[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2023 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
I’ve read this several times, but it never occurred to me….where’s JR? Does she not exist?
Author's Response:
Hiya, nope no JR in this one, there wasn't a way to have her in the story that worked.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 08, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
just loved it. Never liked Debbie and I do not feel sorry for Lindsey or Michael
Date: Feb 16, 2018 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
I have to admit that this is the third time that I have read this story. I've never been good at leaving feedback, which is unfair to you as a writer because I really enjoy what you do. I never cared for Deb, Lindsey or Michael and this story certainly gave me what I wanted. I'm sure that I will revisit this story again because it is that good.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Peggy.
MissMerlot
Date: Jul 02, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for writing this PB for me! Great job. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for the PB, even though towards the end it was difficult to write I'm glad I did it. So start cooking the next one for me please!
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Is it sad that I think Deb or Lindsay could have done this too, they all are so conniving that with the fabulous way you told the story I can see anyone of the three babies doing this and gloating about it just the way Michael did.
It's sad how they all feel entitled and no one wants to accept the part they played that lead to this happening in the first place<smh>
Date: Jun 09, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 11
I loved this. You went about telling this story in a totally different way. It was really intriguing and I couldn't really stop reading. Great work.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2017 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
This whole story was amazing. I cried through most of it, except for the times I wanted to take a shovel to several people's faces. The portrayals were very realistic. As usual, a great story from your amazing brain.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
A bit late, for which I sincerely apologise, but thanks for that. From a writer of your calibre...thank you.
MissMerlot
Date: May 24, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful story!!!
Deb finally got what she deserved for always protecting her son: she was alone and banned from her avenue.
Jennifer and Daphne are like lionesses with cubs, like Deb, but it doesn't feel the same at all.
Michael was so Machiavellian, yet, still stupid enough to not think about the video taping... Too bad, or not!
At least, Justin is Gus' father and he has his memories back.
Date: May 24, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow I waited to read this till it was done And am glad because it was greatand I did not want to stop reading it. Thank you again for sharing another gr tory with us.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Fabulous fic and ending.
Thanks so much for sharing your extrodanary talent.
JoAnn
Date: May 23, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful story, thanks for writing. Sad to see this ending.
* hugs *
Date: May 23, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm finding it hard to put this one into words. I have to word this carefully. I don't want any misunderstanding.
This was, propbably your most difficult story to read. And I mean that in a good way! It was so incredibly emotionally...I guess draining? It's one of those stories, that I wastotally hooked on. I couldn't wait for the next update. I was practically salivating, and would look several times a day for a new chapter. It fed my need me in a way.
At the same time, while I anticiapted every chapter, I was almost relieved for it to end. Again...do not misunderstand!! the anxiety, and fury, anger, the entire emotional upheaval I experienced reading this was a bit exhausting. I can't even imagine how it was for you to write it!! My goodness! Such Kudos to you for writing this! I would imagine after each chapter, you'd need to recharge or something.
I now can go and re-read this and just enjoy it now. I'll have much less of an emotional reaction as I know what to expect! I can just shout at my kindle and call them names. lol. It a great one to read when I want to vent. (which happens a lot actually lol)
I hope you take my words in the context they are meant.
I'm glad everyone got their cummupence! It was just too little too late for Deb. There's no real way to make amends after all she did and said. Michael, well......and Lindsey too. I think chalk it up to Karma. You reap what you sow.
AS for the gang...YAY!! Glad Mel stayed. Very happy endings for the family.
What an excellent read. You....my goodness. what a gem you are.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine, I completely agree with you. It was so difficult to write and after C10 I had to end it as I was starting to dread writing it. I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks
Nicole
Date: May 23, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hiya.
I'm a bit lost for words to describe what this story did for me. But believe me it absolutely rocked.
Rest in unholy peace Michael Novotny. You and your mother got what you deserved.
And allthough I didn't care much for Lindsay, I do feel sorry for her.
Thank you for this deeply moving story.
Hugs
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
Hey lovely,
I'm glad you liked it. It was very hard to write towards the end. I did feel sorry for Lindsay because he truly wanted them both gone from Brian's life.
Double hugs with chocolate and fudge
Nicole xxxx
Date: May 23, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
A very sad story, but beautiful at the end. I love it!
Date: May 23, 2017 8:30 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved this story. Thank you so much for sharing!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 6:32 am Title: Chapter 11
A fabulous story and in the end everyone hot what they deserved.ooming forward to reading another one of your stories.
Date: May 23, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow!! It was short and yet it achieved its goal by showing how calculating and selfish Michael, Lindsay and Deb could be to get what they want.
They didn't love their family they just enjoyed the power they had over them and how they wielded it to get what they want.
Brian, Justin, Gus and their new baby will live their lives happy surrounded by their real family and if anyone thinks of or mentions Michael, Lindsay and Deb it will be to say "We're Better Off Without Them"
Michael really thought he would get off by blaming Lindsay too bad he never learned the fine art of listening.
Deb actually thought after her blame game she could just resume her place as Brian's de facto mother like her son she never learned the fine art of listening and her words, actions were thrown back at her by Liberty Avenue.
The worse thing to happen to Deb is that she is all alone and no one cares, it's the same thing Michael and Lindsay were afraid of too.
Fantastic Story, Will be reading it again :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I have to admit that I started to find it a bit hard to write. I think it was the anti-Debbie aspect of it, but it's done. I'm pleased with it.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 11
Another fantastic story comes to an end and we get the ending we all hoped for.