Date: Jun 05, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Carl? Brian's father? I did not see that one coming...wow

Date: Jun 05, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
So Carl is Brian's Real Father and Deb knows this is going to be bad, but could also be a way for Joan to find her own happiness and for Brian to have a real father. (Plus the more people on their side the better it is for everyone)
Love that now everyone knows that Lily is Brian's daughter and I am also thrilled that the four idiots don't know yet.
I do also believe that Justin and Lily should move in with Brian but they aren't ready for that yet.
The Next Chapter Should Be Very Thrilling :)

Date: Jun 05, 2017 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow. What an exciting chapter! Now everyone in New York knows that Lily is Brian's. How big is his house? Gus has the right idea about Justin and Lily moving in with them. So Carl is Brian's real dad. That was a surprise. What mischief is Deb going to get up to, because you know she's not going to take this lying down.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 12
So Carl is Brian's dad. I do hope they can patch things up.
I'm so glad Gus is happy about Lily. Now if we could only get his Daddies together. lol
Date: Jun 05, 2017 9:43 am Title: Chapter 12
This is a great idea to have Carl as Brian's father. I bet Deb will be so angry when he will side by his son. Maybe Joan will have a second chance with him.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 11
I just love when everyone acts like the adults they are...well done Brian & Justin! This is soooo good! Kiss already!
Date: Jun 04, 2017 10:31 am Title: Chapter 11
That went well. Justin is going to need to bend a bit, Brian us going to do things for Lilly. Gus maybe be too young to understand, but when he doe he will be thrilled.
Deb, you need to learn to listen.

Date: Jun 03, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love that Brian told Justin that he is Lily's father and that they are going to work on building a strong family for Lily and Gus.
Rodney telling off Debra was good to bad she didn't hear a word but at least he got to have his say.
What Debra needs to realize is that if there was a chance Michael could reclaim his position by Brian's side he would drop her before she got a chance to open her mouth.
And Lindsay would do the exact same thing because in her mind all she wants is the life Mommy and Daddy showed her, so she used Brian's childhood to get to Brian's bank account and now that Gus is gone and there is no money she is coming.
Mel is just a bitter shrew who realizes that despite everything Brian has been through he will always rise above her.
Like Michael, Deb and Lindsay she wants everything handed to her on a gold platter simply because she is a lesbian.
What they don't want to hear is that Karma is a Bitch and when she comes they won't be able to handle it and the repercussions will last until the end of time.
Date: Jun 03, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well they know. Now we just have to work on them developing a romantic relationship.
I want to kiss Rodney. I love how he put Deb in her place. He was very protective of Vic.

Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love how Rodney told Debbie off. I love Sharon Gless, but the way they wrote her in the show has spawned many a fic that has her not so nice. You've done a great job. I'm so glad that Justin is willing for Brian to be Lily's dad and it's so cool that Gus, her brother, named her.
Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Brian's revelation started to corner Justin a little, but they will work something that will suit them both. Gus will be thrilled when he will know that Lily is her half-sister.
Date: Jun 03, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 10
Let's start with Vic, Brian has every right to feel disappointed with Vic. Vic should feel ashamed, like Ivanka, he's complicit, lol. But, sense he didn't help jus chances for change are greater.
Little Lilly, so lucky, Gus is going to be an awesome big brother. I'm not sure how Justin will react. Fate, luck, the gods or stupid Cupid has set these wheels in motion. If they can make it through the bumps we are that much better.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awwwww so sweet! Gus promised her only good things...
I want to know what else Brian's 'application' for his sperm said...lol
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brian must find the way to tell Justin, without him feeling trapped. Even if they are good in this new family, the responsibilities will automatically change.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 10
I do hope Brian tells Justin soon and I hope he's happy about it. I so want them to become a real family. Emmett might be getting a bit suspicous.
I love how protective Gus is of Lily.

Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 10
Brian knows! So cool. Can't wait for everyone to find out. And I'm hoping that Ted decides he wants more from life than what Michael offered.

Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Forgiveness will come but first Vic has to forgive himself for allowing it to go on for so, they all do in a way, until they are ready to forgive themselves they won't be strong enough to face their bullies head on and walk away victorious instead of victims.
They must all need money that is why they are plotting so hard, perhaps Liberty Avenue turned on them all?
Seems Brian is starting to regain his determination to fight for what he wants and first it starts with protecting his children, Justin and and friends.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 12:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin had Brian's baby!! That's why he said the baby looked like him. Oh riots a wonderful serendipitous situation. Yay!!! Lindsay grabbing the sperm would have been very very bad.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor Ted, testifying cleanses the soul. You will come out the other side dear. Justin has an instant family, lol. Brian and Gus have a crush. The Pitts crew sucks butt, majorly.

Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Nice some intrigue about Brian's sperm donation and I really hope Lily is his.
So how long before Vic shows up to join his boys?
Alex calling Ms. Novotny Debra makes a lot of sense why give her credit for anything, Brian succeeded despite Debra and so did Ted, I don't even think calling her or Michael Novotny is good either.
That name belongs to a man who sacrifice his life for his country, Debra stole the name to hide the fact that she got pregnant at 17 and was unwed.
Neither she or Michael deserve to use that name anymore it has been tarnished long enough.
Seems Ted is getting getting stronger mentally aswell as physically.
Jealous Brian is So Adorable;)
Date: Jun 01, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
So Lily could be Brian's afterall...pretty please. lol
I hope Vic comes to live with the guys. :)
Date: Jun 01, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Justin might have bought Brian's sample? That would be a huge coincidence!
Glad Emmett sent this text to Vic; maybe it will help him get away from the devils he has near him.
Date: Jun 01, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
My tummy is upended. Feeling positively ill. Michael and Deb here are positively vile! Heart breaks for Ted, Emmett & Brian. To be si disillusioned by people you thought cared.
Oh I hope Vic just keeps on walking!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Justin got Brian's sample didn't he?!?!? Holy shitballs! Oh man...that would be EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *fingers crossed* Oh please oh please oh please please please!!
More insight into the evil people. How disgustingly aweful they are. Love Alex in this. Wonderful portrayal.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jun 01, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
So...something tells me that Brian is going to turn out to be Lily's dad...nice touch!
Already Brian is showing some jealous tendencies towards Alex paying attention & having some kind words for Justin...hmmmmm

Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Is it possible that Brian is Lily's father? That would be so cool. Here's hoping Vic turns up to join the family.