Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 8:17 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Hello there,

 

Have to deliver a fast review to this chapter… bevor you post the new one -,-

 

Aaaah yeah… how predictable; Michael's ingenuity strikes again. He didn’t even bother to check what the nickname meant with which he was struck. Well, this is another lesson Mikey will never learn: only because Brian says something 'sounds cool' doesn’t necessarily mean it is in fact cool.

 

And really!? What the heck is Nancy's Problem? She lived her whole life in a privileged manner. There was always enough of everything; food, cloth, shelter, money… highly likely even staff to clean after her pompous ass – she doesn’t had to lift a finger to live the comfortable idle life of the well-heeled and it still isn’t enough??

There was never a need for her to work and I'm sure that is the crucial source of the problem. She obviously was bored and had to fill her time with something. And because it wasn't filed with earning a living or simply doing house chores, she had way too much time to weave intrigues, to be conniving and poisonous. If this Tarantula had had to work at one point in her life for the money she spent and hoarded, she would see the world with a completely different view.

It is scary, but this woman seems to be totally morally corrupted to the last fiber of her existence. She does not seem to have a problem with her daughter cheating, stealing and blackmailing the people around her. On the contrary! She is recognizably proud of a criminal. This raises the question of how far Nancy herself is stuck in illegal activities, because she shows signs of a profuse criminal energy and we all know she has molded Lindsay to her image. And Lindsay learned way too well.

 

I had a nasty grin on my face when Nancy and Lindsay were confronted with the Kinney clan. It is really funny that the sophisticated and glamorous grandmamma and the so very highly knowledgeable and experienced art connoisseur don't speak French. Unfortunately, those two creatures are as dense as the Grassi/DeVores and don't want to see that they are history. I'm looking forward to the time when Nancy will try to pull rank in her WASP-community only to be ostracized by her 'very good friends'. Or when Lindsay recognizes that Sidney has way more pull in the art-community than she ever had and will ever have. The gall of this abominable toad to think Sidney's house is going back to her efforts; I'm sure the Bloom's had their house way before Sidney even knew Lindsay.

 

Nancy and Lindsay are like two peas in a pod and Ron should really, really get rid of them as fast as he can. He still has Lynette, the disappointment in Nancy's book (maaan, this woman is definitely not a jot better than Joan or Debbie in the mothering department. Disgusting!). In my opinion Nancy sees her older daughter as useless because she can't (and won't) satisfy her mother's greed. She can't have children, so there's no opportunity to marry her of to an upper class man that wants to have a breeding mare and therefore pays Nancy for bearing her and advance her social standing. We have a pointer to that as Nancy instantly starts scheming as Ron mentioned the 'single billionaire'. Madam Pimpress wanted to immediately marry Lindsay of to a completely stranger because there laid a very distant smell of money in the air. I think Lynette's only flaw is that she has decency and dignity and works for her keep. That she married a man she loved is one very big positive to. She has a good heart, is capable of love and compassion and that raised her way above her mother and sister… her willingness to raise Lindsay's baby only proofs my point.

 

Well, I have a feeling that it will be quite full on the side of the defense attorneys when Lindsay and Nancy will join the ranks of the defendants. Child trafficking for adoption is a serious charge – I haven't done much research only a cursory look at Google but I have read that there is the possibility of imprisonment up to 14 years and a fine. Marvelous future prospects for the grandmamma and the best horsey in her stable… (woe… am I nasty but I like it!)

 

Ok, enough raved... great chapter as ever

See you soon!

Katharina

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 6:45 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Holy Crap!!!!!

That had to hurt Nancy and Lindsay's pride to know that they have been outsmarted yet again (Like It Was Hard To Do!!) and that their dastardly plans are for nothing cause they will still lose.

Especially if they could also be charged with abuse, Hell just the threat of prosecution and Deb coming after both of them should have them scared.

But Stupid is As Stupid Does and they can't see what a Wasp Freeze Out is like or what Deb is like when she is set on revenge.

Lindsay should know Brian doesn't lie he just doesn't give out information if no one asks, Brian being a Billionaire is no one's business but Brian, his account, lawyer, Justin and kid/kids.

Lindsay thinking about selling her baby with Nancy helping her is aagainst the law and so it looks like they might be joining Deb, Michael and Joan sooner than they think in prison :)

My goodness Brian has some good people protecting him cause right now his Fortress of Solitude is Impenetrable and the others are in quicksand and despite ignoring the warning signs they are sinking fast lmao.

Lynnette will make an excellent mother because she knows what not to do to raise a child and with some new friends she has good strong support when it gets overwhelming.

Three Fantastic Updates to your stories really made my Sunday.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 11:21 am Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

What a great chapter.  This story is so full of twists and turns.  Just love it.