[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:44 am Title: Chapter 8
Ah, sweet ending. Good enough for Michael. He deserves everything, and more.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Yay, Emmett! You go, girl!
That scene just about did my stomach in. ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:40 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Carl. I feel so awful for him. I'm glad Brian's helping him.
Debbie deserves to be alone. She did that all on her own.
Did Debbie give Michael the money from her house? I suppose Michael needed a lawyer. If needed, Michael better realize Brian can hire the best out there.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Justin loves Brian so much, he's taking on the morning sickness for Brian. ;)
Poor Ben ~ he went from awful to horrible! What's with the guys he has in his life?
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:32 am Title: Chapter 4
Happy to see the kids are finally happy.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:31 am Title: Chapter 3
I've always liked stories with Mysterious Marilyn ~ uh ~ Marty Marilyn.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:16 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like the "new" Mel. Hope Lindsay stays gone. So happy she talked to Brian.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2025 6:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah-Ha! Great start to this sequel.
Date: Dec 30, 2022 5:58 am Title: Chapter 8
This was a great ending to the story!! I am glad that Justin got his sight back and am happy that Gus and JR got their lives back as well, living with Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2021 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in the process of reading this. You have a heck of an imagination. Great writing.funny as heck.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Your comments are music to my ears.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
good one
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is so far out there but not everything has to be serious all the time. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
I'm glad. It's hard to write something that hasn't been done, so I hope I managed it. I appreciate all the comments.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:49 am Title: Chapter 7
This is absolutely hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I tried my best.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:37 am Title: Chapter 6
So grandpa is going to live with them. That's great.
Author's Response:
I always liked Carl so I couldn't just leave him there with Deb.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, just wow. I never expected that.
Author's Response:
Well I have to spice it up a bit.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:28 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad the kids are happy.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't have it any other way.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Good question by Brian. What does Michael want? And who is Marty?
Author's Response:
He wants Brian. As for Marty you'll soon find out.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2
That was actually nice of Melanie. Is one of them really pregnant?
Author's Response:
Yes, I really wanted to change the perception of Mel and I decided to go with mpreg.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really happy that there is a second part to the story. I can't wait to see what you have planned for everybody.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy it!
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Loved this...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I hope the ending was all you hoped for.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 7
The exact fate Michael deserves... and yay for Papa Em
Author's Response:
I decided not to let Michael get off and Em makes a good dad.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 6
I'd say poor Debbie, but she did it to herself
Author's Response:
Yep, I have to agree.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 5
The MM twist was fantastic and only Brian is preggers? I hoped for both lol
Author's Response:
Well the story isn't over yet.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 4
So glad to see this kids happy
Author's Response:
Me too. Brian, Justin and Emmett along with Ted treat them as equals.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Who is MM if not Marilyn?
Author's Response:
It's a mystery! One you'll find out in a later chapter.