LMAO!!!!!! Yep, I'm sitting here laughing like a hyena that now Lindsay and Michael can't have ANY delusions left about just who Justin is. I have a feeling that baby or not, Lindsay is going to probably faint dead away because not only is Brian partnered with someone who is extremely talented and well-off, but because of the reality of her 'Trap Brian' game has officially been lost.

As for the Screech-mobile, well I could imagine that he will be depressed for days. Maybe even enough to give the Avenue's eardrums a much needed, and well-deserved break from his voice and presence. 

I can't wait to read MORE!! Great job!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Entertaining as always, Lori! I do love me some whiny Michael and manipulative bitch, Lindsay, any day.

Keep up the good work... and answer my email... okay?

XOXO  ~Cathy

Love this Brain.  Yeah for Mel .I always knew she had some balls,  she just didn't take them out to play. 

Oh this is brilliant, more please

Lindsay Is Endangering The Life Of Her Golden Ticket By Drinking Wine!

That Selfish Bitch!!!

I hope Melanie tells Brian immediately.

Justin isn't easily intimidated by Lindsay's entitled whiny and Brian isn't falling for Lindsay's tantrums.

Oh them meeting face to face is going to be Epic!! 

I wish Michael would shut p his voice peels paint and makes dogs cry.

Ted being the godfather is good because at least he will care about the baby which Michael never will (And never did on the show which was promptly ignored to further the story) and Ted would never use Brian's son to make stupid demands on Brian.

So Nancy wouldn't shell out a dime to celebrate her first grandchild that is so shocking.

Lindsay looking down her nose at everyone while trying to keep the attention focused on her makes my skin crawl like the way she treats Lynette, should worry about a sister you made into a enemy she might have some heavy dirt she would love to share over a drink.

Very inconsiderate of Deb to center the shower on Lindsay while ignoring Melanie who will also be the mother, just because she isn't carrying the baby doesn't mean her role she be forgotten.

Brian is not playing by either Michael or Lindsay's rules but he is creating his own.

Happy that he started his agency early.

Read all chapters and I love it.  Great idea for a different B & J story.  Wonderful writing.

So Lindsay only called to complain.  I think she's met her match.

So good. And Justin knows Lindsay already!!!

So very happy to see a story from you... I love the premise... and Samantha is great for inspiration... isn't she? When you said that about some instances might seem familiar... I really wouldn't worry about that, as MANY stories resemble each other.  e.g: the loft robbery... Michael stealing the Rage profits...

But, if a past story inspired you to write, more power to them. As long as you take that plot and put your own spin on it. GOOD LUCK!

NOW... I'm assuming Brian is based in New York... with his own Ad Agency? That's how it kind of read to me. And, I'm proud of him for seeing through Michael and Lindsay already. (Is there a back story to that?) Bt, for knowing all of Lindsay's manipulations... I'm surprised he actually donated! It will be interesting to see if he gives up his parental rights or goes for a third parent adoption. I'm thinking it's best to not give up those rights... he might have to fight Lindsay down the line.

I love his closeness and respect with Melanie and Ted. 

Looking forward to more...

HUGS  ~ Cathy

It's better and better I love to watch Lindsay and Michael make capricious kick and sulk, you describe them perfectly. And Brian buys a car for Melanie !! Is Brian already with Justin and live a quiet life without interference? I can not wait to read more.

Welcome to KD as a writer! You're already off to a great start on this. Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

This gets better and better.