter knowing the kitchen at Britin) and a big one (the nightly visits at the hospital).
Deb can be very mean, but Jennifer as a WASP is trained to do so and she loves her son, so much better than Deb does for Michael. She will fight dirty if she has to. Daph will fight too because, after Brian and Justin, she's the one who knows how they are together; she knows all details a real best friend can deal with.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Was wondering when Jennifer and Daphne were going to show up and set the record straight for Deb who like her son is rewriting history to fit her narrative. (She is lucky Drew is there or else she be getting her Ass kicked from one side of the street to another)
Brian could never sleep with Michael because he isn't attracted to a whiny-assed Mama's boy who needs his Mommy to hold his hand and explain his sexual orientation to him.
Jennifer throwing Deb's words back at her just goes to show that Deb always knew Brian could never love her son and her pathetic attempt to say otherwise is her trying to control everything yet again.
How much did Brian give Michael to pay the mortgage and what new toys did he buy instead.
No amount of apologizing is going to fix this Deb is in the deep freeze with Michael and Lindsay.
Author's Response:
She gets worse in the next chapter...and the answer to your chapter questioin is in there.
But the poor-widdle-Mikey-show comes back into town...snicker!
Hope you continue to enjoy.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Good thing for Daph that Drew showed up. Jennifer and Daph both let Deb have it and she still deflected back to Brian. Do we ever find out if Michael gave Deb the money that Brian gave him for her? Another great chapter.
Date: May 17, 2017 6:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Damn! This chapter and the previous one have both been so gut wrenching but also amazing! Very happy that not only has Daphne been included in the session but so has Jennifer. And also happy that Drew came along to prevent Daphne and Emmett from stomping Deb and/or Mikey! They don't need to be in jail!
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Deb