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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Looks like Justin has found a new family which means so has Daphne.  After all it's all for Gus if Lily stays in their lives.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 5

You go Daph! She's going to be a huge help too, I can tell. Love how the chapters keep coming, yay Starlight! 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 3:39 am Title: Chapter 5

Deb, Michael, Mel and Lindsay deserve to have their Asses kicked for the pain they are causing Brian, Gus, Ted and Emmett then all four of them need to be locked in a room so they can listen to each other for the rest of their lives.

It's either that or all four of them being tossed into a volcano but I think listening to each other would actually be more painful.

Poor Gus!! This little boy makes me want to cry and I want to rip Lindsay and Melanie's hair out, no child should be afraid to hear the word Mommy:'(

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh my God, Gus had a great day! I feel for Brian, afraid to leave & not knowing what to do....this is a wonderfully different story, I'm always attracted to mental health/psychological fics, I studied Psychology in college. Loving this!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

I am simply loving this story.  They all can heal together.  Can't wait for Alex and Daphne to meet this bunch. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving this story.  Justin and Lily are made to be in Gus' life.  Now if we can just get Ted better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 3

Gus loves Lily and is willing for his dad to leave for work.  That's amazing.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 1:23 am Title: Chapter 3

So....is Shelly like a nanny? 

I'm glad they are getting to know each other a bit.  I do hope Justin can help Gus some.  I guess this is a test to see how he behaves without Brian for a little while.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just beautiful...poor Gus...but so glad he feels so at ease with Justin & Lily...sweet

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Seems like Justin has a whole new family, not just a new baby. So pleased!

Brian was a rockstar! Ethan was...ugh...no words. I doubt we've seen or heard the last of him. He seemed pretty possessive of Justin still. No worries though. Brian will no doubt let him know his actual place.

While some of Justin's life is terribly sad adn tragic, he's overcome. True strenth of character. His dad's a dick. So sad that Jen and Molly died.

Loved this chapter!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Amazing chapter!!!

Some other sad facts about Justin's life, but it seems it's improving fast!

The baby will help Gus to move forward and so will Brian; especially when he will discover Justin might be the artist who will decorate his office; wild guess, but will see if I'm right later on.

Ian was out fast and allowed THE meeting that will change some lives.

Brian is amazing in this story.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh see, told ya Gus it's already better.  You gave a new baby, that's huge for a trip to the parkl. Brian being assertive awesome, Justin needed to be rescued and with Brian's past it might not have happened.  This is going to be wonderful!

Poor dead Jen.  Molly, I didn't really know.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

 This is horrible awful, terrible sad and dud I say horrible? That goodness these poor people gave each other. Suffering alone, is double the pain.  Together they can find strength they never knew. Poor Gus, hang in sweetie, I know it gets better.

So happy, Michael knows the inside of a jail intimately..

Thanks for the newest story. :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2

I don't even know what to say.  That chapter was just so damn sweet.  I'm hoping our guys get more comfortable with each other because it looks like Gus is already attached to Lily and Justin.

Reviewer: Marny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 6:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh wauww wonderful.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Interesting, very interesting.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Your stories just pull me right in! Love this! Well done, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2

Love this.  Brian, Gus, Emmett and Ted caring for someone.  Perfect.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooohhh!!! How sweet. ETHAN!!! Why Ethan?

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Another beginning to another FABULOUS fic!

Love your writing talent, esp. anti- Mikey, Linz, Deb and Mel.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more..... ❤️

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a punch in the guts! Very dark beginning, but I'm hooked already.

I hope Brian will be able to get his money back from the girls; he doesn't care that much about it, but they care and will fight not to give it back. He should make them bleed.

As for Ted, it's horrible what Michael did; I hope he won't get away with it.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a terrific start! I can tell I'll be checking throughout the day for updates. lol. I can already tell that it's going to be a very emotionally involved story. They are already all over the map and it's just the first chapter.

Utter fury and disgust for how the girls have treated Gus. How are they even able to try to fight to regain custody of Gus? How are not in jail for neglect? IS Mel still practising law? 

I icked at the idea of Ted and Michael having been together. Ugh...and what an absolute heartless freaking asshole Michael is in this. And Deb is right in there too sadly enough. 

Thank goodness Emmett saw what was actually happening with Gus which led to Brian now having him. Now that Ted, Emmett and Brian will be taking Gus with them and startingfresh in New York, hopefully they will be able to at least start to put some of this behind them. Start fresh without those awful 4 hindering all their efforts. The support and belief in Brian's ability from T&E is lovely! both willing to put up $ for his own business.

Intersting that Joan is now involved in a positive way. I like that. she was too late to help brian gorwingup, but she's saving her grandkids. Jack and Claire...well just disgusting!

Seems like neither Lindsey nor Michael are on a "I want Brian for myself" kick. All 4 seem to really hate him.

Fantastic start!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Definitely want more of this.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  What a beginning.  I'm hooked already.  Great story idea.

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