Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 6:22 pm Title: The Rat Who Sucks on a Lemon...And They're Almost Complete

Wow Michael Really Got Served!

And Everyone Is Now Free!!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 12:26 pm Title: The Rat Who Sucks on a Lemon...And They're Almost Complete

Another one bites the dust, so to speak. And you gave us three chapters. I had to look back at my last comment, as nothing was making sense, and everything felt out of place. That said, I loved this chapter. What an outcome to Michael's life. I can't wait for the fun to ensue. I had to laugh when you mentioned, "Money Pitt". I loved that movie. I swear that movie came out over 30 years ago. Lord, what does that say for us?

Needless to say I'm a little confused by Michael's thinking of,  the only thing that is keeping me calm and happy in my new hellhole is the fact that she will never, ever find out about that child!  Who to find out, and what child? He can't be referring to the one Brian and Justin plan to adopt....  Hmm.

 

I absolutely love the tattoo the guys plan to get. It says so much about them.

Now on to the final two chapters. Thank you for posting all of these at the same time.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy, I have tweaked where you mentioned a bit, so it is clearer but yes he is.

I am glad you are enjoying it, I was sad to see this one end.

Happy reading.

Nicole