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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:25 pm Title: Ringing in Changes...

Tut, tut.  Mikey doesn't seem to think.  Blackmail doesn't go down well.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 9:23 am Title: Food for Thought

"Mrs. Miller fox. That's her name. Kindly use it." Phillips orders

"My apologies, no offence meant." She grimeces

"Not Accepted and a lots taken." Slick retorts.

This line got me. lol ðŸ˜ Great!

Emmett gonna need a mallet to stop on Michel's interuptions.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 12:16 am Title: Food for Thought

Oh no, Michael is trying to resurface!!!  LOL  Great chapter.  Terrific writing.  Love the dogs. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 3:53 pm Title: Food for Thought

I love the meeting between Emmett and George!

I also love how you are torturing "Nina" and her husband. Lindsay took also a great dressing-down.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 11:33 pm Title: Food for Thought

That Was Disgusting!

But I Do Hope Nancy and David enjoyed every Damn bite and asked for more will kicking their lips with relish. (I may skip that part when re-reading)

Lynette is finding her back bone and the inner strength Nancy and Lindsay tried to crush she is strong enough to make sure they pay by using the Wasp Code with some new rules added.

Emmett and George meeting is funny and sweet.

Carlton using Lindsay's narcissism to knock her down a bag or two will be fun.

Why The Hell Could Michael Possibly Want Besides His Cell Back and Those Swirlies?!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 1:15 pm Title: Food for Thought

Evidently David doesn't know that they know who and what he is.  It's nice that George met Emmett, things are looking up on that front.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2019 6:44 pm Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

Why not send Lindsay, Nancy and David back to Coventry Wasp Style?

They want to be in the thick of everything so let them be but don't say anything important in front of them talk about recipes or shows, Hell talk sports.

Let them be invited out to important lunches and dinners but withhold the juicy gossip but still drop few mouthwatering tidbits all lies of course.

It will keep them occupied trying to get back into the nest that come the Big Party they won't see the beat down coming until it is too late.

Tom and George should all make sure their lawyers have amended their wills so neither Lindsay or Nancy can fight or their share of try to hurt Lynette by coming after her.

Is it possible Lynette isn't infertile except psychology perhaps the trauma has kept her from having a baby because it wasn't just David that hurt her but Nancy's treatment scarred her too and she is afraid of turning out like Nancy or Lindsay??

Just a few suggestions to brighten your day 😆

 



Author's Response:

And once more you have come to my rescue! 

Happy reading!

Big hugs MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2019 9:39 pm Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

What an evil cliffhanger!

It's delightful to read how Nancy envies her daughter's life and surroundings.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 2:50 am Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

Oh,no cliffhanger, but a really good chapter.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 7:58 am Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

Lindsay & Nancy getting what they deserved means *NOTHING. Still trying for their greed. Well, soon both will be joining Micheal in screeching, whining department, like Micheal right now.

Relief to know Idiots can't use Annabee. Interesting plot going on. Loved ASMR scene between Brian & Justin. Hot!

Who are the mystery guests. Seems Lindsay might be in (not good for her & Mikey) for a Big surprise.

Wonderful update. ☘:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 6:39 pm Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

So much going on.  Just who are the people that Matthias has invited to move in.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 6:03 pm Title: The Queen's Speech and a Little ASMR

Nancy who is barely a Wasp should know that respect is earned not give freely without conditions, David has as much of a shot earning Lynette and Oliver's respect as she does of being a Wasp Queen.

Lynette doesn't have to respect the man who raped her or the woman who blamed her for getting raped in the first place.

Oliver, Ronald, George, True Friends and New Family deserve her respect while Nancy and David deserve to lose everything and sit in the gutter with Lindsay and Michael right beside them.

Carlton signing over his rights is just the peace everyone needed cause their child is safe while Lindsay and Michael have no leverage or power except in the pea inside their head.

Lindsay and Nancy seriously would make excellent gophers but the would make sure any paperwork they are handed is as important as a take out menu, no reason for these people who are trying to improve their lives to be used Mommy Bitch and Princess Bitch or Daddy Dickless.

Having Carlton and Edna there to throw Lindsay for a loop should be funny and Carlton can help distract Michael so Matthias can get a break from the leech.

David shouldn't cringe when he has to sleep with Nancy that is the price you pay when you marry someone old to be your own Mommy and her twat has seen more usage than a greyhound bus has more destinations, if he had married Lindsay he would be with a Whore who sends more time on her back than she ever did you get children and her knees are only used for bending.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 12:53 pm Title: And He Really Shouldn't Have...But She Does

This was great.  The doggie made it perfect.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 5:47 pm Title: And He Really Shouldn't Have...But She Does

Ah ah ah! The dog and the bag!!! I don't know if it's a classic move for dogs, but it suits Michael all right.

I can't wait to see how Lindsay is going to try getting into the board.

How stupid Michael can be: showing the money to Lindsay is the recipe for its disappearance.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 7:52 am Title: And He Really Shouldn't Have...But She Does

Proud of Baloo. Micheal shit stinking personality coming out in waves. Why did Ben need to ask him seeing him still running after Briaaaannnn. What is Lindsay trying to do? Hope she get thwarted again.

Beautiful writing. Thankyou for updates. ⭐

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:49 am Title: And He Really Shouldn't Have...But She Does

So easy to catch these flies even with vinegar and salt they will consistently do stupid things while thinking they Are being clever smh

Michael stole a very valuable being and pawned it I do hope there is video of him saying that and Lindsay's look of glee thinking she has the ammunition to send Michael away?

Lindsay being involved with the EOHOPS board should be interesting especially when she has to be the example of what not to do and fetch things for everyone else who actually have ppower to help others who deserve it.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 7:07 pm Title: And He Really Shouldn't Have...But She Does

Surely dealing with stolen items should get Mikey in trouble.  Can Lindsay work with members of the board if she has restraint order against her?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2019 6:39 pm Title: This is The Deal...And Well Yes He Does!

Whoa, two weddings? Michael is going to be nuts!

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Date: Jun 29, 2019 6:22 pm Title: Flocking of the Feathers Lead to Grandmom...Who Knows Best

It's a small world: glad to see that the father has not intention of claiming Annabee. What a disaster it would be.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2019 12:21 am Title: This is The Deal...And Well Yes He Does!

Great chapter. Oh, Mikey is just so annoying. Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:14 pm Title: This is The Deal...And Well Yes He Does!

Michael making demands is not surprising but him thinking he won't get his Ass handed to him is an Ass-kicking can be very subtle when done the right way.

Justin is very smart to add their own conditions because Michael will just sign them deal with the consequences later, having David as an accomplice unbeknownst to him will help to strengthen the case to have him in a cell too.

I would also add that Michael has to pay back every cent Brian and Deb gave hi.going back years and if he refuses to pay then his precious collection becomes the property of Brian and Deb without delay.

Now if only they could get Lindsay to r th a similar piece of paper that says she has to pay back every cent Brian gave her going back years and if she doesn't pay it back in a certain time then she has to forfeit something she covers more than Brian immediately.

Twinkle is brilliant and Thankfully Very Organized!

Ben and Robin are Getting Married?! YES!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:51 pm Title: This is The Deal...And Well Yes He Does!

The shock factor?  Did Michael's head explode?

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Date: Jun 12, 2019 7:31 am Title: Flocking of the Feathers Lead to Grandmom...Who Knows Best

Edna in Town & so is Grandma. Poor Lindsay ButT she deserves it. It will be fun to read More. Great!:)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:00 pm Title: Flocking of the Feathers Lead to Grandmom...Who Knows Best

Uh Oh Revenge Seeking Grandma Is In Town Lindsay should be begging to be sent back to jail and quickly!

But the surprise is always best when it is a sneaky surprise so perhaps Edna would like to get dolled up for a party in the kind of clothes Lindsay and Nancy could never afford to wear even if Ron was still paying the bills, in the meantime showing up in random places Lindsay will be will have her wondering if she is crazy and keep her a bit distracted will the father signs his rights away for Annabee.

Poor Annabee and her allergy good thing they were able to figure it out and she can be tested quickly and that Edna showed up.

Oh helping the guilty get to wear they belong has never looked funnier this party will be quite Legendary when all of them get through 😃



Author's Response:

Oh how I have missed you in my head, welcome back! 

Thanks lovely!

MissMerlot



Author's Response:

Oh how I have missed you in my head, welcome back! 

Thanks lovely!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 4:04 pm Title: Flocking of the Feathers Lead to Grandmom...Who Knows Best

Wonderful writing.  Terrific chapter.

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