




Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Loving this. Mikey with foot and mouth disease. Brian and Mel bonding. Great story line.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love your stories btw! the one where Justin comes back and help getting Brian of jail is one of my all time favs!





Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:39 am Title: Additional Information
Oh boy, the outline looks great. I can't wait to see where you take us.
Author's Response:
Hopefully its gonna be a good ride. Well at least in my head it looks like a very good one!
Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:29 am Title: Chapter 2
This is so good already. Thank you thank you. I love an anti Michael and Lindsay story. More more.
Author's Response: Im glad you're liking it! I'll be updating everyday, sometimes more than just once a day, depending on how much i manage to write. But more is coming tjat's for sure. Thanks for reading.
Date: Oct 16, 2019 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great......loved the first chapter and am looking forward to Justin being
introduced. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Justin is about to make an appearance. Let's say he's one chapter away!





Date: Oct 15, 2019 11:15 pm Title: Additional Information
A bit different. I like being told about the characters first.
Author's Response:
Yeah I wanted to define the parameters first. I hate it when I start reading and then realize I'm not going to like it because of something related to one of the characters. I feel like a full disclosurd helps the reader pick the stories that would interest him or her. I hope you're liking what you're reading
Date: Oct 15, 2019 10:35 pm Title: Additional Information
Looks like a good outline of characters, can't wait to see how the story goes. I have read Sammyscadoo's stories and loved them. Ready to read your story. I always love a good anti-Michael and anti-Lindsey story!!
Liz
Author's Response:
There is nothing better than a good anti michael and anti lindsay story. I'm always begging around for ones I haven't read. Hope you're enjoying!
Date: Oct 15, 2019 10:33 pm Title: Additional Information
Sounds like a very good premise for this story.
Best of luck!
Deb L
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you'll love it!
Date: Oct 15, 2019 10:23 pm Title: Additional Information
Welcome to KD! Glad to have a new writer!
Author's Response:
I hope you'll like it. It's my first story ever and I'm happy I finally decided to start writing!