Date: Jun 12, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 18
Now that's the kind of brother everyone needs.

Date: Jun 12, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 18
Oooooo I am So Liking CJ!!!
I just love the fact that he got everyone in the diner to pay attention to Deb and maybe reevaluate her version of events???
I think the four idiots are going to be shocked to see Brian and his family ready to take them on.
Getting close to The Showdown Of The Century on Liberty Avenue (it has to be there so Deb, Michael, Mel or Lindsay can't change the story) not ready yet but it is coming!!
Date: Jun 11, 2017 11:48 am Title: Chapter 17
I am so enjoying this story. The ride you are taking us on is nothing I had ever considered before.
I think most of us wish Carl was our dad. He's so sweet.
Date: Jun 11, 2017 7:46 am Title: Chapter 17
That was an interesting way to end this.
Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:38 am Title: Chapter 17
What?? I say again, what?!?!? OMG!! Sneaky author setup. This is gonna be very interesting. Carl JR us so gonna get them.
Carl gets the sexy points the Katt two chaps. So, tough and I going to see my son. That's hotter than Georgia asphalt.
Justin, get a calendar abd mark the days, cuz soon as you can, Brian will. I love it.
Gus, daddy us a perfect babe for him.
Yes, I'm talking to your characters, you should feel proud. :)

Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:15 am Title: Chapter 17
Carl is fitting rightin. Carl Jr. looking like Brian is going to end up in trouble, especially if Michael tries something. Isn't he in the military? I can't wait for Brian and Carl Jr. to meet.

Date: Jun 11, 2017 12:15 am Title: Chapter 16
Deb is all kinds of screwed up. She actually thinks Michael loved Ted! Glad that Carl got to talk with Brian and that Gus wants Justin to be his daddy.

Date: Jun 10, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
Carl handled the situation with total calm and let Brian know that he is not going away but will stand by his son and fight.
I see Deb is exerting her power over Mel and Lindsay boy will she be surprised when she faces Brian, Emmett, Ted and The Family to see that she has no power over them.
So Lindsay is sleeping around and Mel is enjoying the lifestyle she once lambasted Brian with?
Not surprised the money is running out and that Lindsay's parents are getting tired of paying for her stupidity, not surprised that Mel lost her job but how is Brian to blame for her not doing her part to take care of Gus?
So when is the next party the girls will be busted at?
Deb might want to watch her back Mel and Lindsay are getting tired of her mouth and might be getting ready to shut her up as soon as they figure out a plan with their two brain cells lol
Date: Jun 10, 2017 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad Brian and Carl had a nice visit.
Gus calling Justin Daddy was a surprise. I guess he knows more about the future than we do right now. lol
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Awwww, Carl is so perfect. I'm glad Justinbsaved the day. Ni understand Bri not being enthusiastic. Hopefully Carl will met his heart. Having his sibs numbers goes a long way.
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 14
What fortune to meet Vic and Rodney at the precinct. It's cool that Carl wants to know more about Brian. I'm so glad he busted the girls, such trash, lol. Now we need Deb locked up.
Date: Jun 09, 2017 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's great that Carl dared to come to meet his son; it's the best way to avoid a refusal and Brian couldn't just shut the door because Carl didn't know.
It's also great that Carl could meet both Gus and Lily.
It's wonderful that Brian kissed Justin as if it was natural.
Gus is absolutely adorable with Justin; he trusts him and that's a huge progress.
Carl was also right to talk to Alex and to look for what the girls have done and are still doing; be prepared is the best protection.

Date: Jun 09, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Carl was smart to get some insight into Brian and Those Two Bitches it makes it easier for him not to stand back and let them continue to act like their actions don't have serious consequences.
It is time for Nancy to learn that covering for Lindsay has a snowball effect that will cover her and Ron to the point that they will never be able to dig out.
Mel and Lindsay should really get use to the police showing up at their house and perhaps anywhere else they are to spoil their fun, after a few more busts they will soon be Persona Non Grata on the party scene.
Now how to make Deb and Michael pay for their sins?
Brian kissed Justin I think Brian better be ready for that conversation.
Thanks to Justin Brian is going to give Carl a chance and that will be good for everyone I hope? <crosses fingers>
Date: Jun 09, 2017 11:50 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow...I hadn't expected Carl to just to show up without calling. Glad he got the background from Alex though.
Yeah Brian, hello! Ask Justin on a date!
Date: Jun 09, 2017 10:39 am Title: Chapter 15
I do hope Brian gives Carl a chance. He really didn't know anything about him and from the sounds of it he would have gotten him away from Jack.

Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:22 am Title: Chapter 15
I always look forward to another chapter on this. Carl is going all out to get to know his son. Justin thinks Brian should get to know Carl. I think Carl will be another protection against the Pittsburgh Bitches.

Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 14
Good for Ted slowly regaining his inner strength and confidence he finally seeing his worth and appreciating that his friends always saw it too.
I hope Brian does meet with Carl it will be good for him to see that he does have a strong father figure and to have another person who can love him on his side.
So what has the Pittsburgh Faction been up to besides sitting around and plotting, whining and complaining??
Date: Jun 08, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well I guess Carl being Brian's real dad is going turn out alright...if he ever gives him the chance that is...
And Brian has 'normal' siblings, that should be different!
Good for Ted! Moving on away from Michael, eating on his own, wanting to get back to work...huge steps.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad Carl was able to talk to Vic and Rodney. I think it helped him understand Brian a bit more.
Poor Brian. He is so torn up about everything. So much change in his life some good some bad. But he needs to move forward. Hopefully Justin and Alex can help with that.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 5:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Things are going smoothly, that's great, especially for Ted and Gus.
I hope Brian will be willing to meet Carl soon.

Date: Jun 08, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm so glad that Ted is doing better. That is such a relief. Carl and Vic talking was interesting. I think Carl would be good for Brian. Alex is going to be on hand to help as well.
Date: Jun 07, 2017 3:14 am Title: Chapter 13
It's great that Ted is starting to live for himself and seeing what was wrong with Michael. Brian sharing his feelings and questions is new.

Date: Jun 06, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
I do so look forward to this story. It's nice that Ted is coming around and that Brian wants to be in Lily's life. Of course you can't help but love Emmett. There is so much in this story to like. I even like the anti parts.
Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
Leave it to Emmett to cut right to the chase. Yes, he doesn't want Justin with anyone else.
Can't wait to see how this all develops.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
A Deb so bad she loses Horvath to Joan? Say it ain't so. Brian has a dad p, a dad who is normal... Yay!!
Deb, repent, the end is near, lol.