[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2017 12:59 am Title: Seeing the Green
I just knew Lindsay's good behavior couldn't last long she can't stand when the attention is not on her.
And now that Jenny has seen the error of her ways and is trying to make amends, Lindsay is trying to insinuate herself in Justin's pregnancy which could get her head chopped off if she doesn't back off.
I don't think Lindsay is ready to deal with a pregnant Justin Taylor or the rest of them family who are itching to give her a beat down that will make Michael's look like a love tap.
Lindsay is lying and trying to pull Jenny back down to her level, but Jenny is refusing to get sucked in Lindsay's vortex ever again.
Jenny wanting to go back to military school is good and if Lindsay doesn't want to change then they can move on without her.
If Lindsay was willing to supply Michael with Justin's number then she is willing to supply Michael with other information as well.
Why is she suddenly team Michael again?
Hope Michael doesn't spend all his money in one place? lol
Is there a military school for adults cause Mel needs to ship Lindsay there ASAP.
Fantastic Updates :)
Date: Dec 26, 2017 11:37 pm Title: His Continued Scheming and Her Old Habits Dying Hard
Terrific chapter. A baby boy. That is fantastic.
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 6:24 pm Title: You Want Understanding...Understand This...
Having Jenny seen her behavior reflected back at her shows her whatever else sees when she acts like a Brat and tries to get her way.
It was a good test and a good reminder to think before she reacts in an evil way that hurts others.
Michael is still living in denial and he will be residing there All Alone without a safety net cause even Deb is walking away.
The statement is very good and as much as it will destroy Michael he will go back to denial and expect Brian or Deb to come in and save the day.
That taffy looks so good and I can understand why Brian and Justin are going to be craving it like crazy lol
Brian not going to the trial and focusing on his own happiness is good, Michael is apart of his past that he outgrew years ago, it's time to enjoy the present and live for the future with his family and friends.
Merry Christmas and Thanks for the Update <Big Hugs> :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 2:06 pm Title: You Want Understanding...Understand This...
So Mikey go told off good and still doesn't believe it. Poor Justin. Having to take something that doesn't taste good. Does Brian taking it mean there's another bun in the oven?
Date: Dec 24, 2017 7:45 am Title: You Want Understanding...Understand This...
That taffy recipe is amazing: I'm super hungry now!
Date: Dec 23, 2017 11:04 am Title: Times and People Change...or Not
The picture is amazing: where is it? Hamptons?
It's "hilarious" the way Michael is blaming Justin for all that happens in his life; he didn't pay the insurance nor his rent and he doesn't feel one bit responsible. His brain is wired in a weird way. Nature or nurture?
Author's Response:
Hey, it’s actually in Fox Chapel PA, the inside is gorgeous. And it is definitely nurture, which is why she had to walk away.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 23, 2017 7:30 am Title: Times and People Change...or Not
Finally Michael is were he belongs. And Jenny has opens her eyes and knows she wasn’t a nice girl. Hopefully she can change in a person, without the jealousy.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 2:00 am Title: Times and People Change...or Not
Nice to see that Michael stuff went to Red Cape and up in smoke. Does he actually think that Ted or his mother will help him?
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 1:48 am Title: Times and People Change...or Not
Jenny apologizing and going to counseling with her mothers and Gus is good, she is ready to own up to her part in her nasty behavior and make amends.
That house would make a good summer residence it looks beautiful just from the outside.
Michael and all his dreams are cinders he let everything go by the waste side because he was expecting Brian's money to save him, now he will see how being wicked and conniving comes with a Huge Payback.
Date: Dec 22, 2017 12:09 am Title: Times and People Change...or Not
Oh, Michael is getting just what he earned. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2017 3:05 pm Title: That is Not Okay...Let Us Show You Just How Much!
Oh my. Jenny has changed! Mikey is losing everything. Harrah!
Date: Dec 20, 2017 7:11 pm Title: That is Not Okay...Let Us Show You Just How Much!
All Michael's possessions and collectibles went up in smoke: that's one hell of a firework!
I can't wait to see how he will take that information.
Date: Dec 20, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Michael is such a dumb guy with the police!
I'm surprised by all the sobbing: Brian learned about what Michael intended to do and that's an awful information, but his reaction was weird. As for Jenny, who started all this by calling Michael: how could she change her mind this drastically? Even Mel's reaction is very strong: she knew that Jenny was with Michael; he wouldn't have hurt her, thinking she was his daughter.
Author's Response:
This is Michael we are talking about. As for the reactions, Jenny didn't tell Mel where she was that's what scared her, who she was with makes no odds, especially even though Michael wouldn't harm Jenny if Mel tried to find out from him where they were he wouldn't have told her and thought she wouldn't have gone to the police either. They were geared for him taking her on Monday as he told Norbert in the bank...he was the bank clerk remember? As for Brian's reaction, he found out about what Michael intended at the police station and being Brian was holding it together for everyone else, when he got home and could process the fact that his best friend wanted to have him raped it hit him hard...as it would anyone.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 20, 2017 4:58 am Title: That is Not Okay...Let Us Show You Just How Much!
Oh boy !Michael got fucked hard. goody goody goody.
Date: Dec 20, 2017 4:17 am Title: That is Not Okay...Let Us Show You Just How Much!
So happy Michael is getting what he deserves. Good chapter. Glad that Jenny is going to be ok. Just love this story. Happy Holidays to you.
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 4:07 am Title: That is Not Okay...Let Us Show You Just How Much!
Michael really hasn't grasped how much trouble he is in and that no one is coming to rescue him.
He has caused so much pain with his thoughtless behavior and it will take some time for everyone to move on.
His store and his precious toys are gone he doesn't have enough money to bail himself out or stop what is about to happen with his case.
Jenny knowing the truth and seeing that she has to change is good, she willing went back to school so she will never be like Michael.
When she next sees everyone her apology will be sincere and everyone will start to like her again.
But first Jenny had to learn to like and respect herself.
Thanks for the Update :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Michael hung himself so good by waiving his right to remain silent and to have an attorney present.
Stupid Is, As Stupid Does <shakes head>
Jenny heard everything Michael said?
Michael declaring himself the better parent because he is there for Jenny.
He was the Drop In Dad who only showed up to get Brian's attention or side with Jenny, he wasn't really involved her life because she was just another stepping stone to the prize he covered the most.
Brian being surrounded by everyone who loves him is good and keeps him from going to the jail to kill Michael.
Lindsay coldcocking Michael is Hilarious.
Jenny is finally seeing that her actions have consequences and for once she is ready to face it.
Perhaps Jenny is finally ready to change her wicked ways??
Superb Updates for both of your stories :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Making a Move...A Stupid One, But a Move
Michael and his money will soon be parted and it won't be for his stupid toys!
Love that he wants to "Play Daddy" except when it comes to paying child support.
Thank Goodness Jenny isn't really his!!!
Jenny calling Michael crying abuse makes me to scream.
Michael is tightening the noose around his own neck because he doesn't think before he reacts.
Perhaps Gus will finally get his little brother and there will be no long needle near Justin and Sunbeam.
Date: Dec 19, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Making a Move...A Stupid One, But a Move
Ted is a really nice guy: I always wonder what would kind of couple he would have made with Michael. Though, in this story, he might just want to smack him and forget about it.
Date: Dec 19, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Let's Go To The Hop...Part 2 and A Very Bad Bad Bad Idea
The bikes are really beautiful!
If Michael thinks he can get Jenny out, he should think twice: if only he had a brain that would work.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Let's Go To The Hop...Part 2 and A Very Bad Bad Bad Idea
Those rings are Beautiful!!
Brian and Justin have Great taste in jewelry and partners :)
Michael is getting upset over Nya spending her money on a car she can afford when he is dropping $4000 on toys?
Bitch Please!!!!
Gretchen is quite the matchmaker and a very good friend to those she cares about.
By Friday Deb, Carl, Jennifer and Gregory should be ready to double date lol
Nya and Earl were smart to put the word out that everyone avoid Red Cape Comics to punish Michael.
Kiki is so Evil... Gotta Love That About Her :)
Jenny calling Michael is not surprising just that it took her so long, Michael taking Jenny out of school is not good.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Now we get to the meat of this story which is sooooo good. Michael hasn't a leg to stand on once he regains conciseness. And Jenny turned around, she's finally realized what a douse she's been? Amazing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 2:44 pm Title: Making a Move...A Stupid One, But a Move
Let me guess - buying toys? So the little beamer might be a boy. Gus will be happy.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 2:31 pm Title: Let's Go To The Hop...Part 2 and A Very Bad Bad Bad Idea
We learned a lot in this chapter. Now I know why Ted was in Baton Rouge. It's going to lead to something important soon.
Date: Dec 19, 2017 11:35 am Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Oh what a fantastic chapter. Michael is truly the idiot of the century and your imagination did that. You are a wonderful writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy Holidays.