Date: Feb 06, 2020 6:17 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Good lord! (Your) Michael is such a prick!
I love it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2018 4:20 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Awesome story as always!
great original characters that mix in with the original cast! Well developed plot with great twists and turns.
would love to see more from this AU!
Date: Dec 30, 2017 7:28 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Great beginning. Why is Deb keeping her real opinion to herself? I can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 3:28 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yes, but why Baton Rouge. I only ask because I live there and want to know why he would be here.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 7:03 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Please please more Brian and Justin!))
Date: Dec 11, 2017 6:44 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
please never ever do those things to your kids. i know that these are fiction and i might be overreacting. but it was troubling for me to read.
but besides that, i really like the story. i'm a sucker for anti michael.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, it was troubling for me to write, but in the context of the story it was done and will only be done the once.
Happy and Happier reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Loving every chapter...lovely chapter..hot scene in the start...wow.
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 3:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Loving every chapter...lovely chapter..hot scene in the start...wow.
Date: Nov 07, 2017 7:02 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Love this premise. TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 5:38 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yes it must be a pain to not be the center of attention what with a fourteen year old dealing with a dislocated shoulder, a black eye and a slight concussion?
What An A-hole!!!
What did he say about Kemi?
First Chapter and I'm Already Ticked Off!!
;)
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:03 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Love the new chapter. It's great that this story is way lighter but Michael is still an annoying Idiot. The girls are adorable..what a temper. I hope you don't have to do big changes because of the girls I chose for the banner. Already impatiently waiting for more. Much love babe! 😘
Author's Response:
My darling girl,
The banner is perfect, no changes needed.
Much love back!
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 12:48 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
As usual, one chapter and I want to throw someone off a tall building in slow motion. Care to guess who I mean?
Great writing as usual.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 5:19 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
This is an awesome start...amazing banner...and looks interesting story.
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:15 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Great beginning! Another amazing story in preparation! Thank you!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Wow...Michael is more hateful then ever! I was also totally prepared to dislike Deb here, but I now understand what's happening. Wonder what it is that Michael said. something completely unforgivable.
Love that Brian is a dad here. Kemi is a spitfire isn't she?! I think I can already see Justin in her. lol Looking forward to when we are introduced the Justin's little one. (or not so little)
Great start!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Oct 24, 2017 4:05 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Oh my God! Could I hate Michael any more than I already do?! Yes! What a prick....Kemi is a little girl, I'm assuming lol Can't wait to hear some backstory on this one...omg so good! Thanks for hooking me right away Miss Merlot!
Author's Response:
You're welcome Glo! Nice to have you back! Back story in C2...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2017 12:22 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I see you love Michael to death just like me!!!
Nice start!!!!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 8:15 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Ok. this one is good.
Date: Oct 24, 2017 2:40 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
I'm excited for more!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 12:08 am Title: All is Not What it Seems
Ooh. Mikey isn't going yo like what's coming. Can't wait.
Tedvis Kemi's godfather. Go Ted! Yay Brian!
Deb has a room at Brian's and still treats him like shit? Explain that one to me.
Author's Response:
She does but it is all, a facade because they are trying to find the man of Brian)s dreams....
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:40 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I hate Michael, always have always will.
Keep it up
Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:30 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Yep Mickey is digging already. Not only on the foundation of a non existent friendship but his own grave as well. Keep going Mickey the sooner you are gone the better it is.
Ted being the godfather to Brians daughter. Sweet!!
XOXO
MeMa
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:56 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
I like this. This is different from what you normally would write. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for keeping the boys going.
Lots of love
~Teresa~
Author's Response:
I thought I would try my hand at fluffy, I do fluffy with angst but this will be pure fluff but anti-M. Hope you continue to enjoy.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:52 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Very interesting start. Question 1 - where is Justin? Liking that Ted and Emmett are backing Brian. Not so sure about Deb though it looks like she too is on Team Brian. Michael needs a reality check. More, more, more!
Author's Response:
Justin is coming in the next chapter but he doesn't meet Briann just yet...
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2017 10:47 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
This is off to a wonderful start!
Deb