[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 26
Justin's conflicting emotions about having his mother and Molly at the wedding is understandable they both let him down for selfish reasons.
Molly is taking the effort to make amends to Justin and she is willing to wait for him to forgive her.
Now it's Jennifer's turn to make the effort words just won't cut it with Justin and Brian's motto is Actions Speak Louder Than Words.
Craig is going to be running f poo r h I s life when his friends find out they are about to be hit with some hefty lawsuits from their unwanted children and from their wives when they find out.
Law firms are going to be so busy lol
Wonderful Update:)
Date: Apr 15, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
What a family! None of them is better than the other.
I hope Jennifer will be able to show Justin that she has changed.
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2018 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
It's so good that Molly has come to the right decision.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yes! You've given us another excellant chapter and I can't wait for more.
Date: Apr 09, 2018 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Will always stick with you. You are an amazing writer and I am always happy when you can update. Hope RL treats you better.
Date: Apr 09, 2018 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 25
Hmmmmm. Is Marshall finally getting throught ot Molly? I hope so for her own sake, if not Justin's.
Jen has MUCH to prove. Hopefully she doesn't expect much, at least not for a time yet. It won't be instantaneous that's for sure.
Justin and Michael are a hoot in this! Scheming together rather than at each other. I like those too!!! but this sied of them is fun.
Another great chapter!
thanks
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Kinda sucks when real life invades your writing time.
Molly has some hard truths to work out in her mind.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Molly heard what Marshall, Jennifer and Brian had to say but will she listen and try to make amends with Justin?
Marcus and Tonya Taylor are The Petersons just with less money and clout.
Craig wasted his breath talking to Justin who doesn't need or want his approval, Justin is a strong independent man with too much integrity to fall for such childish antics.
With Cynthia in charge Taylor Electronics will actually be profitable and have customers flowing in, instead of money flowing out so often.
Michael and Justin are going to get Joan Brian is just delaying the inevitable now lol
Don't mind waiting for updates your stories are so Enthralling ;)
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 24
I imagine Mel having hormones messing with her system: that should be funny to read about.
Joan didn't dare taking Justin's proposal: how could she face her church with all the things she has done or let others do to Brian.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2018 1:40 am Title: Chapter 24
I'm certain that Joanie doesn't get it and won't be getting anything any time soon. Nice of Mikey to get food for Justin.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 24
Not surprised Claire wanted the money but am surprised Joan wouldn't accept the deal since she enjoys drinking so much and alcohol isn't cheap.
If Justin wasn't being so hormonal I think he would have went for his own cheeseburger and fries lol
Proud of Brian for stopping the money to Joan and Claire now she can put in her application at Big Q.
I can honestly say I feel bad for the kids having to deal with Joan and Claire, now they need to be saved before they become anymore worped by those two-faced cows!!
Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 24
Great update. Maybe that will get Joan & Claire out of their lives. Love the story line.
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2018 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 23
Is Lindsay playing games again?
A hundred thousand dollars?
Craig will need more than that when yeahs to deal with these lawsuits coming his way, hope he didn't put his house in Justin's name too, sounds like Taylor Electronics will be needing a new board too.
Not surprised Craig was being shady with the profits he is more underhanded than a snake which is a insult to snakes everywhere..
Justin is smart to change his will and POA to Brian it guarantees that Molly will have no one but Craig to rely on as the ship continues to sink around them.
Gus wanting Justin to share his custody with Brian shows just how smart that little boy is and how he sees Justin as his Papa is the sign that despite some they are a Family Forever:)
Date: Mar 18, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 23
Love this story. It is a different way of seeing Brian & Justin and you are doing it so well.
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2018 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 23
Gus is so intellegent and Mel has mellowed. Love how Craig found out he no longer owns Taylor Electronics.
Date: Mar 18, 2018 8:13 am Title: Chapter 23
Craig fired by what he considered a bimbo: that's golden!
Justin becoming Gus' papa, that's wonderful!
Date: Mar 10, 2018 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 22
Another wonderful chapter. I'm really liking this Michael. Hopefully Ben will soon admit to himself that he doesn't know Justin as well as he thinks he does.
Justin's grandparents are a lot of fun, too! Craig will soon get what's coming to him along with Paula and hopefully Molly!
Maybe Wendy will see that she was just a tool in Craig's life, same as Jennifer. He got what he wanted, she should give him what he deserves!
Love how Justin is trying to talk Brian into taking a vacation to Atlantis! I'm thinking he will probably win that battle. LOL!
Looking forward to more!
*Hugs*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2018 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 22
Frankly I'd put Wendy in charge. A double whammy.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2018 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 22
Putting Cynthia in charge of Taylor Electronics will so chaff Craig's Ass he would hate seeing a woman with more backbone taking his business and actually making it successful.
Plus he can't intimidate or seduce Cynthia since she has taste and standards, plus Molly stepping up to Cynthia should be quite amusing cause Cynthia will be able to twist that little girl in so many knots she'll be able to kiss her own Ass twice lol
What would throw everyone including the press would be if Brian had a bump along with Justin, Drew, Emmett, Ted, Blake, Michael and Ben it would really up the ante and keeping everyone away from Justin will the baby grows rofl
So is everyone coming to Atlantis?
:)
Date: Mar 10, 2018 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 22
Craig doesn't know what will hit him and who will be behind!
Date: Mar 04, 2018 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 21
Drew and Emmett could take the light off Justin so he could get time to savour what he saw and heard at the hospital.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2018 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 21
Everything is working out and soon Justin will have proof that he is not the father of Paula's baby. In the meantime he's gonna eat as much as he wants.
Date: Mar 03, 2018 9:42 am Title: Chapter 20
Yeah, Drew is back! And so bothered... It's great that Emmett and Drew are finally together again.
Molly is such a pest! I'm not even sure this is strong enough to define her. The result is that she's losing her job, her reputation, for what? Because she wasn't n°1 in her brother's life anymore? Such a wrong choice if this is the only reason.
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2018 4:19 am Title: Chapter 20
Looks like Molly and Paula got the message. So did Emmett and Drew.
Date: Mar 03, 2018 3:37 am Title: Chapter 20
Don't know him but I like Lawrence and the way he works.
Brian's threat to Paula didn't do as much as Justin's good bye to her. Go Justin.
Go Drew. Yay Em. Nothing bothers them more than being apart.