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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2018 6:39 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

I see nothing but trouble with Christian and Troy both working for Kinnetik. Eric too. They all better get their shit together and leave Justin to his man. A man so in love he can never get enough of his partner.

Can't wait for that little chat between Justin and Troy. Really Brian, four times a week!? Really!

Mel is certainly in for surprises like the one she just witnessed by living with those two. Ha!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 4:15 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

Amazing chapter! I love how Justin can read Brian, once more; he had lost this ability for a while and it was a mess.

The end is hilarious!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2018 11:30 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

I don't care how talented they (Eric & Christian) are, having them there at Kinnetik, I believe, won't be good karma at all. There has got to be people out there with the same qualifications. And just knowing about Hobb's father & what he did to his own son?! Omg! Where is he now & can 'someone' have him killed please?! Horrifying! 

And Mel! Holy shit girl, you KNOW these two, did you ever hear of knocking before entering a room? I would have been pissed at her, Christ! Live & learn I guess.



Author's Response:

Hey Shine!

I understand your issues with hiring Eric and Christian, but there is a method to Justin's seeming madness. On one hand, hiring them prevents any possible civil lawsuits about discrimination even if they are falsified (again, think Kip Thomas). On the flipside of that theory is the adage "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer". It's going to be interesting to discover what Eric, who is the wild card, really is.

As for Mel, it was really a comedy of errors kind of thing. Although she's annoyed, Brian's remarks to her tempers that a bit. Brian as always is an insolent imp, and takes great joy in goading her. The Brian/Mel dynamic just keeps growing and changing in ways I've never imagined. And it's a great thing since they are both going to rely on it.

Stay Tuned Darling!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2018 2:55 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

Well at least they ended up with sex even if Mel didn't approve.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2018 1:56 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

Just another fantastic chapter to enjoy Mel probably enjoyed getting a glimpse of Justin lol

Time for Justin to mark his territory (Why should Brian get all the fun ;)) and show that loser that he was just a poor substitute cause the real thing is 10xs!!

Getting away is a good idea and perhaps after the trials they should all get away to shake off the scrum and embrace a new beginning?

Story just gets better and better every chapter :)

 

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2018 12:25 am Title: NE IMPERARET SANITATEM REDUCAMUS (Let Sanity Reign)

Great update.  I just keep loving this story more and more.  And, with your writing being so amazing, I know you must be feeling better.

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