Date: Sep 14, 2018 12:44 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
Okay... just caught up with this story. Just as good, and amazing as all your stories. Your anti-Michael and Lindsay here are classic. Thank you for that.
First you had the Debbie smackdown. And Lindsay's, "How dare she talk to me like that?" Entitlement issues? And Michael, crossing his arms, and scowling! Classic move. If Debbie's words weren't seeping through, the clapping of the diner patrons should have.
Brian's smackdown at Kinnetik. In front of Justin. hehe... That must have been all sorts of embarrassing! Wonderful. How can they think it wasn't something binding, and they could find a flaw in it? Do they really discount Brian's intelligence? To have them escorted out, and told to their face they're banned... When are they gonna get a clue? Need a vowel? And, I am so tired of that phrase, I'm the mother of your son... Well, not for long bitch! Did I miss the time frame here? Gus is six. I was sure Justin was only in New york for a year. Brian agreed to have an investigator following Lindsay in Canada... SO... How does Jeff have proof of what Lindsay has been up to for the last FIVE YEARS?
Jennifer... can't beat the WASP in her. Tell it like it is. And Lindsay telling her she's nothing? That she doesn't have that kind of pull? Wake up Lindsay, darling! Does Lindsay have idea just how much Justin has accomplished in the art world? I always find it funny when she thinks she can be a better manager than the ACTUAL managers. Then Jennifer calling her a "WASP Wannabe?" Funny as hell! And Jen owning Red Cape Comics? Michael will have no choice other than to accept Justin's proposal to buy RAGE. Michael being homeless, jobless, and husband-less? Oh Wait! Lindsay is too. Where are they gonna lay their heads tonight? Michael standing there with 14 garbage bags of his belongings. He better know better than to go to a neighbor, expecting help. He'll find out exactly what they think of him when tell him off. Michael and Lindsay think Brian's gonna let them stay at the loft or pit them up for the night? Does they have a problem with short-term memory loss? They was at Kinnetik a few hours ago, when Brian pretty much told them to get lost. And so very proud of Ben for kicking Michael out! I hope Ben froze his checking/savings accounts. And where is Lindsay gonna get money for a place for her head tonight? Laughter and fun ensues.
So happy for Mel... and Leda... and the fact she will be living across the road from Brian and Justin! AWESOME! And the three women's interaction with Lindsay... PRICELESS!
Things to look forward to: Brian and Justin hearing Michael and Lindsay's tape recording that Ben taped. Lindsay getting the Lawyer's demands for her to give up her rights for Gus. (Will they include all the pictures and reports of her activities)? I'd love to see her reaction when they know about her leaving the kids in the museum, and her trip to New York to meet up with Sam again. Will Mel sue to get Michael's rights removed? Lindsay's demise in the body painting, and her being publicly humilated when it's aired live. Stacy and Lindsay failed attempt to get the best of Justin... So many good things to look forward to.
Sorry for the rant, but I had seven chapters to review. I'm on my way to start SOWK! What does it mean by Part 1? Are you already planning a sequel? I have to hand it to you... having eight WIP's, I don't know how you keep all the stories straight. But all of them have the devotion as if they are the only story you are writing. I love your writing and story telling...
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Sep 12, 2018 12:00 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
Omg I hope the next chapter comes up soon I am positively salivating on the spanking the idiot twins are about to get
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2018 8:35 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
So Lindsay doesn't realize that she's not fooling everyone anymore?
Date: Sep 11, 2018 7:52 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
Well done Leda! I'm curious to see how Leda and Daphne would interact in front of Lindsay. That could be bloody.
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2018 7:35 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
Yes Let Lindsay in she thinks she is a way better artist than anyone else especially Justin, but the time limit she will have to work on the fly, and a artist of her nagitude will hate being rushed, which will cause many problems for her and anyone working with or near her.
She will be so busy whining about not having enough time to really create that she will forget that audience watching her performance, all those galleries looking at her whine, belittle and disrupt the flow constantly will love it;)
Hope Lindsay has money for her and Michael because the Kinney ATM is shut down Permanently??
From now on the only getting rid or being ridden will be one Justin Cole Taylor Kinney preferably long, hard and all night long lol
Date: Sep 11, 2018 7:30 pm Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: SELF-SABOTAGE Part 2
OG! I pictured him walking down the street with hisvtradh bags and Capt. Astro and lost it.
Lindsay really should crawl under her rock to lick her wounds and really take a look at her life. There is no Mel, no Brian, not even Sam. No money, no mommy, no talent, no nothin'. Oh well she chose the life she now leads.