Date: Jan 01, 2018 12:06 am Title: Heaven and Hell
At least some of the stuff Jenny did must have been deliberate.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Fabulous...loving it soo much.
Date: Nov 14, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Another amazing chapter! The beginning is hilarious with Brian and Justin teased by the kids and Jennifer.
Then the fun is gone as Kemi relates what Jenny told her.
I really love Mel in this story as she doesn't give any latitude to Jenny and make her accountable for her nasty acts or words.
Brian found a good way to make Jenny "pay" for the disaster she made in Gus' room. He also will get back the money Lindsay stole from him, even if he doesn't need it. I love that Brain asked Jenny to take her gloves off!
Gus, Nya and Ted are ready to punch some nasty pretentious leech!
This quote is fabulous: "it is like wrestling a greased and very angry alligator".
Date: Nov 14, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
My heart was breaking over the hurt done by Jenny. (Michael being the initial cultrit) I can't believe she said somethign like that! It's like she has no comprehension of right adn wrong. will she come to learn it in time? I hope she does for her sake. I simply can't envision Mel or anyone else allowing that kind of behaviour to continue. While she will get her punishments as she so deserves, is she really going to remain so selfish and in all honesty, such a dangerous bully? Will the tides turn against her in time for her to learn a lesson early enough in life to be able to change this aspect of her? Midn you....look at Michael. Nothing has changed his personality. Will Jenny follow in teh same kind of footsteps as him?
Michael is in for a WORLD of hurt! OMG...his suffering will be empic if Nya and Ted have anything to do about it, never mind what Brian and Justin will eventually do to him. A part of me thinks I should feel a bit bad about what's going to happen to him eventually, but he spoke out against a child....there is not suffering enough for him in my book. He derserves whatever comes to him. (times 10!!)
Lindsey is in for a rude awakening as well. Her little money hoard has been found out. Is it the only one or does she have an alternate one somewhere hidden? If she does, she bett hold onto it as she won't be getting anything else from Brian I'm sure. He'll be letting Mel handle all the finances fgoing forward I'm sure.
Terrific story. AS always, looking forward to what's going to happen. So may repercussions to occur. Will Jenny and Lindsey still be able to attend the cotillion adn if so, what will happen there? I can't see Lindsey not trying to push herself into specific circles and bringing Jenny along with her. They will lose a lot of they don't change their ways soon. Mind you, I always enjoy reading of Lindsey and Michael's demise!! ;) A part of me hopes that Jenny starts to learn her lessons though without too much damage being done. She is only 12 and is oung enough to turn away from the road she's travelling on. I guess I'll have to wait and see what you have up your sleeves.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
I don't think Mel covering for Lindsay is a good thing that's always been the problem with Lindsay and Michael, instead of everyone always calling them out on the crap they cover it up.
You can't call them out for one thing and then gloss over when they do something worse.
By not being truthful it gives them leeway to expect everything they do to be easily forgiven.
Plus it has shown Jenny that no matter how big the trouble is it will be pushed aside so as not to upset the natural order.
Michael is not a child and it has been way past time to stop treating him like one.
And if Jenny wants to play in an Adults World then she better be prepared for Adult Consequences along with her favorite Mommy ;)
Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Time to put BUB Jenny in her place. Doing chores isn't enough. There should be no cotillion. She's already lost friends. Better change her ways real fast.
Mel found out about one of Lindsay's back accounts but I'm pretty sure there's another one...somewhere.
Where is Ted off to? Michael? Lindsay? I don't pity either one when he gets done.
Date: Nov 14, 2017 1:23 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
You said Jenny was 12 right? I have to know...how & why in the world was she allowed to go near alcohol? I can't get over it...I could get Lindsey spouting some shit, drunk off her ass but a child?
I can't even address everything else in this chapter, which was awesome by the way. I'm still thinking about the last chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes Jenny is 12 but she's also spoilt, sneaking and attention seeking. She presented herself as being helpful and solicitous and wasn't.
Thansk for the awesomeness comment...but rest assured that the last time she tangles with booze...gets up to more spoilt mischief yes but booze related nope.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:46 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Should have let Nya at all of them.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:58 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Michael has a death wish. And it will be delivered by Ted of all people.
Please, Please have Lindsey be banned from the cotillion, by Jennifer no less?
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:52 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Okay, I'm dying to learn what they plan to do to Michael for saying such horrible things. Exactly what is Ted doing?
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:47 am Title: Heaven and Hell
HOLY SHIT!!!
If Jenny wasn't a child I would so want to kick her Ass until the end of time!!!
That the little snotnose would say what she said to Kemi but to also call her a BUB and to intentionally go into Gus's room and repeatedly Toss her cookies on Gus's stuff has me so pissed off.
So Lindsay stole $14,000 From Brian and hid it from Mel and Jenny?
I thought ' No One Keeps Secrets In This Family'??
How much more has she stole from Brian and how many more accounts does Lindsay have?
So why did Michael tell Jenny that he wished Kemi hadn't survived and where did Jenny here someone say "Butt Ugly Bitch' before?
I feel bad for Sophie who didn't deserve to be the butt of Jenny's cruelty.
Looks like Ted is going to beat Nya to beating Michael's Ass (Not That He Has One! lol).
Jenny doing her and Gus's chores is good but that little brat needs the belt, Mel forcing Lindsay to be the Bad Guy will sting, but those two spoiled brats are in for some hurts they will never recover from.
Is Michael paying off a PI?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!