Date: Dec 02, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Turning of The Shrew and He Comes Up with a Bad Idea!
Oh No, Michael plays at being stupid, but you really know how to make him dangerous. Good job. Just keep Brian, Justin & the kids safe. You can throw Jenny off the cliff. LOL
Author's Response:
You have my word that I will never harm my boys or their offspring...unluckily for her Jenny is not related to them - oh look there's a nice looking cliff!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 02, 2017 4:17 pm Title: Turning of The Shrew and He Comes Up with a Bad Idea!
It seems that Lindsay is not a fool anymore; good for her; she will gain Mel's trust back.
I love how you are writing Jenny: she doesn't stop being a monster, not for one minute.
What is Michael preparing? After seeing such a movie, it can't be good.
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Aftermath
Why does Michael think he deserves anything from Brian? Lindsay seems to be heading in the right direction and standing up to the monster she made, but will she continue.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Aftermath
Is Justin pregnant?
I can't wait to see how Lindsay will deal with her monster during the coming weeks.
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Aftermath
Mel is putting her foot down with Lindsay and Jenny by issuing out some if her own rules, Lindsay gets to spend the rest of the summer babysitting her monster.
She better apologize to Jennifer and Justin quickly or learn how to be invisible.
Jennifer will use everything in her power to destroy Lindsay and the Bloom Gallery could be a nice start.
I don't think Gus will be coming home once the summer ends, he is going to ask to remain with Brian and Justin not that Lindsay will notice...much
I take it that Blair comes from a very influential family and is from one of the higher echelons of Wasp Society??
Michael going to Brian should be very interesting.
So will Jenny's behavior get to Mommy and Daddy Peterson???
It is going to be a Cruel Summer for some and a Fantastic Summer for others lol
Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Aftermath
Mel was certainly impressive. While I know she will stick to her guns, I hope her threat to Lindsey is heard. That Lindsey actually follows through. I get the impression that Lindsey is so angry because Jenny's behaviour directly efeected Lindsey. If it was towards others, the punishment wouldn't be as swift.
Jennifer of course was her usual brilliant self. Linsey has realized that nothing is forgotten, nor forgiven.
I think more repercussions are in store for the miscreants.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:25 pm Title: The Cotillion Smackdown
Michael, Lindsay and Jenny going in the pool is Hilarious and I hope someone got pictures?
Will pictures of the cotillion be in the newspaper and on the internet?? lol
Jenny being called a termagant and thinking it was a compliment is so Michael.
She insulted Lindsay and Michael criticized some of the Mel for getting diamonds along with Gus, Hunter, Kemi And Kendi.
I really wish Nya had spanked her Ass in front of everyone.
That little spoiled brat is up for some very rude awakenings along with Lindsay and Michael.
Brian and Justin Hot and Proud of their kids.
Kemi And Kendi's dresses are so beautiful and more elegant than looking like an overstuffed orange rofl.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:17 pm Title: The Cotillion Smackdown
This chapter needs to come with a "depends" warning. I nearly peed myself reading parts of this. what an absolute clusterfuck. Brilliant!! I was so looking forward to this and did not disappoint in teh slightest.
Michael's suit....BWAHHAHA! and the fact that he likes is....even better.
My eyes are teary from laughing. Thank you for this. AS much as Jenny was an absolute heinous bitch....and got and hopefully will get everything that's coming to her...this was priceless.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 01, 2017 4:55 pm Title: The Cotillion Smackdown
What a suit!!! It's the same color as the car Michael received from David: hideous.
When I read that there was a pool, I thought one of them will fall into it and you sent the three of them. What a treat!
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2017 3:05 pm Title: The Cotillion Smackdown
Boy, how funny Michael looks. All three of the rats ended up wet.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 8:31 am Title: Aftermath
Wow way to go Mel.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 8:23 am Title: Aftermath
Yay, the witches are having their brooms taken away. You have such a great way of writing. Keep it up.
Date: Dec 01, 2017 8:12 am Title: The Cotillion Smackdown
Loved this chapter. What a terrific pic of Michael in that suit. Great story.
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For and What You Pay For
The Peterson Women are going to be quite fetching in their orange dresses. (Please Say The Gloves and Shoes Match and Michael is in orange too? rofl)
Jenny and Lindsay didn't even care how hurtful they were being to Mel by excluding her entirely.
Kemi is a peach and does herself and her parents proud for being a sweet, caring understanding young lady by trying to soothe Mel's bruised heart.
Diamond Earrings? Damn that is a very classy and expensive Bitch Slap;)
Jenny was all set to go to the cotillion without Lindsay which shows how much her avarice has grown and how much she is Lindsay's demonic offspring. (I Still Think She Is Michael's too???)
I almost cried when Jennifer said Jenny could be presented but then I thought Jennifer is getting ready to Wasp Slap Lindsay and Jenny by showing them a world they will never be accepted in. (Love Jennifer :))
Then Ted giving Michael money hurt but him blindly signing away his collectibles as collateral is Genius, by having Reed call for the money, him paying and money removed from his account again he is ' Up A Creek Without a Paddle' When the loan is called in lol
Evil to stop there :(
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Nov 28, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For and What You Pay For
This is still not enough. I hope that they get more comeuppance.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 4:29 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For and What You Pay For
I thought at the last moment that Jenny couldn't go as Michael couldn't get a smoking. Ted is in "revenge" mode. I think he is quite vindictive and I totally agree regarding the risks Michael put Brian at.
The idea to have the dresses out of specification is genius: they have dresses, but they will be spotted in the crowd.
My only question is regarding the diamond for Gus: is there a new trend for guys to wear diamonds/earrings? If Gus is anything like his father, I don't see him get one. He doesn't need that to shine.
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For and What You Pay For
Can't wait for Ted to call in his loan. Let's face it, Lindsay and Jenny always wanted to stand out. Now they will. LOL.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 10:31 am Title: Be Careful What You Wish For and What You Pay For
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
Date: Nov 27, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Karma-Karma-Chameleon and Reading the Fine Print
I thought Lindsey was on the way to seeing the light about Jenny, but it didn't last. Mel on the other hand is fully aware and more dejected than before as now she knows Jenny is buying time.
Michael is in for big trouble, and not only financially.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:49 am Title: Karma-Karma-Chameleon and Reading the Fine Print
Lindsay and Jenny can act, too bad they aren't as convincing as they think.
What horrible plan has Lindsay Junior thought of to ruin the cotillion?
What plan does Lindsay have to get Jenny presented with Kemi And Kendi? (We All Know The Witch Has Something Up Her Sleeve!!!)
Gus spoke from the heart about how he feels when it comes to Lindsay's treatment of him and Jenny, only Mel listened Lindsay is just trying to figure out how she can work Gus staying with Brian and Justin to her advantage.
She overestimates her ability to hide her her disdain, loathing, hate and greed, while underestimating the power Justin and Jennifer have to crush her.
Mel is hopefully making plans to let Lindsay and Jenny deal with the Tsunami that is starting to pick up speed and is heading their way?
Michael is really not having a good day lol
Michael will hopefully call Brian because if Brian sees him he will end him with his bare hands.
We're getting closer to the cotillion right? :)
Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:06 am Title: Karma-Karma-Chameleon and Reading the Fine Print
Oh boy . I can't wait. Michael deserves whatever happens to him. Jenny needs a real breakdown.
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Karma-Karma-Chameleon and Reading the Fine Print
I can't believe the change in Lindsay. Is it real or is she pulling our legs. How nice to see that Michael is getting some of what is coming to him.
Date: Nov 23, 2017 9:01 pm Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Mel is really great and fair in this story: I love that.
If Ted is going after Michael, it will be hard and painful: Ted is very protective of Brian.
Date: Nov 23, 2017 4:35 pm Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Wow, what a mouth on the 12 year old! Jesus...I at least tried to not swear in front of my parents, I'd get a slap lol Mel is definitely trying to educate & inform Jenny of the correct way of doing things but she's still not getting it. I really hope for her sake, Jenny gts a clue.
And boy, is Michael is trouble! Everyone is going to want to kill him lol
Date: Nov 23, 2017 7:47 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Oh wow.