[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 1:52 pm Title: Flocking of the Feathers Lead to Grandmom...Who Knows Best
I am so looking forward to rereading this from the top when it's finished. With so many stories, it gets rather confusing.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 1:57 pm Title: Discussions and Revelations
You would think that Michael would get that NOBODY wants him around, but no he doesn't.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 8:06 am Title: Discussions and Revelations
This is the way Micheal should be treated "Nobody". Mikey even was a leech in show. I don't think Micheal ever like/love Ben more than timepass. As he always was running to Brian.
What is Micheal thinking again? Seriuosly. They have right to dare Mikey.
Happy for Jenny. Giving the Idiot a taste of his own stupidity.
Great update!! Kudos to your writing. â¤
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 5:32 pm Title: Discussions and Revelations
Oh Michael is just so evil. You write him so well. Terrific writing and chapter.
Date: May 28, 2019 4:20 pm Title: Discussions and Revelations
“Boner outfit.” Wonderful expression to describe Brian's clothes.
"brontosaurus rib": what an imagination!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 3:59 pm Title: Discussions and Revelations
Michael being treated like he treats everyone else who isn't important to him is very appropriate since he only noticed others when he is being Vile.
Michael dressing and drooling over Brian's clothes is all kinds of Creepy and makes me queasy too, not only should Brian burn those clothes but he should send the ashes to Michael.
Ben finally found someone who makes him Happy, Elated and Satisfied in every way.
Funny how Michael used the Daddy Card only to discipline Jenny but not to try to see her? smh
Can't Wait For Them All To Go Down!
Date: May 21, 2019 1:36 am Title: What!!
Terrific update. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 7:10 pm Title: What!!
I can't wait to read how Nancy will react to the news she's going to get about George! Does she already know that David is gay?
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 5:49 pm Title: What!!
Nancy is such a Skanky Ass Bitch but her need to control everyone and be seen as a pillar of virtue in the Wasp Nest will be her downfall and the downfall of her friends cause they need to share in this too.
Only a Vile, Heartless Cow would !party the man who raped her fifteen year old daughter years later, while for years blaming Lynette for what he did for years.
Nancy and David's humiliation deserves an audience with fantastic food and good alcohol too bad they aren't the one's paying for it, now that would be quite the event that no one in the country club will ever forget.
Lynette has Two loving fathers, a soon to be living mother and a man who will stand beside her and fight her battles with her, a child would be blessed to have these wonderful people in their lives.
George and Emmett How Cute!!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 1:46 pm Title: What!!
When I reread this story and I surely will, I'll have to make notes on who is who to whom.
Date: May 09, 2019 8:22 pm Title: More Warriors to the Cause
The dogs need serious training: though, they are greatly entertaining the way they are, at least to Justin.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 7:55 pm Title: More Warriors to the Cause
Wonderfull! Bet Nancy & Lindsay love *fuming mostly to know about Lynette dad.
Brian & Justin with their adorable dogs. Always a pleasure to read. Love it!!😊
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 5:22 pm Title: More Warriors to the Cause
Holy Smokes Lynette has Two Dads!
Ronald Peterson and Dr. George Shickle who are two very powerful men will make sure their daughter protected.
Nancy, Lindsay and David are going to flip their kids and it will be Hilarious!
Finding the dad is important but protecting Slick and her family is more important they have to give The Loser's Squad enough info th that they end up.chasing their tails, and a crumb to them is worth more than the whole meal because they will chase it until the end of time.
Brian and his puppies are funny!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 3:41 pm Title: More Warriors to the Cause
Oh I love the new storyline. Your writing is getting even better than the wonderful that it usually is. Fantastic.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 3:30 pm Title: More Warriors to the Cause
I didn't know George was a doctor. Love the doggies.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2019 12:02 am Title: Gathering Their Armies...
Great chapter. They just keep making the web bigger and bigger, but that keeps it interesting. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:06 pm Title: Gathering Their Armies...
Holy smokes won't Nancy be pissed that she has been replaced with a woman with more class in her pinky nail than she could have in her entire body, Ronald will finally know what it means to be happy and content with life's pleasures instead of dealing with misery.
David is about to learn that past deeds come back to bite you hard and marrying an old hag doesn't mean you have class, it just means you like munching on old, used, moldy fruit.
Lindsay has lost her kids, her dignity and self respect perhaps she is eager to lose her freedom again to?
Getting the car to sign over his rights before the others can find him gives The Moron Brigade one less thing to use against Slick, plus it would be good to tell him that he should get a nice sum from David if he asks for a bit more.
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[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:59 pm Title: Gathering Their Armies...
Ronald is so enjoying this new life and Nancy's game. Too bad he did stop the dog from chasing them outside.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:22 pm Title: Gathering Their Armies...
Questions, questions. Hope for answers soon.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 1:48 pm Title: Gathering Their Armies...
I like Ronald. Nancy & David are clueless idiots. Need to keep calm. Seriously the Dumb(D), Dumber(L) & Dumbest(M) are unbelieveable. Brian, Justin, Slick, Lionel should shove them hard from cliff, so MLD can't crawl back.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2019 8:51 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Thankyou for the reminder. I get it. :)
So What is Micheal & Lindsay upto...as usual no good. Still behave like he owes anything. Yupp! they are so gonna their nut head slapped. AND Yes Do the DNA test Mikey (I believe Lindsay lied again, cocked ugly with David maybe).
Bubba's arm awaiting for these fools Not before Micheal & Lindsay get a kick of a lifetime from Slick and Justin.
I just remember chapter 1 , that's why Brian wanted Justin to pinch him. right?
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:15 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Wonderful chapter!
Fan of David & Micheal getting smackdowns, them having shit fits.
Micheal is really not a father material. I mean I like Jenny But Mel actually have a child with Man-child. In Show as Micheal always depends on others to hold his pinky finger and help him. Truth is Reality is Bigger than Comic books Micheal. Grow up!
Thats smart of Slick and Lindon. Lets see who cause whom misery Mikey, take your responsibility , lol.
"....Baggie eat, I mean meet Micheal" 😠lol Brian should just sic Baggie & Ballo at Micheal and give Micheal a running of his guilty life.
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 5:44 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Slick and Lindon are about to play Who's the Real Father and of course need Lindsay in attendance so she can do her guppy impression while trying to figure out who Hit It, Quit It and Forgot It Existed (Again) while her face turns redder.
David should really stop acting like everyone wants him around and just accept that he is tolerated Barely and his stock is sinking every second.
Nancy on his arm isn't going to be a Wow it is going to be Kerplunk lol
Michael thinking Matthias wants him is about as funny as him not going back to prison why would anyone want dirt when they can have a seven course meal every night and it never gets stale?
Michael not caring or wanting to be around Jenny is not surprising he got bored because his toy broke through the box and found a better class of people to be around who actually care about her, plus she can't help him get to Brian so she is of no further use to him.
Can see why he and Lindsay are friends they not only share the same brain but the same icy dead heart when it comes to their children.
Karma has already served them twice the third time comes with champagne, fireworks and it looks like company too. ;)
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:38 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Hmmm, I thought Michael was not her father?
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
And he's not her father...but he doesn't know thst.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 3:26 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Ha ha ha, David and George! Hilarious!
As Brian thought: "What the hell are they working on?".
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.