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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 1:15 am Title: April (Part One)

I say Chris Hobbs has lost his mind.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 9:01 pm Title: April (Part One)

I hope writing this chapter didn't put you off cos you haven't posted for a while.  Hope there's more to come soon cos it's really good writing and I love it and miss the updates!

Thanks

Deb

Reviewer: Dailani Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2018 7:36 pm Title: April (Part One)

Hi. I really hope that you are fine and will return soon. It is great story...

Reviewer: Alexandra Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:15 am Title: April (Part One)

Hi Ashita, I hope RL is treating you right and that you are well. I am looking forward to an update soon.

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:19 pm Title: April (Part One)

Seriously, Chris Fucking Hobbs!!!!!!  Update soon

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 1:58 am Title: April (Part One)

Totally creepy from beginning to end!!!

This stalker is someone who knew or thinks he knew Justin while he was with Brian?

Whatever he left behind I hope it will be found soon and has his finger prints all over.

Lindsay deserves to be locked in a cell with The Stalker, Michael, Craswell, his friends and Nancy for all of time.

If not that then she deserves to have her Ass kicked until the dinosaurs resume life back on earth.

Lindsay is in so much trouble that even Momsy and Daddums can save her, they won't want to ruin what little respect they still have left.

I wonder was anyone outside watching the area and Justin?

They gotta catch this creep cause he is unhinged and is willing to kill Brian and Justin's baby to have Justin.

More security is definitely called for around Britin, Brian and Justin  that slime is way too close now!! <shivers>

Thanks for giving my nightmares, nightmares lol ;)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2018 5:07 pm Title: April (Part One)

Oh, wow, no wonder you struggled with this chapter.  The stalker's mind is so warped.  You did a fantastic job of portraying that. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2018 2:10 pm Title: April (Part One)

Scary! This guy is out of his mind, completely mad. He is much too close from Justin and has a secured get-away; but he made a big mistake (one more) and maybe somebody will report him. Maybe Mary will remember him.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2018 2:06 pm Title: April (Part One)

So Lindsay was working with him...I'm still trying to figure out who this person is.  You have me stumped.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2018 1:02 pm Title: April (Part One)

OMG!  The guy is really psycho!  How will he be stopped.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2018 12:45 pm Title: April (Part One)

Wow he is one scary dude and Brian and Justin are in real danger this guy is a psychopath. Good job writing such a difficult chapter 

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