Date: Apr 17, 2021 8:33 am Title: Chapter 47- Court Date
I keep trying to figure out what the girls are spending the money on. My current theory is a gambling addiction. 😳ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought of that option, but it is an intriguing idea- irony if they were spending money on an addiction while Brian is trying to conquer his.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2021 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 47- Court Date
Like how you managed to include Justin in this chapter. Mel thought she was smart, but the judge had her number.
Author's Response:
Justin is becoming an important part of Brian's life so he has to show up frequently. Mel is not as smart as she thinks she is.
Date: Apr 14, 2021 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 46- The Show
Brian did so well! Good job. TAG
Author's Response:
Brian was entertained by Molly and enthralled with the art work. He didn't have time to think about drinking.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2021 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 46- The Show
I am really enjoying this story. I wouldn't mind seeing more of Emmett and Ted and finding out how Mikey and Deb are viewing the change in Brian.
Author's Response:
So many people to write and so little time. I will be exploring some different relationships soon.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2021 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 46- The Show
As usual love this. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. So glad that you are enjoying the story.
Date: Mar 23, 2021 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 45- Meeting with Deb
Great to see Brian touching on the whole mindfulness topic and living in the moment. Excellent advice. TAG
Author's Response:
WE all should live in the moment- I think it would make life better.
Date: Mar 23, 2021 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 44- Sunday at the Museum
Love hearing about all the time Justin is spending wit Gus & his dad. TAG
Author's Response:
Justin is enjoying his time. Who knows where it will lead?
Date: Mar 23, 2021 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 42- A little Shopping Expedition
Brian cooking... what will happen next I wonder? Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Maybe he will have a family dinner.
Date: Mar 23, 2021 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 41- Progress
Cleaver Brian... TAG
Date: Mar 23, 2021 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 38- Lunch Anyone?
I love the way Brian handled Lindsey! TAG
Author's Response:
Yes, that is one of my favorite scenes.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2021 7:09 am Title: Chapter 45- Meeting with Deb
Brian's talk with Deb went well. Miss my Gus fix. I think now that Deb, Emmett, Ted and Blake know that Brian isn't abandoning Gus like the girls insinuate, Brian won't be blamed and the girls won't be believed.
Author's Response:
Debbie will probably stick up for Brian since she knows he won't lie to her. Gus will be back, I'm sure.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2021 6:47 am Title: Chapter 44- Sunday at the Museum
Brian thinking about his relationships now that he isn't drinking proved interesting. I'm looking forward to his talk with Deb and hoping that Mikey doesn't show up to harase him.
Author's Response:
Brian is very introspective in this story. He is taking the time to learn who he is and the reader gets to know him as well.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2021 6:11 am Title: Chapter 43- Actions and Reactions
Hugging can lead to other things.
Author's Response:
It is definitely a start of closeness
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2021 3:25 am Title: Chapter 45- Meeting with Deb
First of all, thank you for uploading the previous chapter once more; I could read it.
Secondly, the end had me fearing Deb's reaction because after the dinner, it could have changed her feelings towards Brian. The girls being cowards and not honest at all regarding Brian, it was obvious that they will charge him.
At first, I was surprised that Ted didn't say a word, but then, he knows that Brian wouldn't have liked it. But, Gus did and everybody knows that kids react in such situation, they don't act and lie. I'm surprised that he didn't mention Justin; that would have given a wrong cause to their meeting and Lindsay would have charged Brian with one more endangerment.
I liked the way Debbie looked at Brian and saw how healthy he was.
I think Melanie is still played by Lindsay and, as she can't help herself hating Brian, she won't search for the truth.
As for Justin and Brian relationship, it's still building, but there already are some "standards" in place: escape for better coffee, hugs, information given without incitation. Brian is definitely opening up.
I now fear for the next time Brian will try to get Gus from school; the girls won't let him trick them a second time.
Author's Response:
I think the issue with the last chapter was website error but I'm glad you got to read it. Ted is very protective of Brian and he knows all about everything that is going on behind the scenes. He might not want to talk for fear of saying things that Brian doesn't want made public. He also doesn't feel like he has to protect Brian as Brian can protect himself, ( ie going to pick up Gus rather than let the restraining order interfere with the pickup). Brian will have to address picking up Gus again as Lindsay won't be fooled again.
Date: Mar 20, 2021 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 1- Hi My Name Is Brian and I'm An Alcoholic
Just wanted to let you know the story posted correctly on the new server! Yay! (I'm still not caught up reading though so you'll have to wait for a substantive review.) TAG
Author's Response:
No worries. Read and review at your leisure
Date: Mar 12, 2021 9:33 am Title: Chapter 44- Sunday at the Museum
Hi, I can't read this new chapter. There is no text, while I see that there are 6000 words.
Please could you upload it once again ?
Thank you :)
Author's Response:
I think the site was misbaving. YOu can read it now and the next chapter.
Date: Mar 11, 2021 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 44- Sunday at the Museum
Thanks for the update. Enjoying the process.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 11:49 am Title: Chapter 43- Actions and Reactions
An interesting chapter with just the two of them. Can't wait to see how things go on the moro.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are getting closer, but they are still friends.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 5:16 am Title: Chapter 43- Actions and Reactions
I like this non-sexual relationship. Looking forward to where you take this story.>>>Cat
Author's Response:
Thank you. The muses will decide where it goes.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2021 3:15 am Title: Chapter 43- Actions and Reactions
Great update. So well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2021 3:57 am Title: Chapter 42- A little Shopping Expedition
Great chapter. I had just got caught up when I saw that you posted a new chapter. I will try to stay more current. This is such a great story and now the relationship with Gus and Brian has added so much to it. I am patient and will wait for the Brian and Justin part. I know it will come at the right time. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story. It is a slow burn ( as it were) and some of my readers are a little inpatient. Gus and Justin are getting to know each other and that is showing Brian an important relationship. Thanks for your patience.
Date: Feb 08, 2021 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 42- A little Shopping Expedition
Sweet chapter. Poor Muriel, Brian had better luck with his burgers than she did trying to weasle an invitation to join them. Ha!
Still think he should have invited Ted to the meeting.
Justin and Gus get along great. If things get serious between Brian and Justin, which I would like to see happen but may not, an established relationship with Gus would make things so much easier.
Brian should try spaghetti and meatballs next time. Almost the same recipe as the hamburgers. Can't really screw up the pasta and he can always buy organic sauce. Salad and garlic bread and he'd have it made.
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing Muriel and that scene. Inviting Ted would have made the meeting more robust; however, it would not have allowed Brian and Justin to have a private tet a tete. I love italian and this sounds great.
Date: Feb 08, 2021 6:35 am Title: Chapter 42- A little Shopping Expedition
As someone else mentioned, two years to get to 2 months sober. Any chance you’ll start updating more frequently?
Author's Response:
I typically update every two weeks. I work a full time job and also teach part time at the local community college. I may be able to post occasionally more frequently, but typically this is not possible. My goal is to finish the story soon, but I understand if you want to wait to read it when it is finished. It will most likely not take 2 years to cover another 10 weeks.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2021 1:42 am Title: Chapter 42- A little Shopping Expedition
Brian is a really good dad. He explains things and puts Gus first. Now if he could just involve Justin in the cooking that would be nice.
Author's Response:
Who knows, Justin may voluteer to cook in the future.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2021 1:30 am Title: Chapter 41- Progress
Sorry, I am just getting caught up with reading this. Has some peronal problems and took a while to get back into my reading. This story is amazing. I love it and your writing is wonderful. I can understand if you are slow at updating. Real life happens. Hope all is well with you. Keep writing and I will keep reading.