[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2019 2:01 pm Title: Twinkle Shines Bright and Brian Turns His Beam On
They are working at the diner? I would be afraid to eat there unless it were free. Michael wouldn't know clean unless it bit him on the ass and Lindsay will undoubtedly break plates. Not to mention, does Mrs Cameron even know how to cook?
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2019 12:46 am Title: Circling
Finally caught up on all stories. Sorry it took so long. I love each of them. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 4:40 am Title: Circling
Can't believe Lyndsay being anything nice. What game is she playing at? Good thing, Gus and Jenny didn't fall for it. As Always Michel needs to shut his whiny mouth & learn discipline. Even in Qaf, He never respected others privacy.
I feel for Brian & Justin. They really needs get out of the reach of those idiots trying to test their sanity. Baggie will chewed David out, if there anything left after Slick done with him.
Thankyou for the updates.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2019 3:50 pm Title: Circling
Lindsay wants to help Lynette get back at David?!
Yeah right, more like she wants to get back at him for seducing her in prison then marrying her mother instead, Lindsay never does anything for anyone unless it benefits her first, she like Nancy treated Lynette like she was beneath them now she s trying to bond with Lynette?
Bitch Please! I Don't Trust Lindsay As Far As I Can Throw Her!
She seems real heartbroken that Gus and Jenny Hate her.
Michael is going to get a beatdown from Edna if he don't watch himself and it will be Hilarious and very memorable especially if it is recorded.
Baggie Is Too Much!I
But Brian is becoming stronger at discipline.
But he and Justin need a break from all the stupid antics of selfish people perhaps a vacation is called for once they are all in their proper place.
David has as much chance of getting Brian as Michael and Lindsay does he needs to get over himself and settle for Nancy she is literally the best he can ever do gay or straight.
Oh The Plot Sickens!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2019 12:00 pm Title: Circling
Is Lindsay changing her ways? Baggie will protect Brian so David better not come sliffing around.
Date: Oct 10, 2019 11:50 am Title: Judgement and His Folly
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 5:25 pm Title: Judgement and His Folly
I only just realised the title of the previous chapter. Superb play on words - gave me a little chuckle!
Still loving all your stuff. Esp fond of 'bashed' and 'howl' at the moment.
Ta
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2019 6:41 am Title: Judgement and His Folly
Someone gonna get his judgement soon. Lindsay confusing me though. David attention diverted, so means Justin safe now. Looking forward to More. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 1:09 pm Title: Judgement and His Folly
I'm a little confused but in a good way. So enjoying all your stories!
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2019 2:01 pm Title: Lynette and Casper...David's Very Unfriendly Ghosts
Great update. Oh, how they never learn. Wonderful writing.
Date: Sep 27, 2019 11:18 pm Title: Lynette and Casper...David's Very Unfriendly Ghosts
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 2:09 am Title: Lynette and Casper...David's Very Unfriendly Ghosts
Mikey lost his money, Lindsay lost her dignity, David is married to Nancy which is bad enough.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:20 pm Title: Lynette and Casper...David's Very Unfriendly Ghosts
I agree, Lindsay & Micheal Are the most bad excuses of friends. They made Brian miserable for their idiotc, selfish fantasies. Thanks God, Justin and Gus came in Brian life.
Have Edna fun with them washing their nasty mouths with Very dirty rags.
Blissful scene of Britin. Enjoyed it. â¤
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 6:30 pm Title: Lynette and Casper...David's Very Unfriendly Ghosts
I would almost be proud David was fighting back against Nancy but I couldn't care less what happens to him concerning Nancy as long as he loses everything that is precious to him.
Edna is so going to make Michael suffer which is just great because for each second of pain he has caused others he should come back on him times 3 and hopefully karma will do the same for David, Nancy and Lindsay.
Did Brian change his will again after marrying Justin?
Well that explains why Lindsay was so determined to keep Brian around while also making him suffer.
Makes me wonder if she tried to get a loan against the insurance policy?
And why she was spending the support payments that were for Gus and only Gus.
My Goodness Karma is gearing up to party and stomp the night away lol
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2019 10:10 pm Title: All Aboard!
Great updates. Oh Mikey & Linds just never learn. Wonderful writing
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 5:47 am Title: All Aboard!
I Love how Brian, Justin, Slick & everyone having fun at house.
It Seems Edna gonna teach Lindsay & Michel to behave properly. Nancy needs to thinks first and then speak. Cameron & Micheal should ready for their well deserves trouble. Great.
Enjoyed reading it. Kudos to your wonderful writing. :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 5:33 am Title: Ring of Truth
If Micheal want impress, seems he isn't in good in Metthias book. Michel on Rags? fits though as he gets upset over anything that doesn't go according to him.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 4:36 am Title: All Aboard!
Love how the grusome twosome plans are not working out.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 4:22 am Title: Ring of Truth
I seem to have missed why Michael needs pads. Interesting concept.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2019 6:23 pm Title: All Aboard!
Oh Edna Fey is going to have some fun messing with Michael and Lindsay and she should because they deserve it.
So they have proof Michael stole and pawned Deb's ring and they have his six grand so what will be do for money now?
Nancy and Lindsay should know better than to go up against Elspeth she is 3xs the Lady they will be on a good day.
George spoiling Emmett is so sweet.
David helping Michael should Ron him if his license to practice medicine anywhere, how did David make his money?
Carlton going to school to better himself is something that would've never occurred to Michael, Lindsay, Nancy or David these four peas in a pod deserve each other and everything headed their way.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2019 6:09 pm Title: Ring of Truth
Michael is not having a good twenty-four hours and I don't think then few hours are going to get any better lol
So the money is in a safe place with Michael's grubby fingerprints all over every bill and will be added to his charges later?
Author's Response:
Spoiler-non-spoiler...oh hell yeah re the charges!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2019 12:28 am Title: Ringing in Changes...
Good update. Love how this story is moving along. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:28 pm Title: Ringing in Changes...
Sending Michael back to jail will be easier than shooting fish in a barrel he is beyond stupid that he sets himself just by breathing.
So he pawned Deb's ring huh? A-Hole!!!
The Avenue sending Michael back to Coventry is so much fun.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:27 pm Title: Ringing in Changes...
I put in a ten.
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:27 pm Title: Ringing in Changes...
Why when I click on submit does my rating change to none?