Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 1:04 pm Title: Seriously...How Do You Think This Is Going For You?

Finally Jenny, the mouth, is getting what she deserves.  Let's get a bigger toothbrush for Michael.  LOL  Thanks for my morning laugh.  Great writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:17 am Title: Seriously...How Do You Think This Is Going For You?

I can't wait for Jenny to go to the military academy: she is in so much trouble!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 6:29 pm Title: How Did That Work Out for You?

Still can't get over just how aweful Jenny is at such a young age. It's going to take alot for anything to get through to her and for her to learn anything. Perhaps livingwith Michael would be a lesson. LOL! Michael was so close to saying something about him being her "father". While it may not be true, she sure is a lot like him in many ways!!

I'm giving Lindsey the benefit of the doubt for now. I sure hope all the changes are permanant. The rose coloured glasses certainly seem to have come off with regards to Jenny and her part in her behaviour and attitude.

Michael screwed up that's for sure! Had to know it was coming. Getting the crap beat out of himself and it was all a useless attempt. Justin had the perfect alibi. LOL. What a moron.

Such a great story! Like all of yours, I wait (almost) patiently for every update.

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine,

Sorry for lack of review responses, RL kicked hard and still is, but I hope that you are fully convinced of Lindsay's change in the next chapter. And she's been living with Mel long enough to have picked up a thing or two...that's all I am saying.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 12:46 am Title: How Did That Work Out for You?

Michael's screwed things up once again.  Wonder who Jenny's father really is.  Is he in prison?  I'm glad to see that Lindsay has changed for the better.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 12:20 am Title: How Did That Work Out for You?

Oh this was good.  Your writing is amazing and I just love it.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Conspiring Witches - AKA Sex, Lies and Alibis

So....Lindsey has really seen Jenny for what she is. There's no arguing what kind of manipulative little bitch she is. It's mind boggling that she's only 12!! It's hard to imagine a child being so aweful. Lindsey and Mel seem to finally be on the same page and are shipping her off to military school. Not sure if that will work, but there's always hope. There's go to be something to take the nastiness out of that girl. You'd really think she was realted to Michael. thankfully that's not the case. He may not know that though. LOL!!! That btw was a brilliant twist!

Michael got the crap beaten out of him for nothing. What a moron. didn't even check to see what justin was doing that day...just played the blame game and came up short. Now what's he going to do? He's going to be on the war path even more now, as she's heard that Justin is pregnant. Everyone is aware of him now though. I'm just not sure of his level of intelligence. He may have an idea...but his follow through tends to be...stupid. lol.

Looking forward to what's next.

Thank you!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Conspiring Witches - AKA Sex, Lies and Alibis

Wow, this is getting better and better.  Great writing.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 5:19 am Title: Conspiring Witches - AKA Sex, Lies and Alibis

The sound you are imagining is Michael's face hitting the floor hard and his bubble bursting!!!

It is the same sound Jenny's fantasies made when her world collapsed ;)

Michael got himself beat up for nothing and Jenny tried to manipulate for nothing, Jenny is going to hate military school more than anything.

I really want to believe that Lindsay is turning a new leaf but  a small part of me still doesn't trust her yet??

Yes, Justin is Pregnant!!

Thank Goodness they hada party to celebrate this Joyous News with everyone.

So what new plan will Michael hatch now and I hope he has the money to pay the hospital bill??

Wonderful, Amazing Chapter :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Well if that Don't Beat All!

Lindsay is trying to figure out a way to get back into the Wasp Nest she is using Jenny and especially Gus to get in good with Jennifer.

Of course she forgot that Jenny is Her Child and that means Jenny plans on getting back at her Mommy for not taking her side.

Jennifer isn't as stupid or blonde as Lindsay is hoping she knows Wasp Contrite when she sees it and Lindsay has forgotten that Jennifer and Justin haven't had a go at her yet.

Oh Lindsay as usual has overestimated her acting ability and how many years Jennifer has been a Wasp and all the games she knows Wasp can play to win.

Lindsay thinks she can out manoeuvre Jennifer, Justin, Brian and Nya too bad she is playing with pebbles while they have boulders ready to throw at any moment.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter ;)

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 10:52 am Title: Well if that Don't Beat All!

I like this new version of Lindsey: I guess she realized she had more to lose if she remains pro-Jenny than the opposite. Mel is really strong in this story, so much more interesting.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 5:00 am Title: Well if that Don't Beat All!

Kendi like her fathers doesn't lie and when she promises something, you better believe she will follow through with everything she has.

That is one scary fourteen year old and Lindsay would be wise to heed that warning.

I am still skeptical of Lindsay and her contrite tears I would like to know if she is serious how she plans to UnLindsay a twelve year old who was taught the world and the people in it are her playthings and there is No Such Thing As Consequences For Getting What You Want???

Michael is high if he thinks he is getting a penny from Brian again.

Now Deb and Nya know the truth and are waiting for Michael to make his move?

 

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2017 6:51 pm Title: Turning of The Shrew and He Comes Up with a Bad Idea!

Nya and Justin are wise to trust their instincts about Michael dumb doesn't mean stupid.

Michael has a brain he just uses it for selfish reasons and those selfish reasons could get someone seriously hurt or killed, selfish people don't see their evilness as bad they see it as the greater good...For Them and to Hell with the consequences.

Thankfully Reed is smart and went to tell Ted, Blake, Emmett and Deb (When did Deb find out about their plan?) so now they can warn Brian, Justin, Nya and Jennifer to protect themselves and the kids from whatever evil plan Michael had come up with.

I want to believe that Lindsay is turning a new leaf but a part of me doesn't trust her and that is because you don't spend years raising a child to be exactly like you in every way, then drop every lesson you have ever taught her after a week.

Just not possible to have that quick of a turn around simply because she treated you like crap, you bred that behavior in her and you can't turn off the switch that flash.

Lindsay is up to something and it isn't good for anyone especially Jenny.

Author's Response:

You are right as usual, she is indeed up to something...but what oh what could it be? Hopefully the Deb question has been answered in the next chapter.

Happy reading

MissMerlot