Date: Jul 08, 2018 2:02 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION
OMG- I missed this chapter. After I quit hypervenilating and could read it, I feel so much better. hjahahhaha
Deb is gaining insight. I never thought I'd see the day. I'm rather happy about that. I'm also happy that she seems to realize that a simple apology won't fix everything. It's good that she is working on it for herself. She certainly needs the insight and perspective. Loved this part.
Michael....I loathe him. He is beyond screwed up. Mentally, emotionally, he is so off the rails. I don't even know what I would do to him. What would be enough? I shall contemplate that. :)
As for Brian's speech at Kinnetik - oh, yes....I'm excited to begin, too. He lit a fire. Exciting times ahead.
Thanks, thanks, thanks.....
Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:15 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION
Impressive speech! I hope it will have given energy to everybody.
Deb seems to be on the right path and disconnecting from Michael, who is moving on his next plan, even when Lance tells it's a bad idea...
Great story!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 12:58 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION
I do so look forward to each new chapter. This one had a little of everything. Brian and Justin motivating their employees. Deb realizing her mistakes. And Mikey being a shit. Will Lindsay help? Are will she turn against Michael like everyone else? Only you know.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 9:28 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION
Kinnetic is really born. t's nice that Deb understands what she's done to the boys except Michael all these years. Lindsay in prison she has already lost her rights to Gus no? Let's see Michael and his twisted ideas! Too bad for Lance he does not look so bad.
Date: Jul 08, 2018 8:44 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION
Please tell me that Michael isn’t trying to get Lindsay to sign custody of Gus over to him....and please tell me she isn’t going to be dumb enough to do it. I don’t see that going over very well at all, and if whiny boy thinks he can force Brian to choose to be with him or lose Gus he has another thing coming.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 5:08 pm Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
All Praise Kinnetik!!!!!
Brian, Justin and everyone else are about to blast off and when they get down, no one will be able to touch them.
What or Whoever Michael plans to use to distract Brian and Justin will just end up with egg on their faces along with Michael.
This plan has as much chance of succeeding as Michael does of actually getting Brian to fall in love with him <shudders> or Lindsay does of Brian loving her.
So Michael was planning on stealing Deb and Vic's wills and having it reworked so he gets everything?
Love that he thinks he has the right to just come into his mother's house, he doesn't own it because he never paid for it!
Deb did not come running to rescue Michael...Perhaps she really is ready to change??
Lance coming to Pittsburgh is perfect time to put his head on the chopping block and find out how more deeply involved he is with Michael's schemes.
Date: Jul 07, 2018 1:27 pm Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Wow! That's a nice little development! I hope Kinnetik can handle it but I'm sure they can. Ted & Dale sound...fun! lol And Michael, well, what else is new...he's a fucking idiot!
Date: Jul 07, 2018 11:48 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Woohoo it’s time for Kinnetik yay omg Michael for fuck sake get a fucking clue!
Date: Jul 07, 2018 10:02 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Wow, wow, wow !!!!! I have to say that you are definitely back to the height of your writing. As I read this, I realized something that I will tell you as truth and not to make you feel good, your writing of Brian and Justin excels what the writers of the series ever did. You have found a way to make them so much more real than just characters. You have given them heart and soul which is not easy to accomplish especially when taking over from what someone else started. And, not only Brian & Justin but each of the other characters as well. Never doubt yourself, Nichelle, you are a fantastic writer and prove it more and more. They say there is a reason for everything and perhaps having health issues to conquer, have in some way made you even stronger. Whatever it is, bask in the sunlight for you have earned it. If ever given the chance, the COWLIP writers would praise your work and be jealous.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 8:56 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Daphne and Cynthia will make a good team they are motivated and know Brian and Justin very well. Go Kinnetic is ready. What did Michael invent again? Great chapter.
Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:52 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
I love the way Ted is building his confidence, thanks to Dale.
If Daphne is as good as Cynthia, the foursome is going to accomplish amazing things.
What devious plans are you planning in Michael's head?
Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:03 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Ted is such a happy little fish with Dale around. A whole new him. And he has a streak of gleeful mischief that he's enjoying.
Ha, Mikey got caught with his hand stuck in the cookie jar and no mommy to help him out. Boo hoo. Whatever Michael may be planning is nothing compared to what will be waiting for him when he shows up in court. He will be showing up in court I don't doubt that. Lance really should stay where he is because he's going to be dragged through the muck Michael is making. I wonder if they'll put friends in the same jail cell.
Brian's and Justin's new company is going to flourish. I wouldn't be surprised if Craig Taylor showed up, not realizing Kinnetik is Brian's and Justin's company. Cherry on the top of the sundae.
Date: Jul 07, 2018 5:09 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Learn from Stephen, his story was harder than yours. No matter what she attempts to try and get herself back to who she was, it's going to take a lot of inner strength to keep michael at bay. I hope she's strong enough.
Brian and Justin may eventually try and forgive her, some time way down the line, but never forget.
Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:43 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
Bravo! Another great chapter. I love the thought of them being an extreme power couple. It's fun to think of them running Kinnetik together. I just love them. Thanks for all the ups and downs this story has given me. It keeps me entertained.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:04 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK
I think Deb is ready to come back into the fold. Michael thinks he's got something up his sleeve, but I don't see it succeeding. Kinnetik is coming into it's own in a big way.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 8:56 pm Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Wow, Debbie’s getting a second chance to live the life she left behind. And Michael’s being left behind to wallow in his own making. Maybe with time Deb will be forgiven and she’ll be stronger in the end. I loved the last few chapters, can’t wait for more! Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 5:20 pm Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
After hearing Stephen's story Deb is realizing that her life was headed down that same path, because Michael would left everything on her and ran like the little coward that he is.
Deb can't only use the excuse she sacrificed to give Michael a better life for so long until everyone is ready to break the record, she allowed herself to be manipulated then turned around to manipulate others, when would it have ever stopped??
This week is about reflection and self-discovery Deb needs this time to see that she has choices to make for herself and that Michael has to stop being the center of her world.
Deb also needs to figure out out to be around people without trying to control their lives, and that when people say no it is not a declaration to run over them.
Plus forgiveness is earned not demanded and that it takes time to earn others respect, especially after spending years hurting them for others selfish reasons.
Plus Deb needs to build up her walls to face Michael again cause he is going to use every trick in his book to get her to bend to his will.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 3:11 pm Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Turning point for Debbie: she seems doing well; if she remains away from Michael, she should achieve what they expect from her.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 12:41 pm Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Great update. Glad that Debbie is getting a chance to be rid of the pest.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 12:41 pm Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
I am so glad that this will work out for Deb, truly! I always thought that she was allowing herself to be controlled by shit for brains. One day at a time, step by step...she will better herself.
Honestly, I wish there were people like Alex & Stephen in my own life...
Date: Jul 06, 2018 10:46 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Wow! What a chapter. I do hope Deb can let Michael go and redeem herself.
Poor Stephen. That's terrible.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 9:21 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
I hope Deb really opened his eyes to Michael's manipulation. If she takes the right path all her boys will help her I think.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 5:35 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT
Hope she takes Stephen's words to heart and not just play act for the week she's there.
Once Michael finds her there's goingg to be hell to pay. Michael better get ready to empty his pockets.
I hope she does all the changing for herself and not just to get back into Brian's and Justin's good graces.
Date: Jul 06, 2018 4:54 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Wow I do hope Deb does stay on a path back to herself instead of the domestic violence victim Michael has subjected her too.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 4:28 am Title: BRACING FOR IMPACT Part 2
Looks like Debra Jane Grassi has seen the light.