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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 22

OMG!! I want to be part of the Horvath clan! Now THAT'S the family Brian should have always had. I teared up when CJ welcomed Brian home. Vicky and Diana are just... LAWD HAM TURKEY they are too much in the very best of ways! I also loved the fact that Gus feels comfortable with all of them already. Him and CJ walking in together... WOW! What a moment! 

The Punkasses of Pittsburgh sure ain't ready for Team Brian! Oh, I can't wait for MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 12:20 am Title: Chapter 21

It's as is Bruan has a whole posse he didn't know about.  Lol.  I'm not sure it was proper for the ladies to go to the diner just to cause problems, but the Liberty Losers needed some problems.   Although, in America there's no such thing as fighting words, meaning you can say almost anything it's when you do something it changes - pouring stuff on them was an assault, not saying they didn't deserve it, but tsk tsk. Lindsay is hysterical, flirting from behind bars, Too funny.


I like this feels like a fairy tale, a bit if a dark one, like the Grim tales, but you know something more than day to day life is guiding it.  Justin is going to give in completely soon, no one is safe from the Horvath charm.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 21

This new family seems a lot of fun! I hope Brian won't be overwhelmed by them.

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je comprends Justin car selon lui entre eux ça va trop vite,mais dans l'autre sens Brian se sesns en sécurité avec lui.

Donc il faut donner une chance à Brian et voir comment les choses vont évoluer, de plus Carl est là pour les aider sans oublier le frère et la soeur,donc il(Justin ) doit laisser faire les choses en douceur.

A bientot pour la suite.

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je voudrais signaler que pour la traduction google en français les informations ne passent pas, donc j'ai du aller sur l'original du site.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 21

More fun with Brian & Justin! Good for you boys!

CJ & Vicky are going to have such fun with Brian! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 21

Yes, please do not have sex in Gus's bed.  That's just wrong. lol

I can't wait for Brian to meet his siblings.  They seem like a lot of fun.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

Brian is so happy which is a big change.  I'm loving his real brother and sister.  They are perfectly correct about Debra, Michael, Lindsay and Melanie. Love how Kiki took up for the Horvath crew.  I'm wondering if Debra will have a job to go back to?  And Michael complaining that Vicki and Diana came in as if they own the place!  That is so wrong on so many levels.  Especially when that's what Michael does.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 20

I would have loved to see this scene at the diner! Brian is getting mentally prepared to seduce Justin,  not that he needs more incentive...

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 20

I think I like Vicky and Diana.  I want to hang out with them. lol

We're making some progress with Brian and Justin.  Staying in the same house...oh the things that could happen.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 6:21 am Title: Chapter 20

Now that was funny as hell.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh my, Brian's new family is the greatest.  I'm loving Kiki.  Here's to Alex straightening this whole thing out.  Looks like Justin's family is moving in.  Gus will be happy.  Make Ted happy too, will ya.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 2:13 am Title: Chapter 20

OMG!!! Please Say There Is Video of Lindsay, Mel, Deb and Michael getting their Asses Kicked in the diner??

I bet everyone would love to see that!!! I bet they could sell tickets for that viewing rofl

Deb should lose her job and have to pay part of the damage along with the others and for all the free food she was giving to Michael since Brian always paid.

Oooooo I bet it hurt having some of her real hair ripped out?!?

I So Love Vicky and Diana They Were Awesome!!!

Hope the husbands won't be too mad cause that was Hilarious!!! :)

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 19

Things are getting close and personal with Brian and Justin... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 19

Awwwwww love this B/J convo, so sweet & telling...I hope the boys accept Vic back into their lives.

Cannot wait to see the Brian, CJ & Vicky interaction...when is that gonna happen?

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 19

I'm glad they finally got to spend some time together alone.  It's good for Brian to open up to someone.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 19

It's nice that Carl and Joan are getting along.  Even nicer that Justin and Brian are too.  Can't wait until Carl Jr and Vicky and their family show up.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 18

Joan and Brian seem to have a better relationship; maybe with Carl in the picture, it will get even better.

The scene at the diner was a prelude to what is going to happen next because Deb and the girls won't back down.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love this story and how you build the relationships.

Lily has a funny way to tell her dad that she doesn't agree with him; she also has a funny way to get her dads together.

Carl is getting comfortable with his new family and Gus is getting better every day, so is Ted.

Carl junior is in for some treatments if he goes to Liberty Avenue.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 16

I love how you wrote Brian and Carl's meeting: honest, daring and funny.

Justin seems to want to wait, but will he succeed avoiding the attraction?

Gus is just adorable with the way he's calling Justin and how he's behaving with him.

The last part was great: big battle of losers who see the defaults in the others so easily, but can't imagine doing something wrong.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

I love CJ! You go and protect your baby brother! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 11:44 am Title: Chapter 18

Wow, Carl Jr.  is all about protecting the brother he hadn't been able to growing up.  Gotta love the guy.  Carl is going to be good for this family.  Gus is doing better and now that Grandma, John, and Peter are there things are going to get interesting.  Ted is coming out of his self induced melancolica so maybe Emmett can relax.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 10:48 am Title: Chapter 18

On behalf of Deb, Mikey, Linds and Mel, please allow me to say, "oh sh!t!" Lol way to take it to the CJ.  I'm very curious how things will go when they meet his wife.

Carl still hpgets the sexy points.  Joan, second chances do usually happen.  Justin I know you jet a stranger in the park and ... But look, the dates, Godspeed, whatever is drawing you two together.  You can't fight a tidal wave.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 18

Things just got very interesting.  I'm going to like CJ. ;)

Reviewer: Manawah1ne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 9:02 am Title: Chapter 18

No words 

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